Hey all! So I am a pretty big MLP:FIM and i decided to try my hand at a fanfic. I would love some reviews, please be gentle as it is my first MLP FanFic. Things you should know up front, this is an intended Femslash eventually between Fluttershy and Obsidian (My OC). M for mentions of sexual abuse/rape and eventual sexual depictions between female characters.
I dont own My Little Pony: Friendship is magic. The only thing i own in this story is the plot and the Alicorn Obsidian Gold.
There was a blinding light and sensation of falling that occurred before Obsidian Gold landed on something very solid and flat. The next thing was agonizing pain that radiated from her side and back. The mare released the breath she didn't know she had been holding and then groaned when she felt her side hurt intensely
Groaning the mare opened her eyes and found she was no longer in her bright world but instead in a dark and eery looking forest. Assessing her surroundings briefly before turning her mind to more pressing matters, her injuries, she deduced that she had broken at least one rib and it appeared her left wing was also broken.
Obsidian Gold struggled to her feet trying to ignore the pain as best she could as she held her broken wing loosely at her side and took shallow breaths so as not to strain her ribs. The mare looked up at the sky as a large black void was slowly closing. With a silent curse to herself she watched the void slowly close completely and disappear.
Upon looking back at her surroundings the mare was surprised that she had been lucky enough not to ht any trees on her way down. Obsidian was stilling thinking about her luck when she heard a small sound somewhere very close by.
With a frown the mare looked around but didn't see anyone so she stood and listened hoping to hear the sound again. She wasn't disappointed and this time it was a little louder and she was able to tell two things. First she could tell that the one responsible for the sound was somewhere to her right and the second thing was that who ever it was, was in a wealth of distress.
Obsidian hesitated for only a moment before gingerly moving towards the sound. She was a little worried she would find somepony being mauled by some monster. Her relief was short lived when she peaked through a concealing bush and saw a very pregnant mare lying on the ground with a pained look on her face.
Obsidian was stunned for she found that the little butter yellow mare with her soft pink mane and tail was quite beautiful. Before Obsidian could make her presence known the little mare made another still louder sound and Obsidian saw the tightly furled wings for the first time. It was becoming quite clear to Obsidian that the mare was in labor.
Making sound on purpose the large black mare stepped out from her side of the bush and moved slowly over to the yellow mare. Obsidian looked down at the mare when she was near and was startled to see pure fear in the large cyan eyes looking up at her. Obsidian's gold flowing mane fell across her eyes for a moment before she tossed her head a little and smiled warmly at the mare.
"Don't be afraid, I wont hurt you." Obsidian said kindly to the mare.
"P-please... I.. I need help." The little yellow mare stammered quietly before groaning as her body tensed up.
"Of course. What can I do?" Obsidian asked gently as she looked around in case there was someone else there that could help.
"I cant do this hear... Please will you help me get back to my cottage?" The mare asked when she seemed to relax a little.
"Of course, where is it?" Obsidian asked without hesitating to use her magic to lift the straining mare up and place her gently on her own back.
"I could have walked..." The yellow mare said quietly as she used her legs to brace herself on the other mares back.
"Nonsense Which way?" Obsidian asked again.
Once the yellow mare pointed her in the right direction the large black mare moved quickly but sturdily so as not to jostle the laboring mare on her back. It was a short trip to the small, clearly hoof made, cottage. Obsidian had to duck down to get inside the small building but once inside she didn't hesitate to lay the mare down on what was apparently her bed.
"Oh Celestia, its coming..." The yellow mare groaned quietly as her body tensed again.
Obsidian was about to asked how she could help when the little yellow mare strained again and gave sharp cry as all of the sudden a small mess came out of the yellow mares back end. With a heavy sigh of relief the yellow mare laid still for a moment before getting up on her knees and looking behind her at the small wet moving pile behind her.
Obsidian stared as what was apparently a tiny foal lifted its little head and looked lovingly at its mother. The experience was overwhelming to witness as the little foal struggled to her hooves and stood on wobbling legs. The sob from the yellow mare was what broke the trance that had come over the obsidian mare.
"I cannot feed my daughter. I did not produce any milk." The mare said with utter despair as the foal moved slowly over to her mother and prodded at the still lying mare.
"Is there anywhere close by that I could go and get something you can feed her?" Obsidian asked without hesitation.
"No where close enough, she must eat within the next 8 hours or she will likely not survive. Please... I cant be the reason she doesn't make it. Its not her fault." The yellow mare had tears rolling down her face now.
"Then, I will take you both to the closest village." Obsidian said looking at the tiny foal.
"You cant get there quick enough carrying us both and I don't have the strength to go with you... Please... will you take her?" The yellow mare asked pleadingly.
"Yes but... why do you trust me with your foal, I am a stranger?" Obsidian asked curiously as she magically lifted the little wet foal from the bed and placed her on her back between her wings.
"I have no choice. Please..." The yellow mare was clearly exhausted.
"Of course. What is your name? What will her's be?" Obsidian asked as she moved towards the door.
"I-I'm Fluttershy... call her Blaze." Fluttershy stuttered out as she weakly gestured the bright orange mane and tail.
"Which way is the village and how long will it take me?" Obsidian asked after she nodded at the names.
"North, and you will just make it in time if you gallop. Please, I know I am asking a lot." Fluttershy said quietly.
"You are asking a small thing. I wont fail you Fluttershy. Rest and I will return with your little filly when I can." Obsidian said moving to the door.
"Thank you." Was all Fluttershy said before she began to weep.
Obsidian felt bad for leaving the mare behind but she was worried for the newborn filly she had currently nestled between her wings. With a sigh the mare turned and ducked out of the cottage before getting her bearings and beginning to gallop wildly in the direction of the village.
The small black and orange filly on her back seemed quite content to be there and Obsidian only had to use a small amount of her magic to keep the foal from falling off she galloped towards the village. Every so often the mare would glance back to make sure the foal was still there even though she knew she was.
It was about 7 hours into the harrowing run and the sun was beginning to peak on the horizon when Obsidian noticed the foal had a small horn nestled in the now dry and fuzzy orange forelock. She also noticed how tired and weak the filly was looking and regardless of her strongly protesting muscles she surged forward.
Relief washed over the mare when she crested a hill and saw the small quiet looking village lying in the distance before her. With a fresh wave of adrenaline the mare sped up and closed the distance with a ground eating pace.
Obsidian didn't slow down until she had thundered into the village square where she skidded to a halt and looked around at the shocked looking towns ponies that were all staring at her. With a frown she glanced at the foal momentarily before turning and speaking to the ponies around her.
"Please I need help. The foal, her mother couldn't feed her. It's almost been too long."
None of the ponies spoke they were all apparently too shocked by the sight of the alicorn in front of them. Obsidian stomped her hoof and threw her head causing her golden mane to fly out behind her and revealing the foal to the onlookers.
"Please!" Obsidian cried again.
"Over here, miss." A voice behind her had Obsidian turning to face a white unicorn mare with a dark purple mane and tail.
"You can help me?" Obsidian asked as she trotted the short distance to the mare.
"Of course. Come along to my home we will get your little one some milk." The unicorn said kindly.
"Thank you." Obsidian said as she followed the briskly trotting unicorn.
They were hardly out of the square when a blue pegasus dropped out of the sky beside them and flicked her multicolored mane before looking at Obsidian and then turning to the unicorn.
"Rarity, who is your friend?" The pegasus asked.
"I didn't catch her name Rainbow Dash. Why don't you ask her while we go to my home. Her foal is in need of milk." The unicorn explained without slowing her step.
"My name is Obsidian Gold." Obsidian said without needing prompting from Rainbow Dash.
"Nice to meet you. I'm Rainbow Dash and this is Rarity." The pegasus introduced.
"Its a pleasure. I don't mean to be rude but is it much farther?" Obsidian asked worriedly as she glanced at the little foal again.
"No it's this one here. Dash, would you be a dear and go and get Twilight?" Rarity asked as the three mares stopped in front of a small boutique.
"Sure thing, be back in a wings beat." Rainbow didn't wait for any kind of response as she took off, flying in the opposite direction.
Rarity opened the door and walked into the boutique assuming that Obsidian would follow her in, which she did. The unicorn moved off quickly into a room to the side. Obsidian, suddenly feeling the full effects of her harrowing journey to the town, slumped down onto the floor in the middle of the boutique.
Rarity returned just as Obsidian floated the foal from her back and nestled the starving foal between her front legs. Rarity magically hoofed over the bottle of warm milk to the alicorn that pressed the gentle teat of the bottle against the foals lips.
"Come little Blaze, Fluttershy needs you to do this." Obsidian urged gently as the foals eyes slowly drifted open and she weakly took the teat in her mouth and began to suck.
"What did you just say?" Rarity's tone had Obsidian's head snapping up to look at the almost angry looking foal.
"I told her her mother needs her to eat." Obsidian frowned at the unicorns reaction.
"The name... you said... you said..." Rarity seemed unable to finish.
"I said Fluttershy. Do you know her?" Obsidian frowned more until she looked down and the feeding foal and smiled.
"We sure do, Ma'am. Fluttershy is one of ah best friends. She's been missing fah months." Obsidian turned towards the new voice, that of an orange earth pony with blonde mane and tail wearing a straw hat.
