More to come so please comment! any feedback would be appreciated!
Extraordinary day
setting - Derby City centre night
"Give me my money now! You useless sack of …"
The boy was cut off by a punch to the face, blood everywhere he groaned in pain clasping his broken nose. The other boy that had delivered the punch took this opportunity to force the broken nosed boy on the floor and proceeded to kick him vehemently. Finally he stood back at the mess on the floor with a look of revulsion that quickly changed to alarm. There was something or rather someone in the shadows. He quickly sped over past the bins and out of sight.
A young girl emerged from the shadows, red auburn hair pale face and in a wheelchair. Her eyes were fearful, and apprehensive, never the less she ran over to the injured boy. "Hello can I get an ambulance, I'm in the city centre of Derby a boys' just been attacked…"
"Hello, hello Miss are you still there?" the operators voice crackled from the girl's phone that was now next to the injured boy. The other boy and the girl were nowhere to be seen.
setting- you'll find out when she does
The boy slipped into his bedroom to check on the girl, it was Emily from college. Better she didn't know who he was though, he'd kept his hoody on for when she wakes up and put a ski mask on for extra security. She was still asleep from the chloroform, he couldn't even remember why he had chloroform. Lucky he did in this instance, well sort of... Anyway now it was just a waiting game till she woke up and he could calm her down and get her not to call the police. Simple right?