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"One wins, one loses. Bring it on!"
Kaoru here. Feelings are weird, we don't know when they change. But surely, it has impact on things we value. Big impact, it is. They develop at times we don't even expect. Like mushrooms, they grow and appear out of nowhere. It is also like cells, it is the building blocks but not of things but of love. When it is compacted together, it forms catastrophes. A storm of enthusiasm or a sea of loneliness or a tsunami of confusion or a cyclone of anger. It is weird. Really weird.
Hikaru here. Love is tragic and it can also be sweet. It depends on the situation. On ours, it is hard, we're twins, so we expect we don't win at the same time. One loses and another tastes victory. This is the story where we find ourselves. A story where we find happiness and sorrow. I guess you won't understand this, you need to read our story. So let me tell you, the days where we left each other, stand on our own as an individual and not as twins, who relied on each other.
Now, we follow the path of the twins which they will find love. The most powerful feeling. As we all now, life has two sides, like the coin. Heads and tails, win and lose.
Goodluck to the both of us. The start of the real story starts at the next chapter, be sure to come back.
How was that guys? Haha anyway, this story is open for suggestions, put everything. If you want something to happen like this or that, feel free to leave it in your reviews. Okay? Thanks!