AN: this is my first story. no flames I don't know what they are but they dont sound good. Nice Reviews and Constructive Critisism is welcomed and wanted. REVIEW! tell me if I should continue.

"Tenten!" a fatherly voice called

"Coming !" Yelled back 14 year old Tenten Hoku ( made it up)

" Can you deliver this swordsto the Hyuuga House?" handing her the sword

"Sure I would love to." As she took them heading out the door.

The only reasons she was happy about delivering swords was:

A. She wanted to go into town to see some of her friends

B. I was kinda fun her opinion. She liked to feel useful (sp?)

C. Her mother was "telling" her that she should work on more womanly things. like knowing how to

cook and sew instead for fooling around with her father's Weaponry. In her opinion it was fun.

" Be back soon!" she yelled as she left through the front gates.

Her father was a blacksmith for Royality who happened to be the Hyuuga's.

She was completely against them. She didn't not like how they treated the woman

of the village, they were always underestimated. She personally wanted to change

that and prove women can be just as good as men, maybe even better. She loved to

train with the sword her father made her and she carried it around everywhere.

She made her way into town and saw Sakura, Ino, Naruto, and Shikamaru eating

take a guess... RAMEN.

" Hey you guys!" She called in a cheery voice

" Hey Ten whats been happening lately I haven't seen you in town?" Sakura asked curiously

" My dad just got a letter saying the Hyuuga's needed a sword for some special reason."

She said showing them the bag on her back.

" Yeah it's being said that there was going to be a New Ruler." Ino said in a whisper.

" Really! Are you serious?" Tenten said in a shocked tone.

" Yeah, but he's gotta get married, how troublesome." Shikamaru said while looking up at the clouds.

" Well, I better get these to the Hyuuga's or else."

" Ok see you later!" They all said

As she made her way to the fairly large home she found her self at the gates to the palace.

She stepped up to one of the guards and asked

" I have the swords that the Hyuuga's wanted from the blacksmith."

" Yes come this way." he said in an emotionless way.

She followed him into the huge house and took her into the main room and there sat the Hyuuga Leader, Hyuuga Hiashi.

She bowed and showed him the sword. She sat it infront of him as he gave her the motion to go. As she left the room she opened the door and bumped into a boy her age with long coffee brown hair with it tied at the bottom. She bowed out of respect

" S-sorry" she stuttered as a light blush came on her face.

"hn.." he ''said''.

As she walked out she noticed she had stuttered and started to think.when did I start to stutter? Maybe he is the new ruler to be? hmm.. When did I care?

She walked out and decided to practice on a wooden dummy in the woods. After an hour or two when the wooden dummy was no more. She decided to start walking home. But then she heard a voice

" Do you mind if I train with you?" a deep voice asked

She jumped in surprise and turned around and noticed it was the same boy she ran into at the Palace.

" Oh I was just about to leave." she said putting her sword away

" I was watching and your quiet skilled for a girl."

that hit a nerve

" Well men can't be the only ones who know how to use them." she held back anger

" would you mind to spar if you think you could?" he said knowing it made her mad.

" I would indeed." In a sickly sweet voice dripping with anger.

They both raised there swords and started.

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