Forgotten Promise
Eriol's Promise
Flashback
Tomoyo, Sakura and Syoaran were all at the home of Eriol Hiirigazawa. They were all there to bid farewell to their good mischievous friend. Eriol explained everything about Sakura and the Clow/Sakura cards. He then invited an old friend of his (and everyone else) to come join in the conversation. Mizuki-sensei (as they would call her for her being their old teacher) came in to make a big surprised to Sakura and the others, except Eriol of course, after she has been gone for 6 months. Sakura started a conversation with Mizuki and Eriol left excusing himself. Sakura and Mizuki were too busy chatting to notice and Syoaran just couldn't stop looking at Sakura to even realize this. Tomoyo herself couldn't even stop video taping her dearest cousin and her best friend. After several minutes of video taping her friend, Tomoyo finally realized that Eriol was gone. (As you all know by now this is episode 70, if u didn't watch that episode, Eriol left to talk to Yue) Tomoyo then left the room slowly so that no one would notice her.
End Flash Back
Tomoyo then went into a room where Eriol and Yue were talking. Eriol and Yue finished their conversation when they saw Tomoyo come into the room. "I will take my leave Clow," Yue said as he took a quick look at Tomoyo. "I believe you two have a lot to talk about, am I wrong Daidoji-san?""No Yue-san, I don't believe you are." Tomoyo said with a gentle smile. "I will see you soon Daidoji-san " Yue said before changing into Yukito and heading out.
Eriol just stood there as Tomoyo and Yue had their little conversation. Once Yue changed and left Eriol started to talk to Tomoyo.
"Eriol...will you ever come back?" She said as she looked down to the floor realizing that she just said that out in the open. She had never called Eriol by his first name. They had always been polite with each other. As you all know being polite would have the person's last name and an honorific end like san or sama.
"Tomoyo..No...Daidoji-san," Eriol started only to see Tomoyo all sad in her eyes. "Daidoji-san, I might never come back but I promise, I'll never forget you ok?" Eriol said lifting Tomoyo's head so she can look at him in the eyes. Tomoyo not understanding her own feelings just nodded as a response. She had always thought that her heart was taken away by her cousin , Sakura, much like her mother by Sakura's mother. Eriol then gave Tomoyo a hug of comfort only to be disturbed by Sakura holding Tomoyo's camera. Since the camera was on Sakura just pointed it to Tomoyo and Eriol. Sakura was very happy that she got to take Tomoyo's job and record her best friend in her romantic moment. Just when Sakura was pointing it there Eriol looked up knowing that she was there and couldnt believe that Sakura would be video taping. He thought that Sakura didnt know how to use a camera. Tomoyo then left the warm comforting embrace of Eriol to also become shocked at Sakura. "Sa..Sa...Sakura...It's not like you think!!!" Tomoyo said bluntly but shyly at the same. "Aww" Sakura said looking at the two people who had always been there for her. "You two looked soo kawaii together!!!" Right when Sakura said that Syoaran came in with Mizuki-sensei. Mrs. Mizuki just stared at the little kids. "Umm" "ahem" Mizuki started to say. "It is getting late I think you should go home." After that dramatic moment everyone just kept qiet and left.
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