Encounter

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A lone warrior riding his horse over Mt Fuji will find out he will need to be of help and in one place in particular which makes him anxious because he hates being in one place to long.

It's for a certain comrade which he respects but doesn't like his way of dealing of enemies because there is no art to it he says and that he doesn't let them know his or ever was there.

Of course this legend will cover the free spirit Keiji Maeda and the top ninja Hanzō Hattori.

They need to work together to get their allies out, Yukimura Sanada and Ieyasu Tokugawa. Like Hanzō normally does for his general but he needed some extra help with this mission from the only warrior he could get.

"We need a plan to get in silently, we need to get to the right side of the castle to the cells where they are."

"There is two guards to the right of the main entrance for peasants and cargo for the poor district." Keiji replied to Hanzō.

"Kill them, go in and we will be in the shanty part of town. Go through to get to the armoury then the cells."

Keiji says excitedly "let's go"

Keiji gets out of the hiding place and runs toward the two guards for some action.

The guard on the right was about to call for some reinforcements while Keiji drawing his double pike to pierce through their armour.

Slash... Keiji saw the guard fall into several pieces in a blink of an eye. Hanzō acted swiftly, so no one had a hint of them being there.

Keiji turns round to see Hanzō but his gone, he looks back to the guards and sees Hanzō with his scythe against the other guards neck. He is interragating him in the middle of a skirmish.

"How many guards in the town?" looking toward the guard digging the sythe into his neck.

"There's the lord and 20 guards along the walls and 3000 men able to fight for the lord" slurring a little with some hope he will be let free.

"How many people guarding the prisoners?" says Keiji reaching Hanzō.

"10, there's 10!" exclaimed the guard.

The guard is bringing his hand nearer to his weapon on the floor, while Keiji and Hanzō are talking their plan out with the information they have gained. He clenched his weapon and blood squirted from the body, Hanzō executed him before he could get up.

They pressed forward through the shanty part of the town taking some robes from a cargo train to blend in better with the people.

A person goes up to Hanzo and says something which Keiji couldn't hear but he could see Hanzo raise his defense against the person.

The unknown person shouts "Hanzo hatori is here to play and create some chaos." That speech made Keiji realise it is Kotarō Fūma.

Hanzo gave a signal to Keiji to move onto the prison. So Keiji used the crowd as a cover going the opposite direction to Hanzo.