It's great to see you all again! I'm back at it with a THIRD iteration of FCOTE! This one will tweak it so it's longer, has a little more to offer, and to fix the Newmans plot hole in the story. This will surely get the story going! Maybe I'll add more scenes to make it longer. Well, let's dive into the big story.
About 30 seconds after Six Strings of Evil...
"BEEP! BEEP! BEEP!" The emergency alarm blared. "BEEP! BEEP! BEEP!" The noise continued to no avail. Water surged through the forsaken city when the accursed guitar broke the dam. The water was up to my chest, so I jumped onto some rubble. A rescue raft was four yards away from me, but my friends were in grave danger. "COREY! KIN! KON! LANEY!" I screamed at the top of my lungs. They were nowhere to be found. Then I saw some excess water being dumped into the California ocean. There I saw Grojband, my best friends and employers, being swept into the ocean. "It can't be! Why! Why!" I yelled. "Oh, look. My totes stupid brother and his lame friends are DEAD!" Trina laughed. "Now it's time to make Mount Peaceville erupt! Hee Hee!" She snickered. "Listen here you psychotic, sadistic orc!" I called. "You already killed my best friends, and who knows how many other people!" I yelled out. "Meh, they're lame too." She said, holding the blue star that killed my friends. "You won't harm any other people, you fiend!" I ranted as I picked up a pebble, tossed it at the star and knocked it into the water, which was now 7 feet high. "Get in the raft, boy!" Mayor Mellow said. I climbed aboard the orange vessel and sat down. "You look like you've seen a monster!" A woman said. "I have..." I replied. You probably don't know who I am, reader. My name is Reggie Kingsley, formerly the only intern of Grojband...
MLG Commentary: This scene was AWESOME. The suspense, the action, everything! This is a great way to start off out story. I can't wait to rewrite the other scenes!
