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Hi i'm nikki sawyer just your american teenager. im not the popular girl although my beast friend is, and this is my story. I awoke to the sound of my brother Eric telling me to get up for school. I groaned, I didn't want to go to school today. I pulled the covers over my head and tried to ignore my brother. "come on Nikki, get up. don't you have a dance tonight?"

"Mmmhmm" I mumbled into my pillow.

"aren't you going?" He asked. I got annoyed so I sat up and yelled at him to get out of my room. he walked out of my room laughing and shaking his head. I heard him mumble "girls." as he walked out. I was wide awake now. "Oh joy." I mumbled. I got up, took a shower and got dressed. I went downstairs and grabbed a breakfast bar. as I was eating it, my brother asked if I wanted a ride to school I said no. that reminded me that Nessie wanted me to go to her house today. I asked my mom if I could go over to their house she said yes. you see Nessie is my best friend. Renesme is her real name but everyone just calls her Nessie or ness. she was the girl every girl wanted to be and every guy wanted to date. but she wasn't the snobby type she volunteered and gave to charity. i guess she was the most generous person in the school. I looked at the clock I was about to miss the bus. I got on and sat in the back.

I was looking at the houses as we went by then when I felt like I was being watched. i turned in my seat and saw Mikey Corkem looking at me funny. Mikey was the most annoying person on the bus. I asked him if he wanted something. "Yes." He answered.

"what?" I asked genuinely wanting to know what he wanted. He was usually horrible to me by now.

"want to go to the dance with me?" He inquired just as my best friend -other than ness - got on the bus. his name is Daniel but, everyone calls him dan. to tell the truth i have fallen for him. He has perfect russet brown skin and brown eyes a girl could fall into. He wore his hair long in a pony tail. the first day we met i asked him why and he replied "its what my tribe does. some tribes don't any more but we do." Then I told him i liked it and he blushed. he's part of the Abenaki Tribe. He heard what Mikey said and sat down without saying hi. "Mikey why would i want to go to the dance with someone who is always a jerk to me? so no." i turned back around and herd him say something along the lines of 'fine bitch anyone who doesn't want to go out with me is a freak.' my hands balled onto fists then dan said "Hey leave her alone you just mad that you cant get any girl in school to go out with you" mikey was silent.

"thanks." I said

"no problem. whats up?" he asked causally.

"nothing much" I said trying not to stare in his eyes. Whenever I do iI can't think straight.

"hey Nikki?"

"yeah?"

"your going to the dance right?"

"yeah why?" I hoped he would ask me to go with him.

"do you, ya know, if you want, um." This went of for awhile. "go to the dance with me?" he asked shyly. Was I dreaming? I didn't feel like it. I smiled hugely and said yes. the whole day I couldn't stop smiling whenever I saw him.

I told ness about it when we got to her house. she said she was happy for me. I have always loved her house it was so open and light. she asked if i wanted to spend the weekend with her, I said yes and called my mom to ask if I could stay. of corse since she has known Nessies parents for awhile she said yes. "I'm gonna go run to my house and grab my stuff. my house was only down the street from hers so i went home, got my stuff and went back to nessies house. It was only 3:30 and the dance wasn't until 8:00 so we played DDR for a wile then it was time to get ready. we took showers because we were gross from playing DDR. Then we changed into our outfits. was wearing a hot pink tank top, dark black skinny jeans and my favorite necklace. it was the best friends necklace that ness gave me for my birthday. it had a panda on it. i had the part that said best. I wore my hair down and put a pink flower in it. nessies outfit was opposite of mine she wore a black tank top and hot pink skinny jeans. we had on the same necklace but it said friends. she wore her hair the same but put a cream colored flower in it. at 7:30 dan came to pick us up. Nessie was going with dans friend paul so he came with dan.

when we got to the dance the boys payed for our tickets. we went into the gym where the dance floor was. after a couple of dances i had to use the bathroom. "ill be right back dan" I said. he nodded and proceeded to dance crazily to a fast song. i laughed as i walked out in the hallway. there was no one out here which i thought was strange. i continued gown the hall to the bathrooms. i tried to open the bathroom door but it was locked. OK that's even weirder then no one in the halls. i heard someone call my name. i turned around but no one was there. i got scared so i started to go back to the gym. i was almost there when someone grabbed me from behind. i tried to scream as they stabbed me with a needle. i started to passed out while someone picked me up and started carrying me out the doors.

I woke up up in the back of a van. it was freezing and i started shaking. where was i? i coughed. "ah, your awake!" a strange voice said from behind me, it made me jump. it was so dark that i couldn't see. i backed up as far as i could.

"w-who are you," i whimpered. "what do you want?"

"you'll find out soon enough." the strange voice said. i continued to shiver, i was freezing. the man put a blanket over me, "better?" he asked

"y-yes b-b-but why are you being nice when you kidnaped me?"

"all in good time" he said. he sounded familiar.

"Do i know you?" i asked

"yes and you should sleep we have a long drive ahead."

"do you go to my school?" i pried

"maybe" after he said that i felt like i was going to pass out. i laid down wrapping the blanket around me and quickly fell asleep.