Caught in the Shadow of Draconians
Okay, this is my first fic of Escaflowne, but I have many others under the category Card Captor Sakura. So please don't tell me my mistakes in this fic, 'cause I just started watching the show for over a month now. If you want, you can r/r this, or my other stories.
And so it begins......
"Hitomi? You wanted us?" Malerna and Merle stepped into Kanzaki's room.
Hitomi didn't answer. She was busy yelling at her cards instead. "You baka cards! Tell me! Please! I need to know- oh...you came.." She looked up to the two women standing in her doorway, with tears streaking down her cheeks. (okay, so Merle isn't exactly a woman...)
Malerna looked at the girl with concern. "What's wrong?"
"Oh I don't know...I can't decide, and these baka cards aren't helping me the least bit. WHY? WHY?!" Hitmoi returned to screaming at her cards.
Merle exchanged glances with Malerna. "Hitomi, you're not helping us help you either... WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU, DAMMIT!" She lept onto the bed beside her friend.
"Oh Merle...I'm just lost..I can't decide..it's too painful..." Hitomi's voice trailed off.
"What is it? Malerna asked.
"I know......I know..that...Van and Allen both like me.....but...I like them both...oh.. WHY?" Hitomi ripped up her cards.
At first, both Merle and Malerna just dropped their jaws in horror, but then Merle grabbed Hitomi's throat.
"YOU BAKA WOMAN! VAN IS MIINNEE! AAIIIIII!" She screamed as she contiued to strangle Hitomi.
While all this was taking place, Malerna was in such a shocked trance, that she didn't seem to notice it, let alone bother to assist.
"H-hellpp...m-mee.." Hitomi managed to gag out, struggling to breathe.
Malerna finally snapped out of it. She grabbed Merle's arms and eventually managed to yank the cat-girl off of Hitomi. Kanzaki's neck had red rashes all over them. She rubbed her neck while Malerna carried Merle out and shut the door, as to avoid the cat-girl from mudering Hitomi.
"Thanks..." She looked down. "I'm sorry....I can't decide..." She looked so hopeless.
"You know..you could-" Malerna started, but got cut off.
"That's it! Thanx a lot Malerna!" Hitomi got up and ran out, passing Merle as fast as possible.
"Uhhh...I didn't even say anything...." Malerna sat, confused.
Hitomi kept running until she reached the room where Allen was. "Sllen! Come with me! I need you for a sec!" She grabbed his arm and ran, dragging him off.
'Ooohh...she likes me..." Allen thought, blushing.
Hitomi reached Van's training room. "Wait here." She said, walking in and grabbing Van's wrist, pulling him out.
Allen, looking at first surprised, slouched and glared at him. Van did this back, and Hitomi pulled them both to another area of the castle. Once they got there, Hitomi turned to face them both.
"Don't move..." She said, closing her eyes. 'Okay pendant...show me....who is the one..?' She thought, and in her mind, she saw the pendant moving slowly. It swayed back and forth and then stopped. When she opened her eyes, it was pointing directly in between Van and Allen. "AAAHHH! YOU BAKA PENDANT!" Hitomi screamed, ripping it off her neck.
Meanwhile, Van and Allen were just standing there, staring at her like she was a freak. But then, they knew what she was trying to do.
"The pendant, it's pointing more to my side!" Van declared, crossing his arms.
Hitomi lookd up at them both, confused and lost.
"No! It's more to me!" Allen objected.
"No me!"
"Me!"
"Me!"
They stopped, glaring and growling at each other.
"Then why don't we battle for her..." Allen siad through gritted teeth.
"NO! DON'T ACT LIKE ANIMALS!" Hitomi screamed, standing betweeen them, facing Van. "Don't do it...." She whispered.
Suddenly, Merle came near the area where they were all standing, singing, "You and me baby ain't nothing but mammals, so lets do...." (you know the rest)
"Merle!" Hitomi shouted, "You immature little brat!" She ran after Merle, chasing the cat-girl, who continued to sing.
Once Hitomi was distracted, Allen and Van drew out their swords and prepared to battle.
"Heeyaaa!" Van made a battle cry, charging first, and Allen raised his sword, blocking Van's attack, smirking.
Hitomi and Merle stopped running and turned to see the men fighting, terrified for both.
Van let his wings burst from his back and he flew upwards. Allen did the same and followed. They battled constantly in the air.
"Lord Van! No!" Merle screamed.
Hitomi knew she couldn't do anything, but she had to think of something. Their shadows covered the girls, and the were caught, in the shadow of Draconians....
What can anyone do to stop this...this insanity?
Van: I will, by killing you so you can't finish the rest! Muahaha!
me: eek! ummm...gotta go....but for now, I have to save my butt! So just review this story so I can see that people appreciated it before I die!
Van: Come back here you baka! Grrrrr!
me: 'till next time- ahh! Watch were you put that thing! Ouch! Ahh! ::runs around insanely::
Okay, this is my first fic of Escaflowne, but I have many others under the category Card Captor Sakura. So please don't tell me my mistakes in this fic, 'cause I just started watching the show for over a month now. If you want, you can r/r this, or my other stories.
And so it begins......
"Hitomi? You wanted us?" Malerna and Merle stepped into Kanzaki's room.
Hitomi didn't answer. She was busy yelling at her cards instead. "You baka cards! Tell me! Please! I need to know- oh...you came.." She looked up to the two women standing in her doorway, with tears streaking down her cheeks. (okay, so Merle isn't exactly a woman...)
Malerna looked at the girl with concern. "What's wrong?"
"Oh I don't know...I can't decide, and these baka cards aren't helping me the least bit. WHY? WHY?!" Hitmoi returned to screaming at her cards.
Merle exchanged glances with Malerna. "Hitomi, you're not helping us help you either... WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU, DAMMIT!" She lept onto the bed beside her friend.
"Oh Merle...I'm just lost..I can't decide..it's too painful..." Hitomi's voice trailed off.
"What is it? Malerna asked.
"I know......I know..that...Van and Allen both like me.....but...I like them both...oh.. WHY?" Hitomi ripped up her cards.
At first, both Merle and Malerna just dropped their jaws in horror, but then Merle grabbed Hitomi's throat.
"YOU BAKA WOMAN! VAN IS MIINNEE! AAIIIIII!" She screamed as she contiued to strangle Hitomi.
While all this was taking place, Malerna was in such a shocked trance, that she didn't seem to notice it, let alone bother to assist.
"H-hellpp...m-mee.." Hitomi managed to gag out, struggling to breathe.
Malerna finally snapped out of it. She grabbed Merle's arms and eventually managed to yank the cat-girl off of Hitomi. Kanzaki's neck had red rashes all over them. She rubbed her neck while Malerna carried Merle out and shut the door, as to avoid the cat-girl from mudering Hitomi.
"Thanks..." She looked down. "I'm sorry....I can't decide..." She looked so hopeless.
"You know..you could-" Malerna started, but got cut off.
"That's it! Thanx a lot Malerna!" Hitomi got up and ran out, passing Merle as fast as possible.
"Uhhh...I didn't even say anything...." Malerna sat, confused.
Hitomi kept running until she reached the room where Allen was. "Sllen! Come with me! I need you for a sec!" She grabbed his arm and ran, dragging him off.
'Ooohh...she likes me..." Allen thought, blushing.
Hitomi reached Van's training room. "Wait here." She said, walking in and grabbing Van's wrist, pulling him out.
Allen, looking at first surprised, slouched and glared at him. Van did this back, and Hitomi pulled them both to another area of the castle. Once they got there, Hitomi turned to face them both.
"Don't move..." She said, closing her eyes. 'Okay pendant...show me....who is the one..?' She thought, and in her mind, she saw the pendant moving slowly. It swayed back and forth and then stopped. When she opened her eyes, it was pointing directly in between Van and Allen. "AAAHHH! YOU BAKA PENDANT!" Hitomi screamed, ripping it off her neck.
Meanwhile, Van and Allen were just standing there, staring at her like she was a freak. But then, they knew what she was trying to do.
"The pendant, it's pointing more to my side!" Van declared, crossing his arms.
Hitomi lookd up at them both, confused and lost.
"No! It's more to me!" Allen objected.
"No me!"
"Me!"
"Me!"
They stopped, glaring and growling at each other.
"Then why don't we battle for her..." Allen siad through gritted teeth.
"NO! DON'T ACT LIKE ANIMALS!" Hitomi screamed, standing betweeen them, facing Van. "Don't do it...." She whispered.
Suddenly, Merle came near the area where they were all standing, singing, "You and me baby ain't nothing but mammals, so lets do...." (you know the rest)
"Merle!" Hitomi shouted, "You immature little brat!" She ran after Merle, chasing the cat-girl, who continued to sing.
Once Hitomi was distracted, Allen and Van drew out their swords and prepared to battle.
"Heeyaaa!" Van made a battle cry, charging first, and Allen raised his sword, blocking Van's attack, smirking.
Hitomi and Merle stopped running and turned to see the men fighting, terrified for both.
Van let his wings burst from his back and he flew upwards. Allen did the same and followed. They battled constantly in the air.
"Lord Van! No!" Merle screamed.
Hitomi knew she couldn't do anything, but she had to think of something. Their shadows covered the girls, and the were caught, in the shadow of Draconians....
What can anyone do to stop this...this insanity?
Van: I will, by killing you so you can't finish the rest! Muahaha!
me: eek! ummm...gotta go....but for now, I have to save my butt! So just review this story so I can see that people appreciated it before I die!
Van: Come back here you baka! Grrrrr!
me: 'till next time- ahh! Watch were you put that thing! Ouch! Ahh! ::runs around insanely::