Hey everyone! This is myfirst fanfiction on this website. Actually, I'm prety new to fanfictions. My best friend is a really good writer and we both love twilight, so when I thought up this story idea, I considered telling her. But a lot of my ideas have been lame in the past.. so I decided not to. This story will be 5-ish chapters long, so after it's done, please tell me if I should show it to my friend. I don't want to show her something lame again. So... here it is! Please tell me any criticism you want. Disclaimer: I do not own any of these characters, places, etc. I'm just borrowing them. I'll put them back when I'm done.

ALICE POV

It was a sunny Sunday afternoon in Forks- something that only happens once every so often. So, I took advantage of the moment to put on one of my three new bikinis I bought and lie on a deck chair in one of the few patches of sun that can shine through to our backyard. I decided to make the moment look perfect- just like something out of a human movie. With sunglasses on my head, a beach towel on the back of my chair, and some lemonade (just for show, of course) by my side, I relaxed.

It wasn't long until I attracted the attention of my husband. After all, how long can a vampire lay glistening in the sun without someone asking them what they're doing with human beverages?

"Uh… do I want to know?" Jasper asked.

"Yes. Yes, you do," I replied, watching my husband sparkle incredibly in the sun.

"Not that I'm not enjoying this, but why exactly are you out here?" he pondered as he smiled down at me.

"Pretending to tan," I answered with a laugh.

"Hey, anything that gets you in our backyard wearing a bikini is fine by me," he said as he took my deck chair and sat me in his lap. "But isn't the lemonade a little… over the top? Where did you get that, anyways? I had no idea we had lemonade for the wolves and Nessie in the cabinets."

"Apparently we do. It's behind the-" I broke off, mid-sentence, into a vision.

"Alice, what do you see?" he asked. I could only hear his voice faintly because my mind was slowly being pulled away.

In the woods, coming soon, I knew. Some rogue vampires… maybe five, six at the most. Strange, I thought, rogues don't tend to travel in greater numbers than three. One of them seems to be leader- dark skin, blood red eyes. There was something frightening about him. Something different.

They would approach our house. For what? To- to speak with someone. Carlisle. But things go bad. A battle breaks out… They target certain ones of us. Edward, Bella, Renesmee, Jasper, and I. I see the leader lunging at Jasper….

"NO!" I scream, jolting myself out of the vision.

"Alice! What did you see? What?"

I was panicking, trying to shake the image of my husband being attacked like that. I didn't know why. Jasper was strong, and one lunge from some rogue isn't going to hurt him too much. But something about that leader told me an attack from him would be worse than an ordinary vampire. Looking up at Jasper, I tried to reassure myself that things could be stopped, and that he would be fine.

"Alice, love, please, stop panicking. It's okay. I won't let anything hurt you, I promise," he said, sending waves and waves of serenity over me. That, plus being in his arms, calmed me.

"Rogues are coming. There's five or so. The leader… he seems different for some reason. He wants to speak with Carlisle. Things get out of hand. The group targets… those of us with powers, I guess. Renesmee too. And I saw him lunge at you…" I explained.

"What's different about the leader?" Jasper asked.

"He seems more dangerous than other vampires we've known," I answered.

"He's targeting those of us with powers? That includes you! When? Where?" Jasper responded, getting to his feet. His eyes darkened as he began to think.

"We need to warn the others. Someone call Jacob to get Renesmee out of here," he said.

My vision went dark. "On second thought, I just went blind."

"Ok, no wolves. Come on, we need to tell the others ASAP. I wish Carlisle and Esme weren't away on another honeymoon," Jasper said, as I pulled on my clothes over my bikini.

We raced into the house, leaving the chair and sunbathing props where they were.

JASPER POV

I hate seeing her worried like that.

I hate feeling her panic.

I hate hearing her voice shake.

It's a total assault on the senses.

And most of all, I thought, as we raced into the house, I hate thinking she's in danger. My angel can't be in danger.

Before we arrived in the house, Rosalie and Emmet ran out to see us.

"OK, all I know is that when Edward stops what he's doing to race out and find Bella and Renesmee, something's about to go wrong," Emmet stated.

"Rogues are coming. Alice fears they're after those of us with powers, and that their leader is different from the rest of them. More powerful," I said.

"We can deal with a couple of rogues," Rosalie pointed out.

"There's five or six, and they seem to be really powerful," Alice explained. "The leader is going after Jasper!"

Her panic level spiked, but I sent her more calm and stroked her hair. I prayed she was right, and that no one would go after her, just me.

At that point, Renesmee and Bella came back with a protective-looking Edward.

"I filled them in. Renesmee, go inside," he ordered.

"Daddy, I'm old enough to help," the half-vampire protested.

"Renesmee. You're four years old, and even though you look thirteen, go inside now," Bella rebuttled.

She turned and went inside.

"Okay, what are we going to do about this? There's six of us, and five or six of them. I say divide and conquer, one apiece," Jasper suggested.

"We should reason with them first," Edward said.

"We will. But this guy isn't easily reasoned with," Alice informed us.

"Someone's coming," Edward announced. We all stopped and listened.

Before long, six very different vampires appeared out of the woods. Edward, if Alice is right, and they go after me, promise that you'll get Alice to safety, I thought. Edward nodded slightly, so only I could see. Then, we turned to the rogues.

"Greetings, friends," the leader began.

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