heyoo people.. uuh.. sorry? Hmm... yeah sorry... no i mean like... well.. writing is so hard DX I'm so sorry... I'll try my best ! Maybe ! 0.0 Anyway here's my first poem here n the first poem i've done in like the last 5 years... Mayb my fifth poem in my whole life? but definitely the longest... Sorry for the choppy words but i seriously wnt it to rhyme ! 0.0 Ain't a poem if it doesn't rhyme yoo! 0.0
Once in a far away kingdom
A king of cyan hair asked to see the miller
He was said to be the silliest man
Incurable even by the best healer
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The foolish miller wanted to impress the king
He saw no harm in the what his lie could hold
And so with a bright and jolly face he said,
"My daughter can weave straw into gold!"
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"Now this I must see!"
The king exclaimed with a smile
The girl was brought the next day
She won't see her father for a while
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"Turn all this straw into gold,
Or I'll have you locked up!"
The king left the girl in the room of straw
Where she cried like an abandoned cub
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A boy with olive green hair jumped in
"I can help you, o little clueless,
I'll weave the straw into gold
In exchange for your beautiful necklace!"
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The redhead gave him her necklace
And he spun faster than anyone she had ever seen
As he spun, he sang a little tune,
"I will do my best but I may not always say what I mean!"
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Once in a while he would look
At the girl who once brought him and treated his broken wing
But she never noticed
As she drowned in her reverie of marrying the handsome blue king
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The king came the next day and said
"Oh my, this is the most amazing thing I ever saw!"
He looked at the beaming girl with wonder
And brought her to an even bigger room of straw
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"Turn all this straw into gold,
Or I'll have you locked up!"
The king left the girl in the bigger room of straw
Where her tears can fill a whole cup
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A boy with olive green hair jumped in
"I will help you and stop your crying,
I'll weave the straw into gold
In exchange for your beautiful ring!"
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The redhead gave him her ring
And he spun faster than anyone she had ever seen
As he spun, he sang a little tune,
"I will do my best but I don't always say what I mean!"
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Once in a while he would stare
At the girl who once brought him and treated his broken wing
But she never noticed
As she drowned in her reverie of marrying the handsome blue king
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The king came the next day and said
"Oh my, this is the most amazing thing I ever saw!"
He looked at the beaming girl with wonder
And brought her to a tower filled with nothing but straw
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"Turn all this straw into gold,
And I'll have you as my bride!"
The king left the girl in the tower of straw
Where she only looked at the bright side
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A boy with olive green hair jumped in
"Why do you look so happy?"
He asked with genuine curiosity
And a face of a confused puppy
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"The king will make me his queen
If I can weave all this straw into gold!
Oh how I woo over the king of cyan hair!
Charming and gentle, yet strong and bold!
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"Maybe I can help you again
To turn all this straw into gold
But what will you give me?"
He asked with a face of cold
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"What is it that you desire?"
For you to look at me,
He longed to say
But chose to let it be
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Without thinking straight he said
"Your first-born, if I may,"
He couldn't think of anything but that joke
But it wasn't the wisest thing to say
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The redhead gave him her word
And he spun faster than anyone she had ever seen
As he spun, he sang a little tune,
"I will do my best but seems like I never say what I mean"
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Once in a while he would lovingly gaze
At the girl who once brought him and treated his broken wing
But she never noticed
As she drowned in her reverie of marrying the handsome blue king
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The king came the next morning
And found the tower of gold
And so he threw a wedding
With all the best goods ever sold
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Years passed and seasons changed
And the redhead was finally blessed with a baby boy
The boy of olive green hair jumped in
His mere appearance shattered the new queen's joy
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"I have come for your baby..."
He stated their last bargain
He hated it but he knew that
It was the only reason to see her again
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"Please, I'll give you anything!
Precious gems, gold, riches! For you, aren't they all the same?"
"I will forget about the baby
But before three days passed, you have to figure out my name"
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The new queen froze in shock
As he weaved, the boy was nothing but kind and sincere,
And as he spun, he sang a little tune
Why didn't she ask for his name, the unique and queer?
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The poor boy with olive green hair
Constantly stared with his eyes of faded amber
And watched as the redheaded queen
Struggle to find the name she can never remember
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He sang another tune the night before the third day
"This is the saddest I have ever been
For the redheaded queen won't ever know my name,
The one who saved her, this Rumpelstilskin..."
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One of the queen's messenger heard him
And rushed back to the royal palace
When the queen heard, she was overjoyed
For she was no longer helpless
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The boy of olive green hair came the next day
"Your name is Rumpelstilskin!"
The redheaded queen happily exclaimed
With a face glinting a bright sheen
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"Why didn't you ask me back then?"
He asked, his words shaking as his eyes scanned the floor
The queen stayed silent without a single word
"I see" was what he uttered before he headed for the door
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The tale of Rumpelstilskin
Was a sad tale indeed
For she never asked for the name
Of the kind soul with the good deed
So yeah... I don't know why i suddenly love this fairytale so much... I may make a real story bout this? 0.0 Nah very unlikely.. but this fairytale may be my most favourite tale of all? Maybe.. 0.0 Sorry for everything... 0.0 Can anyone tell me how to "skip a line" in the published works in fanfic? Cause if i simply press enter, the empty line disappears when i save... Also if anyone is willing to help me revise and make it smoother please help me 0.0 Cos i suck at rhyming n all 0.0