Inside?

by Dragonfly51

A poem that I though a certain Naruto character would write. My first post! Please read and review! .

A\N:

This my frist type of ficfan posted and I'm playing the field is I'm going to start my career as fanfic writer. so feedback would be must appreciated.

Disclaimer:

It's a birds, it's a plane, its … oh never mind it just my dreams of having anything to do with Narutoã drifting off into The Abyssal Plains Of Death. sigh But I do own this poem.

Inside?

By:Dragonfly51

Burning.

This feeling forever envelops my being.

Griping my heart in a non yielding hold.

Hurling my essences deep into pits misleading.

Though I struggle,

I continue to fall,

This is a sight I prey that no one will behold.

Hunger.

This I quest for with a blind-passion.

Pranks.

Misdoings.

Cheap laughs.

All this and more done just to try and still the beast.

And it worked in a fashion.

But soon the pings of this want, leaving me in blunder.

Many Wants threaten to swallow me whole.

But I shan't let them deter me!

For I say,

That I must become Hokage!

Though at times I just want to give in, you see.

For though it is I who imprisons Kuubi.

At time it seems as if it is me,

Fighting to brake free.

-Uzamaki Naruto; Age 15

I was trying to get the feel of a juvenile who at odds with himself and suffering from inner turmoil.

But I don't think that I did that good of a job at it.

Please tell me what you think.

-Dragonfly51; Age 15