(hey guys this was something I was working on for fun, but then I thought hey why don't I share it with you. so ya.I would greatly appreciate some reviews on what is good and this is is a fic with my character in it (I forgot what the technical name for it is _) but ya talk to you later
Fudgemuffins21
I woke up on a bed unsure where I was. I tried to look around but I could see nothing as I
strain my eyes I saw that there was a figure next to me and another figure sitting in a chair. As I continued to look I realized that the figure that was next to me was a girl. The girl had bright red hair that looked like it was glowing. She seemed to be wearing a crop top that was a grayish, with blue capris, and brown boots. The figure in the chair I believe was a guy. The guy had dark brown hair with a light brown streak of hair in the middle of his hair. He was wearing a brownish black long sleeve shirt, black pants and brown boots. He also seems to be wearing some kind of knee pads or something like that. They both seen to be wearing capes of some sort. The guys is black with two eyes on it, and the girl's is all red with nothing on the back. As I continued to look they both seemed asleep. We all looked like we were in a room that was made out of some kind of rock that I am unfamiliar with. I decide to get up and look around to find out where I am. I get out of the bed as quietly as I could without waking up the girl next to me. I go to walk out the door but I forgot about the guy. As I walk I keep tripping over my feet, it's almost like I can't remember how to walk. I go to were I think the door is but a trip over my feet and fell flat on my face and knock over something that falls and breaks into a thousand pieces, I'm not kidding though it is in like a thousand pieces. The thing creates enough noise to wake up both of the people in the room. I try to get to the door but something stops me. That something it the guy. He grabs me by the collar and lifts me up. The girl then turns on the light in the room and I can see both of the face much clearer now that there is light in the room. The guy that is holding me had a mask over his mouth and part of his nose. His eyes glow an eerie purple that goes deep into my sole. He looks very angry at me, probably for trying to get out and find out where I am. I look over at the girl and see that the girl had red face paint marks on the right side of her face, she also had light blue caring eye and goggles perched atop of her head. I looked to her with pleading eyes hoping to have her help me, but instead she turned away looking very sad. I looked back at the guy and saw that he was even angrier at me.
"where were you trying to go?" he said in a very menacing tone. I looked back at the girl to see if she would help me at this, but she was looking at me like she was wondering the samething.
"I-I was going to see where I was." I tried to keep my voice steady but I couldn't. he lifted me up even high of the ground. I was now starting to run short of air, I didn't realize that he was strangling me until now.I tried to breath but I couldn't. I could feel myself slipping into unconsciousness yet I still kept fighting to stay awake.
"Rythian stop! can't you see she can't breath?!" the girl said
"But-"
"No but's let her go. now"
all of a sudden I was dropped to the ground and a gasped for breath. I looked back to the girl to say thank's but as soon as I was about to say it I fell unconscious.
end of chapter one