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Karin p.o.v

As I walked out into the open field, I stood in a row with all of the other students gathered around. We were all waiting for the moment when Yamamori Taicho would start talking. To me, this was the most important day of my Shinigami life. This was the day when we would be sorted into the squads judging upon how strong we were. And to do that, we had to fight each other.

"Yes, a perfect day to kick some serious ass!" I said inside my head.

Finally I saw Yamamoto Taicho walk out to the middle of the field.

"Today is a very important day. Today is the day when you will be sorted into your new squads. To do this, you must battle each other one by one. This way we will be able to determine your strength and weakness'." Yelled Yamamori Taicho

I looked around the field and noticed all of the squad captains sitting in a row watching our every move. They were all sitting behind a long white table with papers situated in front of them. The middle had an empty chair, which I guessed was Yamamoris' chair. I looked down the table at all of the captains; I stopped at Toshiros' seat. He had his elbow on the table and resting his head in his fist, looking extremely bored. I stared at him for some time, until he turned his head and looked at me. Not realizing that I had been looking. I turned my head in an instant and started to blush.

"This is stupid"I thought "No way does Karin Kurosaki blush over some guy." I shook my head and made myself concentrate again. "Focus Karin focus"

I kept looking down the table, and who do I see sitting at the end? My annoying big brother Ichigo. And who do I see sitting next to him? My emotional-preschool-level-annoying-ten times worse than a mime-father. He probably just came here to watch me. At this realization I got mad. Instead of feeling embarrassed I always got mad instead and I didn't know why. I looked in the other direction of the field and saw all of the other shinigami in the Soul Society watching as well. I got even angrier.

"Saki Hayashi and Horino Hayashi please report to the center of the field so we can start the assortment." Said Yamamori Taicho while walking back up to the table and taking a seat. All of the captains began watching closely while the two fought.

Saki and Horino were the twins of the academy. I also thought that they were the most annoying. One by one the students were called down to fight. Each one taking up to 30 minutes before they would end the battle or one would knock out the other. Yamamori Taicho called the next two up to begin fighting. I looked around and saw that there was only two left. After the two pairings would finish their fight they would go sit with the shinigami after being placed into the squads. Now, there was only me and the one girl I despised the most at the academy, Yori Beliel. She would always try to make every ones live a living hell and always called me the freak of the school. I was technically because I was always able to beat anyone and surpass them. I would always keep to myself and never talk. Also I would get huge mood swings and start punching people square in the face.

People started clap as I realized that the two had been sorted. Then all my anger had been washed away and replaced with nervousness. Why, because I was up next.

"That was very impressive and we hope that you all will be happy with your arrangement. Now is the final battle of the year. Yori Beliel and Karin Kurosaki please step forward onto the field for your battle." Said Yamamori Taicho

The crowd got silent and all eyes were on me. I looked at the captains and they too were just staring at me. I took one last look at Toshiro; he was clearly no longer bored, but intense. I couldn't move because I was so nervous. I looked out into the sky, the sun was setting and orange, red, and yellow waves were pasted on the sky. I looked at Yori who was already in the middle of the field, a big grin across her face. I knew that I had to make myself move forward. I made my feet move slowly towards the field. I was looking down the whole time. Then, for what felt like years, I finally made it to the center of the field. I looked up and realized that I was only ten yards away from Yori. Her grin even wider than before. From that point on, I realized that all I wanted to do was wipe that smile off face with all of my heart.

"Are you ready Karin?" said my bankai from the back of my mind

"Ready as I'll ever be." I said to my bankai

"Be careful though, this girl has enormous spiritual pressure radiating off of her."

"Don't worry; I'll finish her off in no time." I said

"Be careful" Said my bankai

"Let the battle begin" said Yamamori Taicho

Yori then withdrew her bankai and water began to drip off of her bankai.

"FALL AMAYA!" screamed Yori as a giant wave crashed down upon her. When I could see her again her sword was gone and her arms were dripping. (no one in the academy can reach bankai form yet *amaya means night rain*)

"This is just one of Amaya's special abilities. But I believe that I can finish you with just using one. Then I can prove to everyone that you're nothing but a joke. And you can go cry in a hole where you belong." Said Yori apparently very confident that she can win

Out of the corner of my eye, I saw Ichigo tense up. He was obviously pissed at what Yori had just said.

Yori then put her hands out and water squirted out from them. I didn't think that the attack would be very fast but I didn't ever=n have time to blink. I dodged out of the way just in time.

"It's just water" I said to myself

I looked behind me and saw where the water had landed. I gasped in shock, the patch of grass where it had just landed was now sizzling and steam was coming from it. I looked back at Yori's smiling face.

"You've guessed correctly, this isn't just normal water." She said

"Be careful Karin that is acid rain water." My bankai said

"I know, I don't want to release you yet, to tell you the truth, I don't really want to release you at all." I said

"Oh, and why might that be?"

"Because, no one knows that I have even achieved bankai. They don't even think that you exist. At my level I'm not supposed to even be talking to you, let alone achieve bankai. That would make me a bigger freak than I already am."

"I see what you mean, but listen, I think that you are probably going to have to use me in this fight. She is much stronger than you think. Sooner or later you are going to need my help."

"Then I'll use you if it is a life or death situation, but not now………"

"KARIN!!!" bankai yelled "Use me now; you have to use me sooner or later. You are not a freak, you are special, and will use me now!"

"But…….." I started to say but then Yori swung her sword made out of her acid water down on me. Thankfully I pulled out my bankai before she hit me. I was lying on the ground trying to keep her sword from touching me. Then it started to drip and I started to panic.

"That's right, show everyone how weak you really are." Yori said inches away from my face

Her sword started dripping faster and I screamed.

"Scream, scream, scream. Scream louder, scream louder. Scream like the day you came into the world." She yelled

I saw Ichigo get up and Isshin holding him back, a look of hatred and terror on Ichigo's face. I looked at Toshiro, who looked like he was about to get up as well. I looked back up at Yori who had the most evil smile on her face and laughed a laugh I could never forget. I screamed again and looked back down at her sword. The acid was near centimeters away and I looked back up at her and screamed "KEITARO HOSHIKO HARUKI!"

White light surrounded me, and Yori was flung backwards and hit the ground hard. I was then surrounded by white light and lifted up into the air. My hair turned golden blonde and grew half way down my back. My clothes turned into what looked like black lace bra and black lace underwear but was made out of much stronger material. A pair of black devil wings was tattooed on my back. Black six inch heals where attached to my feet. I had a black belly button piercing and a pair of big black sunglasses (not the ugly ones, the ones that look cool) were covering my eyes. I had a black chocker on my neck with a purple butterfly on the front. Black sparkly swirls were put on the end of my eyes and I had black eyeliner and mascara on. My lips had skin color lip gloss on. With the heals on I grew to about the size of senna (from the first bleach movie). I had long legs and a perfect body. Then thousands of hell butterflies flew together and formed my bankai. It was a big black staff taller than me with an outline of three butterflies and a giant black diamond carved like a hell butterfly with purple tones in it formed in the center of the three butterflies.

The blinding white light around me became thousands of hell butterflies that flew away from me all at once. Reveling my bankai form to the Soul Society. Everyone gasped and stared at me, I looked around at the captain's table. Their jaws had dropped to the floor and I looked at Toshiro who looked like he was gazing at the most beautiful thing he had ever seen. I looked at Ichigo and Isshin, Isshin was looking at me with 'I'm so proud of you' eyes and Ichigo had a shocked expression on his face. I looked down at myself and gasped.

"Hoshiko, why am I dressed like this? This is the most hideous thing I have ever seen!"

"You put your heart and soul into me which gave me the strength I needed to go into my full transformation."

"BUT….. BUT……. BUT ITS HIDEOUS!!!!!" I said not wanting to wear these girlish clothes.

"I think you look beautiful, now, I haven't been used in a long time and I want to show this little brat how to speak to royalty."

"Royalty? What do you mea………"

Suddenly I couldn't speak and Hoshiko took over my voice.

"How dare you speak to royalty like that you little brat. I will punish you for this, and show you what real power is." Hoshiko said

I looked over at Yori, she was absolutely terrified.

"I am one of the 5 legendary bankai's, all of my other brethren were lost in huge wars long ago and I am the only one left. I use the power of fallen souls and I can manipulate them in any way I please. I can never die. I can also kill you at any time I so desire. But first, let me show you one of my more weaker attacks." Hoshiko said

I raised the staff in the air and all of a sudden hell butterflies started rushing into the black diamond. I could feel the power flowing through me. I then lowered my staff so it was directly at her. Then, a beam of purple light flew directly towards her. When she was hit, she screamed and flung hard into the ground. Her chest was covered in blood and blood was dripping from her mouth.

"And that was my weakest attack. You are weak, now I will show you my most powerful attack." Hoshiko said in a demonic voice

"HOSHIKO DON'T YOU'LL KILL HER!!!!!!!!" I yelled in my head

"Shut up!" She yelled back at me

I saw the hell butterflies rush to the staff and the end of the staff start to glow.

"Hoshiko don't" I said

"…." Hoshiko didn't reply

"HOSHIKO don't"

"…"

The beam was about to hit when I got my voice back and control of my body and screamed at the top of my lungs "HOSHIKO DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONT!!!!!!"

Then white light shot out of me and when I opened my eyes I was wearing my clothes again and lying on the ground, most of my energy gone. I saw people run over to Yori who was knocked unconscious. Toshiro, Ichigo, and Isshin ran towards me.

"SIIIIIIIIIIILEEEEEEEEEENCE" yelled Yamamori Taicho

Everyone stopped and stared at him.

"Unohana, please escort Yori to the medical center at once." Said Yamamori Taicho

"All of the captains report for an immediate captains meeting. Ichigo, please take Karin there as well." Yamamori Taicho ordered

"Everyone please return back to your posts." Ordered Yamamori Taicho

"Hei" said everyone at once


I hoped you liked it. It's just going to keep getting better and better and better!

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(Keitaro Hoshiko Haruka means blessed star shining brightly)