Here's the rewrite! This time I will have longer chapters, better grammar and much more. Please enjoy!
DISCLAIMER : I (sadly) don't own Pokemon
A man was sitting on the peak of Mount Silver, considered as the most dangerous place in the Pokemon Universe. The man was wearing a dark cloak, a mask and there was a Lucario next to him. This man was no other than Ash Satoshi Ketchum. The powerful wind and snow did not faze him though. It was in the wintertime during the year. The man looked depressed as he thought of the day he was betrayed by his close friends and even some Pokemon. Then, a Pikachu spoke up. ["Are you thinking about that day once again?" "Yes",he replied.]
FLASHBACK
Ash returned home after his difficult loss in the Alola League Finals, although he just wanted to see his mother. But when he arrived home, an unpleasant surprise came to him. His mother and friends wanted him to give up on his dream of becoming a Pokemon Master! But, a man with purple hair came to Ash's defense. This man was Paul, Ash's rival through the Sinnoh Region. He said that Ash was a wonderful trainer and he was dedicated to reaching his childhood dream. Also saying that Ash beat him in the Sinnoh League. Ash always was a strong trainer that was pure hearted and always cared about his Pokemon. Ash then told Paul to follow him, Paul had followed and realized that Ash wanted him to go to Professor Oak. Ash asked Paul if he wanted to leave with him to the Johto Region. Paul had gladly agreed. Most of Ash's Pokemon betrayed him too but this did not stop Ash. Ash then left for Mount Silver then arrived to where he is today.
END FLASHBACK
Ash was now part of the Shadow Triad(A/N : The Shadow Triad aren't loyal to Ghetsis anymore). The Shadow Triad now consist of Ash(leader), Yuuma and Erebus(A/N : GD anyone?xd. But Yumma from Tokyo Ghoul and Erebus meaning darkness). Paul had told Ash that it was time for Breakfast. Ash ate lots, still having his massive appetite. Paul suggested to Ash that it was time to train their Pokemon. Ash then agreed and went to the opposite side of the mountain than where Paul was training. Ash's Pokemon now consists of :
Old Pokemon : Charizard, Pidgeot, Pikachu, Snorlax, Sceptile, Infernape, Greninja and Goodra
New Pokemon : Lucario, Mewtwo, Lugia, Cresselia, Yveltal and Giratina
Giratina is the leader of Ash's team. A letter was received from Pidgeot. ["Ash, I have delivered a letter for you."Pidgeot said. "Thank you Pidgeot", Ash thanked him sincerely.] Ash opened the letter.
LETTER
Dear Satoshi and Paul,
You two are invited to the Master Tournament held in Sinnoh. This event will take place in a week. I hope you both will accept this invitation and eventually come. Also Satoshi, your old friends are there. Time for you to get revenge. Thank you.
PS : I know your real name by the way.
-Charles Goodshow
END LETTER
Ash then told his Pokemon, ["It's time", Ash said. "I accept too", Paul said."]. ["Charizard take flight!", Ash ordered the flaming dragon (A/N : I know Charizard isn't dragon type). Ash and Paul rode on Charizard until they reached Sinnoh. Ash then saw people he never wanted to see again.
To Be Continued...
Author's Note :
Better than the original? Probably, the original was just plain terrible. Not a cliffie anymore because of original though. Thank you for your time and have a great day. Aura signing out..
- Aura