Personal Note: This is my first Fan fiction. Please Review I need people to
tell me what I'm doing wrong or right. I don't mind constructive criticism
but please no outright mean reviews. When I say brutally honest I don't
mean kill me. Maybe hit me in the head everybody else seems to, though
usually in PE, not for my writing expertise.
The campus felt deserted and creepy, but the striking young woman knew there had to be at least one party going on since that's where her roommate claimed to be going. The girl with the raven black hair would bet anything that Sango had gone with the sort of cute guy. They had met him in the hallway when they were moving in. He had made the most incredible first impression though not exactly in his favor in Kagome's mind. He seems to have made a good impression on Sango though, and she on him. Kagome laughed remembering this morning and Miroku's violent shade of red cheek.
Flashback Kagome dragged her truck of "personal items" as they were now referred to by the school up to her in new room in the college's dorms. She hated lugging her clothes, toothbrush, sheets, hygienic objects, as well as her grooming equipment all the way to the 8th floor. While she was doing this, she was happy to be on a Coed floor. She never had been on a Coed floor. Actually she never had been to college either. She regretted the fact that she had not grabbed the elevator, but so many people were using it since the other was broken. She had thought she could make it to her floor. Boy was she wrong. She could feel, what she had thought as nicely muscled, calves burn with agony as she lugged her stuff up the stairs. The raven haired girl lugged the heavy load making a mental note to go to the gym when she got the chance.
When she finally got up the stairs and in front of her room number twenty- nine she was literally about to die. She was sagging over her pile of stuff when she looked up to see a pair of shoes connected to a cute boy.
Obvious to her that this guy wouldn't be her type, but apparently he didn't think that since the next words out of his mouth were "Beautiful Lady will you bear my children." She stared at him stunned then quickly said "I'll consider it while you bring my possessions into my room for me."
"Anything I can do for you my dear lady would be a pleasure." He replied as he began to haul her trunk onto his shoulders to carry it inside her room.
As Kagome was about to go in the room she heard a loud smack followed by a female screaming "Stupid Hentei!"
At that point Kagome decided that Miroku had just introduced himself to her new roommate and thought to herself Boy this guy works fast I haven't even met my roommate, and he's being slapped by her. I guess I have to catch up to him. Though I don't think, I will approach her the way he did.
Kagome stepped into the room and surveyed the damage her new roommate had done. First thing she saw was who she assumed was her roommate hands on hips standing over a hastily dropped pile of her scattered items. Next to her was Miroku who had a huge red mark on his face which Kagome assumed was the result of Miroku's standard opening line.
The new girl looked at Kagome in slight confusion and asked "Who are you? Hopefully you don't have a relationship with this pervert. If you are I suggest you dump him a get a faithful boyfriend." Then turned to glare quickly at Miroku particularly at his hands then turned again to face Kagome. Kagome said "I'm your new roommate Kagome. I just met him outside, and I have no relationship for the exception of him asking me to bear his children. By the indication of the red mark on his cheek he asked you the same thing."
"He still does that? Ugh!" Exclaimed Kagome's new roommate while sending a scorching look over her shoulder at Miroku looking innocent as ever.
"I'm sorry still does? You know him?" Kagome said questioningly at her roommate.
"I'm so sorry my name is Sango and I have only heard of his reputation. He apparently used to say will you bear my children thing to every girl he met, but obviously he also has a certain fondling fondness for my butt.
Miroku interjected at this moment saying "Lovely Sango forgive me but when I saw you standing there looking so attractive I couldn't help but touch your wonderfully sculpted bottom."
SMACK! "HENTEI!" Shrieked Sango furiously.
"Let me make it up to you go with me to a party a friend and I are going to." Said Miroku looking admiringly at Sango while rubbing his cheek that was turning a shade of brighter red as he spoke.
"Fine, but if you touch my 'wonderfully sculpted bottom' again your wonderfully sculpted head will be smashed to tiny pieces. Sango said warningly.
"That's a start since you admitted my head is nicely shaped instead of trying to hide the fact that you are attracted to me." Replied Miroku, who was promptly slapped by Sango. "Of course you can come too Kagome. I am sure the combination of you and the party is just the cure for my friend's sadness." Miroku said courteously.
"I'm terribly sorry but I don't think I can make it I want to get use to the campus. So I can find my classes that I have tomorrow." Kagome politely refused.
"You have to admit I did try. I'm sure my friend will be sorry he missed meeting you though maybe another time then." Miroku said eyeing up Sango's butt again as she started to raise her hand in a warning gesture.
End Flashback
She had almost forgotten her dark surroundings with that memory, but the cold wind sharply reminder her she was not inside her dorm room yet. She quickened her pace.
'Has she noticed me? She will, but I didn't want her to notice me not before I do my duty.' Thought a cold voice in a dark mind. 'She must not know I'm here until the perfect opportunity. After I saw my target I was wondering if I should pay him for providing such a delectable morsel. Chances at being paid for such a delicious victim are rare though if I paid them I'd never eat.' He thought laughing at himself.
He was a frosty man being a professional hit man suited his personality to the core. When this opportunity dropped into his lap, he couldn't refuse. The hooded man came into his private room undetected strange since his room had the latest alarm system installed just a couple of days before. He never did catch the hooded man's name though in his line of business it wasn't unusual. The hooded man had asked that he kill a girl, but not just any girl it had to be this Kagome Higurashi. He had been warned she might be very powerful and to take every precaution. He was intrigued on the spot, but now looking at her. He didn't see why the hooded man had called her powerful. He had been watching her ever since she arrived. He could see nothing strong about her. He had watched her struggle up the eight flights of stairs and had come to the conclusion that the hooded man had exaggerated.
Just as she was turning a corner he ran up behind her and grabbed her putting his knife to her throat and started whispering heart wrenching words. "I'm going to kill you bitch. But first I'm going to do you nice and slow. Bet you won't even scream because you'll be in so much pain.
'Is that what he thinks well he can kiss that image good bye.' Thought Kagome incredulously. And promptly bit him in the hand making him drop the knife and clutch his hand giving Kagome time to scream.
The guy swore out loud "Crazy Bitch!" He quickly snatched the fallen knife with his hurt hand and pressed it to her throat. "You could have made this so easy."
"I'm glad she didn't." Rang out a voice followed by a kick that sent the knife and its owner reeling to the ground.
Kagome looked up to see her rescuer and was shocked to find it was that guy who had hit on her earlier on her tour of the campus.
'What is his name?' She wondered. 'Kouga! That's it! He immediately assumed she would go out with him and basically expected her to come. What a jackass though now he was her savor. Now she'd have to go out with him.' She shivered with the displeasure that came with that thought.
He saw her shivered and said self assured "If you are worried about your attacker he's knocked out and I'm here to look out for my woman."
'Man, I wonder if being killed by the psycho was better then dating this masculine maniac.' Kagome thought silently to herself.
Her eye caught a movement where her attacker was suppose to be knock out, and just then a huge white German Shepherd jumped at the psycho and maniac at the same time bring both of them down. The gigantic dog pierced the two men with its golden eyed glare and in a growl brought his lips up to show white glinting teeth. The attacker stared in fear and awe of such a magnificent beast. Kouga glared indignantly at the dog and started to yell at the dog to get off when the dog deftly grabbed his throat in his mouth.
At this point Kagome thought. 'Wow, this dog's so amazing, and look at his ears they look like they'd feel so soft. Maybe I'll find out later. It seems he saved me.' She barely whispered "No please that one on the right was in the middle of saving me when you came and did it for him."
The dog seemed to have heard her. He slowly dropped Kouga's throat and allowed Kouga to get up without letting the other man get off the ground or escape from the range of the dog's powerful jaws.
"Did you see what that mangy mutt did to me?" Kouga said accusingly raising his voice in the process. The white dog growled throatily warning Kouga to be on his best behavior.
"He is not mangy and he saved my life and yours whether you admit it or not." Cried Kagome angrily at Kouga glaring at him while she had found the good spot behind the dog's ears. They were as soft as she imagined. As she rubbed the velvety ears, the dog seemed to forget himself and lean into her scratching and suddenly straightened like he remember what his purpose was.
Kouga said grudgingly "Okay he's not mangy, but he's not the one who's going out with you tomorrow night."
Oh, Great! Kagome thought miserably. I have to at least go out with him once since he did try to save me but I don't have to like it. At least I can make him squirm right now.
Kagome looking innocent stepped closer to Kouga, totally knowing he would be thinking he's a ladies' man, Kagome said. "You are right he can't collect on a date with me tonight, but he can come home with me tonight." With that Kagome walked in the direction of her dorm with the huge white dog at her heels.
The dog stopped for a moment looked back at Kouga with a big doggie grin on his face. Kouga was fleetingly surrounded by the impression that the dog thought he had triumphed over him. Kouga scowled and muttered under his breath "This isn't over mutt puppy. I will have my woman."
So what do you think? PLEASE REVIEW! I want to know how I'm doing. If you have any comments (reviews), questions, or concerns (I know you must have some I scared myself on some of the parts please review I will answer in my next chapter. I know I probably screwed up the name that Sango yells at Miroku, but that wasn't my fault all the Inu-fanatics disappeared when they could be most useful. ANYWAYS I Love you guys (everyone not exclusively boys)! YOU ROCK MY UNSTABLE WORLD!! :) (If you don't get it don't worry I think only about 7 people will) Ryngrl5 is this long enough for you almost 2000 words (That are going blurry as I write). READ RYNGRL5'S STORIES THEY ARE REALLY GOOD! Okay see ya next chapter whenever I get to it.
The campus felt deserted and creepy, but the striking young woman knew there had to be at least one party going on since that's where her roommate claimed to be going. The girl with the raven black hair would bet anything that Sango had gone with the sort of cute guy. They had met him in the hallway when they were moving in. He had made the most incredible first impression though not exactly in his favor in Kagome's mind. He seems to have made a good impression on Sango though, and she on him. Kagome laughed remembering this morning and Miroku's violent shade of red cheek.
Flashback Kagome dragged her truck of "personal items" as they were now referred to by the school up to her in new room in the college's dorms. She hated lugging her clothes, toothbrush, sheets, hygienic objects, as well as her grooming equipment all the way to the 8th floor. While she was doing this, she was happy to be on a Coed floor. She never had been on a Coed floor. Actually she never had been to college either. She regretted the fact that she had not grabbed the elevator, but so many people were using it since the other was broken. She had thought she could make it to her floor. Boy was she wrong. She could feel, what she had thought as nicely muscled, calves burn with agony as she lugged her stuff up the stairs. The raven haired girl lugged the heavy load making a mental note to go to the gym when she got the chance.
When she finally got up the stairs and in front of her room number twenty- nine she was literally about to die. She was sagging over her pile of stuff when she looked up to see a pair of shoes connected to a cute boy.
Obvious to her that this guy wouldn't be her type, but apparently he didn't think that since the next words out of his mouth were "Beautiful Lady will you bear my children." She stared at him stunned then quickly said "I'll consider it while you bring my possessions into my room for me."
"Anything I can do for you my dear lady would be a pleasure." He replied as he began to haul her trunk onto his shoulders to carry it inside her room.
As Kagome was about to go in the room she heard a loud smack followed by a female screaming "Stupid Hentei!"
At that point Kagome decided that Miroku had just introduced himself to her new roommate and thought to herself Boy this guy works fast I haven't even met my roommate, and he's being slapped by her. I guess I have to catch up to him. Though I don't think, I will approach her the way he did.
Kagome stepped into the room and surveyed the damage her new roommate had done. First thing she saw was who she assumed was her roommate hands on hips standing over a hastily dropped pile of her scattered items. Next to her was Miroku who had a huge red mark on his face which Kagome assumed was the result of Miroku's standard opening line.
The new girl looked at Kagome in slight confusion and asked "Who are you? Hopefully you don't have a relationship with this pervert. If you are I suggest you dump him a get a faithful boyfriend." Then turned to glare quickly at Miroku particularly at his hands then turned again to face Kagome. Kagome said "I'm your new roommate Kagome. I just met him outside, and I have no relationship for the exception of him asking me to bear his children. By the indication of the red mark on his cheek he asked you the same thing."
"He still does that? Ugh!" Exclaimed Kagome's new roommate while sending a scorching look over her shoulder at Miroku looking innocent as ever.
"I'm sorry still does? You know him?" Kagome said questioningly at her roommate.
"I'm so sorry my name is Sango and I have only heard of his reputation. He apparently used to say will you bear my children thing to every girl he met, but obviously he also has a certain fondling fondness for my butt.
Miroku interjected at this moment saying "Lovely Sango forgive me but when I saw you standing there looking so attractive I couldn't help but touch your wonderfully sculpted bottom."
SMACK! "HENTEI!" Shrieked Sango furiously.
"Let me make it up to you go with me to a party a friend and I are going to." Said Miroku looking admiringly at Sango while rubbing his cheek that was turning a shade of brighter red as he spoke.
"Fine, but if you touch my 'wonderfully sculpted bottom' again your wonderfully sculpted head will be smashed to tiny pieces. Sango said warningly.
"That's a start since you admitted my head is nicely shaped instead of trying to hide the fact that you are attracted to me." Replied Miroku, who was promptly slapped by Sango. "Of course you can come too Kagome. I am sure the combination of you and the party is just the cure for my friend's sadness." Miroku said courteously.
"I'm terribly sorry but I don't think I can make it I want to get use to the campus. So I can find my classes that I have tomorrow." Kagome politely refused.
"You have to admit I did try. I'm sure my friend will be sorry he missed meeting you though maybe another time then." Miroku said eyeing up Sango's butt again as she started to raise her hand in a warning gesture.
End Flashback
She had almost forgotten her dark surroundings with that memory, but the cold wind sharply reminder her she was not inside her dorm room yet. She quickened her pace.
'Has she noticed me? She will, but I didn't want her to notice me not before I do my duty.' Thought a cold voice in a dark mind. 'She must not know I'm here until the perfect opportunity. After I saw my target I was wondering if I should pay him for providing such a delectable morsel. Chances at being paid for such a delicious victim are rare though if I paid them I'd never eat.' He thought laughing at himself.
He was a frosty man being a professional hit man suited his personality to the core. When this opportunity dropped into his lap, he couldn't refuse. The hooded man came into his private room undetected strange since his room had the latest alarm system installed just a couple of days before. He never did catch the hooded man's name though in his line of business it wasn't unusual. The hooded man had asked that he kill a girl, but not just any girl it had to be this Kagome Higurashi. He had been warned she might be very powerful and to take every precaution. He was intrigued on the spot, but now looking at her. He didn't see why the hooded man had called her powerful. He had been watching her ever since she arrived. He could see nothing strong about her. He had watched her struggle up the eight flights of stairs and had come to the conclusion that the hooded man had exaggerated.
Just as she was turning a corner he ran up behind her and grabbed her putting his knife to her throat and started whispering heart wrenching words. "I'm going to kill you bitch. But first I'm going to do you nice and slow. Bet you won't even scream because you'll be in so much pain.
'Is that what he thinks well he can kiss that image good bye.' Thought Kagome incredulously. And promptly bit him in the hand making him drop the knife and clutch his hand giving Kagome time to scream.
The guy swore out loud "Crazy Bitch!" He quickly snatched the fallen knife with his hurt hand and pressed it to her throat. "You could have made this so easy."
"I'm glad she didn't." Rang out a voice followed by a kick that sent the knife and its owner reeling to the ground.
Kagome looked up to see her rescuer and was shocked to find it was that guy who had hit on her earlier on her tour of the campus.
'What is his name?' She wondered. 'Kouga! That's it! He immediately assumed she would go out with him and basically expected her to come. What a jackass though now he was her savor. Now she'd have to go out with him.' She shivered with the displeasure that came with that thought.
He saw her shivered and said self assured "If you are worried about your attacker he's knocked out and I'm here to look out for my woman."
'Man, I wonder if being killed by the psycho was better then dating this masculine maniac.' Kagome thought silently to herself.
Her eye caught a movement where her attacker was suppose to be knock out, and just then a huge white German Shepherd jumped at the psycho and maniac at the same time bring both of them down. The gigantic dog pierced the two men with its golden eyed glare and in a growl brought his lips up to show white glinting teeth. The attacker stared in fear and awe of such a magnificent beast. Kouga glared indignantly at the dog and started to yell at the dog to get off when the dog deftly grabbed his throat in his mouth.
At this point Kagome thought. 'Wow, this dog's so amazing, and look at his ears they look like they'd feel so soft. Maybe I'll find out later. It seems he saved me.' She barely whispered "No please that one on the right was in the middle of saving me when you came and did it for him."
The dog seemed to have heard her. He slowly dropped Kouga's throat and allowed Kouga to get up without letting the other man get off the ground or escape from the range of the dog's powerful jaws.
"Did you see what that mangy mutt did to me?" Kouga said accusingly raising his voice in the process. The white dog growled throatily warning Kouga to be on his best behavior.
"He is not mangy and he saved my life and yours whether you admit it or not." Cried Kagome angrily at Kouga glaring at him while she had found the good spot behind the dog's ears. They were as soft as she imagined. As she rubbed the velvety ears, the dog seemed to forget himself and lean into her scratching and suddenly straightened like he remember what his purpose was.
Kouga said grudgingly "Okay he's not mangy, but he's not the one who's going out with you tomorrow night."
Oh, Great! Kagome thought miserably. I have to at least go out with him once since he did try to save me but I don't have to like it. At least I can make him squirm right now.
Kagome looking innocent stepped closer to Kouga, totally knowing he would be thinking he's a ladies' man, Kagome said. "You are right he can't collect on a date with me tonight, but he can come home with me tonight." With that Kagome walked in the direction of her dorm with the huge white dog at her heels.
The dog stopped for a moment looked back at Kouga with a big doggie grin on his face. Kouga was fleetingly surrounded by the impression that the dog thought he had triumphed over him. Kouga scowled and muttered under his breath "This isn't over mutt puppy. I will have my woman."
So what do you think? PLEASE REVIEW! I want to know how I'm doing. If you have any comments (reviews), questions, or concerns (I know you must have some I scared myself on some of the parts please review I will answer in my next chapter. I know I probably screwed up the name that Sango yells at Miroku, but that wasn't my fault all the Inu-fanatics disappeared when they could be most useful. ANYWAYS I Love you guys (everyone not exclusively boys)! YOU ROCK MY UNSTABLE WORLD!! :) (If you don't get it don't worry I think only about 7 people will) Ryngrl5 is this long enough for you almost 2000 words (That are going blurry as I write). READ RYNGRL5'S STORIES THEY ARE REALLY GOOD! Okay see ya next chapter whenever I get to it.