Hello!
Here is a new translation, the original text is Eagle's Eye (yes, it is the same title because I like the titles in English), published on my French account: PinkySniper.
Urgent: I look for a beta-reader English to help me to translate.
Note: I deleted Jessica's Heart because I wanted to delete it (yes, I am not right, it is just that I did not have inspirations anymore thus I preferred to delete her it).
Chapter 1
1, 2, You were two
" Jessica, you make an enormous error! " Sizzled a male voice since the loudspeaker of my telephone, put on the passenger seat.
No, I do not make error. It will be only justice.
I heard vaguely my telephone sizzled a few seconds before becoming again totally silent. In a distant part of my thoughts, I conclude that from it he had hung up.
3, 4, The first one was cut in four
While I tried to concentrate on the road, I felt ardent tears slid slowly on my cheeks. Tears identical to those who had flowed on the cheeks, while she emptied of her blood, between my arms, because of them. I saw again her roguish smile and the sparkling eyes of life. These images would haunt my spirit till the end of my days.
5, 6, The second will find Anubis
This horrible mission had been only a Machiavellian trap. That had broken me the heart and its death had just broken me mentally. The echo of the bell of my telephone reaches my ears. I did not even sketch a gesture towards my telephone and I did not answer the call.
7, 8, both sisters were betrayed
It was time to end it.
9, 10, By their own family
They were going to pay for all his crimes and to die for the one that they had just committed.