Hey I am new at this so don't say it is stupid just give me pointers for the next chapter. This story is about 4 orphan girls and their ancestor is True Son from The Light In The Forest even though it is boring read it so you can better understand when it goes back to what happened to him after the book which would be every once and a while and I don't know what they would call him so I just made something up and the 4 girls are some of my friends and I. We are not really sisters in reality. I do not own TMNT or anything I refer to from The Light in the Forest. Plus the things I put most likely are not like what my friends might do in a situation like this.

So before I go on any longer I guess I will begin. Enjoy!

Kaity's POV

It was dark at this time, about 11:00 I think. Our family has been here in the city of New York for generations but even so we are not like the other people here.

"Great it's raining just what I need more annoyance" Becca had been getting annoyed by Lilli who was poking her nonstop before the rain had started it had been kind of getting annoying to me to but I just kept thinking about what the history of our family are ancestors had even made a book I was really interested with someone named true son I mean because of him we don't even have a last name and that's how we got to New York City.

"Oh come on you two stop it and help already Kaity you have to help as well" Shannon are so called leader said looking around we were actually trying to find a place to sleep I was kind of pissed when she called me that so I started something up.

"hey Shannon I was wondering about this spot" I whispered to not have other people hear us she then nodded at me and she got some leaves to make us comfortable she always thought of me as the smart and silent person that was never mean in the slightest way I then focused on the book again not taking it out since I didn't want it to get wet and illegible I had not finished it yet but I was almost done. It was in a backpack I got before sneaking out of the orphanage with my sisters.

"wait guys I sense something" I said this sense tells me if someone is near, Shannon thinks we can use it to our advantage to not be put back in the orphanage or put in any danger so I always say when I get the sense I then pointed in the direction I sensed it from.

Dons POV

My brothers and I were jumping the roofs like we always do during patrol when I heard someone whining kind of like Raph does when Mikey is annoying him I then stop. I think these people may be interesting. Leo started to say something but I can't hear him but he I guess he looks to where I was looking and gets mesmerized as well I can't help but stare at one. I now could see they were girls the one I started looking at seemed to be in deep thought even with the two other girls conversing loudly it then had just started raining when the one girl said something that was the one I thought was sort of like Raph, I held back a laugh and I think the others did to. Just a few minutes or so later a fourth girl who must have been the leader said something and I could tell the girl I had been watching even deep in thought was aware of her surroundings. She must be a ninja as well as the smart person of the group. Wow the more I watch her the more I see myself in her.

"hey dudes their almost exactly like us" Mikey said Raph, Leo and I nodded in agreement I noticed that my brothers and I even in the shadows the girl I was watching must have been a great ninja for she said something about sensing someone and pointed toward our direction.

Kaity's POV

Shannon led the way to a fire exit and got it down so Lilli, Becca, and I followed by Shannon could go up and then Becca gave a look something I could only make out 'I will... (Thunder) if you don't show yourself' she most likely in the thunder her look was saying kill you since that is just how she is when Lilli looking scared tapped me

"What's wrong Lilli?"

"What if you sensed midnight monsters that might want to hurt us and I don't want to be like the girls in the comics that have to have a hero?"

"Lilli that's the stupidest thing to be scared about and if we don't save you most likely no one will"

"You still sense it Kaity?" Shannon said hadn't spoken since I had pointed out a spot she hates when I pick out things and they are good she is just that She's in control so just let be play leader Becca thinks that way but unlike me they actually get into fights because of their I'm control attitude they have I kind of am thinking she is mad but now looking at her she knows I was just trying to help so she doesn't start anything she only does with Becca.

"Um yep just follow me I can get to where it is faster that way and I will stall it till you get there" I really did not want to talk since I sensed our lives would change when we got to where the sense I first felt was

"If we are following you then how are you going to stall it if we are right behind you?" Becca says

"Come on guys it's this way" I really didn't want to answer since she should have know what I meant plus she had this sense to I think she also hated that I the more technological person stepped up to what she does which was beating the crap out of people well that what she thinks anyway and what I said had nothing to do with that but she is just who she is.

Well we were at the place but I could only see the shadows and four silhouettes among the shadows so I decided to walk to the exact place my sense was telling me to go when I bumped into something which felt, alive?

Shannon caught me right before I fell as Becca got a Sai with rusty red ribbon which was in her back pack that she 'found' one day. I had actually made it. I only made one since I wanted to make a weapon for all of us I have a stick I found I don't know why but something told me to stay with it so I did. Shannon got one Katana since I had to split the metal between her and Becca so I made one so I could use the rest for Becca's Sai and I made a wood tessin for Lilli since it was the safest thing I can trust her not getting hurt and with no more metal it had to be wooden. Anyway before Becca made a move a guy which I think had a red bandanna took hold of her rusty red one and almost sent her flying if it wasn't for I guess the leader that had a blue bandanna what is it with leaders and the color blue and then Shannon was grabbed by her blue green bandanna what is it with leaders and the color blue by the same dude that had Becca and the guy I had apparently bumped into that had a purple bandanna helped me up then he put his hand on the red bandanna dude's shoulder and told him to release them adding the name Raph kind of funny to think Red Raph has a temper kind of like Becca too.

"Sorry for this my brother Raph just has a temper" An orange bandanna guy said

"Hey so does my sister Becca her real names Rebecca mine is Lillian but you can call me Lilli" Becca glared at Lilli for saying this

"Ok Lilli well I am Michelangelo but you can call me Mikey"

"Who are you people" I asked

"I am Donatello but you can call me Don the Hothead over there is Raphael but you can call him Raph and our Leader here is Leonardo or you can call him Leo" ok why would he tell us we just met them but I could see in his eyes he regret saying what he said but I just played along

"Well I am Kaitlyn but you can call me Kaity or Syro that's the hot head of our family Rebecca but we call her Becca and that is our somewhat leader or at least our commander Shannon"

just then I started to feel something on my back then I felt a liquid run down my back I was hit with something and blood was apparently coming out then I noticed I was blacking out was I dying, was it for lack of blood, or was I fainting I then faintly heard Don say something about a foot I noticed Becca and Lilli were unconscious with blood coming out of them. I could see Shannon she was the most skilled of us but she was falling with Leo catching her she then faintly said that we were avenging the shredder for killing our ancestors that were alive and he almost killed Lilli now he was going to finish what he started then she was unconscious. Since when were shredders gender specific and could kill people? Why didn't she tell us? Did she think we were immature to know this? How did she know this? I started to think about questions while trying to focus on keeping conscious when I blacked out completely not hearing or seeing anything.

So what do you think it took me till about 3 days to finish plus edit it then I had to get my friends permission to have them in my story so anyway tell me what you think to let you know I actually think I might be like Don in my actual life but anyway please rate and review this so I can do another chapter and tell me since I was thinking this where do you want the Turtles to call splinter to ask the girls could stay in the lair with them or just surprise splinter with the appearance of 4 young girls also should I put a flashback to True Son if yes what POV should it be in meaning 1st or 3rd person since I am only learning about those 2 please answer these for me so I can get a good chapter 2 out.