A wonderful giftfic given to me, but a young lady who wished to remain anon. Her work as you can see is brilliant, she's just shy.
Skinny dipping
Widen
As far as they'll go
I'm widening my eyes as far as they'll go and it doesn't hurt
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Shocked
She's so far away
If I wanted to see something naughty I'd be squinting
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Didn't think she'd do something so daring
We've already been in enough trouble
...
I like it
I like it even though we've been in trouble
I'm worried too
Mitsuko would think we'd been up to something if we got caught together
It's a public place so anyone could have
And got the wrong idea
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The water might be cold
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We're already walking a fine line
I'm still not allowed in her room
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She might say we can only see each other at certain times
Or
Chou would have to have someone with her when we do
Or
I might get banned again
Chou might get punished too
Or
Get told off
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Why can't I do this?
I'm upset, worried?
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Don't know how I'd help her
There's not much I can do
I want to help her
I'll probably just laugh and turn it into a joke to hide my emotions
Laugh to hide the concern and laugh to distract myself from the other feelings
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I don't know what I'll do
This is the part where my brain goes blank
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Quietly
But loud enough so she can hear
'What are you doing?'
She's just doing it because it's fun.
I'd probably laugh too
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I'll warn her
But I'll joke about it
Like
'Better get out before Mitsuko catches you'
I laugh
I know why it's fun
I've seen it on TV shows and films and stuff
It's breaking the rules
And breaking the rules is always fun
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I wanna get in there with her but I don't think she'd like that
If I wanna get her out of this mess I'd have to threaten to hide her clothes or something
But not really threaten, more like tease
Yeah I'll tease that I'll hide her clothes
I won't get in unless she asks
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'I don't want you to get in more trouble'
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I attempted to make it light but it sounds more concerned
I don't like playing Leo's part - I'm not used to warning other people
I'm used to being warned himself
So I'm...
I've forgotten the word...
Self conscious?
...
Yeah
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She noticed I'm looking and sounding a bit nervous
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I'm nervous
I don't know what to do
I'll hold her clothes out for her but look away
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Am I hoping for a sneak peek?
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Maybe
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But I wouldn't look
Maybe I'll just tease and say I will.
Trying to think of anything but that
Anything but her getting dressed
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I ask if she's done when I hear her stop
She said she's done, so if she's not
Well this is her permission for me to look anyway
But I don't think she'd be joking about that
I turn around...
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Good
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I laugh
I wouldn't have known what to do if she wasn't dressed
I'm so happy to see her again
See her like she usually is
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notawordsmith's plight: Now I personally think this is a really good bit of written work here but the mysterious author doesn't agree. But we've made a bet and she has to stick to it.
So here's the deal. I need TEN reviews. Yep TEN of the suckers, and she will post more goodness just like this.
I can't promise she'll reveal her identity though. Perhaps you already know?
But yeah, ten reviews and more of the good stuff.
That's not so much to ask is it? Give a very nervous anon writer a helping hand eh?
And no, it really isn't mine. I just gave her my style to play in.
Also, pardon all the elipses, between stanzas. Fanfiction refuses to allow me to set it out any other way. Give us back out right to put in spaces curse you! *shakes fist at the sky*