SatAm Robotnik Wins?

by littlestorywriter

What if sonic was captured by Robotnik to lead someone into a trap?Will Robotnik win and finally get his wish to rule the world or will Sonic escape and defeat Robotnik once and for all?And what will happen if he succeeds?

Sonic Is Put To Sleep

Dr. Robotnik is so sick of sonic getting in the way so he thinks of a way to get sonic. So he tells snivley what he is going to do and he says,''snivley I have the perfect way to get rid of sonic. I will send a robot that has sleeping gas and then once he is sleeping than we grab him and keep him prisoner here and if he tries to escape he can't because there is a force field that will let him in and not out." and snivley says, "that 's a good idea sir you will get him this time." Then snivley says," what about the freedom fighters they will try and rescue him." Then robotnik says, "well when they do we will capture them one by one." so he sends a robot and now we go to sonic and he sees a robot destroying the trees of the great forest and sally says, "sonic why don't we fight it together?"

Then sonic says," no sally it might be a trap and if I am captured don't come and get me." so sonic goes to fight it little does he know robotnik is watching him. Now we go to robotnik who sees sonic on his monitor and he says," worker 24601 execute the plan." Now we go to sonic who says," I had better stop that bot. come and get me robuttnik." Then the robot sprays this gas and sonic says," yeah like this gas is going to stop me." Then as he is saying that he falls asleep and swatbots pick him up and the sawtbots take him to high tech cells. Then robotnick who said that he wanted to be alerted when sonic wakes up.

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Here is a story I wrote last year plz tell me what you think about it might be bad but I wanted to know what you guys think of it and plz be honest about it and anyone know a good beta reader because I need one.