Okay so this is my first fan fiction so any comments on how I can do better would be greatly appreciated. Basically this is going to be the first in a very long series of stories, hence the title, which will span not only the Doctor's universe but those of other fandoms as well.
Disclaimer: I do not own Doctor Who. I only own my oc.
Southern Utah
October 23, 2013
11:00 P.M.
Ciara's POV
I was walking down the street enjoying the cool night air and looking at the beautiful shining stars above me. I finally made it to my favorite spot in town, a park where I would go and sit and just lay down and watch the stars above me while I thought about whatever happened to pop into my mind at the time. I went to the middle of the grassy area and sat down onto the cold, wet grass. I let myself fall backwards so I was just staring up into space.
I suppose I should introduce myself. Hi, I'm Ciara. I am a sixteen year old girl with short dark brown hair, eyes that change color between dark green, hazel, and brown (and occasionally my eyes look amber like a lions, but that is just a trick of the light), and I have tan skin from living in a desert my entire life. So, ya, there you go, now you know who I am so there's no more confusion.
Anyway, back to staring into space. I probably laid there for about 4 hours, I only meant to be out there for an hour but I lost track of time. When I noticed this I looked at the time on my phone, and it was about 3 in the morning, so I finally got up, brushed myself off and started walking back home. I wasn't in much of a hurry and kept my pace at a very slow walk. Suddenly, there was a loud screeching of tires that disturbed the calm, peace of the night. I looked around trying to see where it came from and as I turned around I was met with a blinding light and the last thing I remember before I blacked out was the sickening crunch of bone breaking.
Utah, half a mile underground
September 14, 2005
2:00 P.M.
3rd Person POV
The building was clean and there were strange objects in cases everywhere. The place looked like some sci-fi museum. There was a man, with a group of people following him, walking through the cases and looking around with a smug grin on his face. He had only been in the room a couple of minutes before there was a bright flash in front of the group. They all covered their eyes quickly then looked around when the light went away. In its place lay a small girl with dark brown hair, tan skin wearing a black jacket, light blue jeans with faded white stars on them and dark blue knee-high converse knock-offs with bright white stars and dirty white shoelaces.
The group was stunned and stood staring, open mouthed for several long moments before the man at the front of the group snapped out of it and commanded one of the soldiers in the group behind him to check if she was still alive. A man, with short dirty blonde hair and hazel eyes dressed in a uniform with a gun hanging on a strap on his arm, walked forward nervously. He walked up to the girl crumpled on the floor and put two shaking fingers to her throat to see if her heart was still beating. He felt a heartbeat but it was going too fast.
"Sir, she is alive but her heart is beating way too fast," he said to the man in front of the group.
"Get her to the doctor then, and make sure she stays alive. I want to question her once she is better," the man said. The soldier nodded and picked the girl up bridal style carrying her toward the only doctor in the facility.
As he walked he looked down at the girl and couldn't help but feel pity for her. She would have to face the questions of Henry Van Statten, who will more than likely torture her at some point during the interrogation process. He couldn't help but think that maybe it would be kinder if she died before she woke up. As he caught himself thinking this he shook his head, it was none of his business what Van Statten did to the girl, and so he carried her into the medical center in the facility.
There were two rows of beds with four beds in each row. The beds were lined up against the walls and had pure white sheets on them. The doctor (an older man with thin, white hair and bright, blue eyes wearing some grey pants, a nice button up shirt with a tie, and a white lab coat) walked over to them when he saw the soldier enter.
"Hello, what can I do for you?" He asked.
"This girl appeared in the lower levels. She appears unharmed but her heart rate seems too fast. Van Statten wanted me to bring her up here to get her checked out." The soldier said.
"Very well, place her on that bed over there and I will get my equipment." The doctor said while pointing over to one of the beds lined against the wall before scurrying out of the room into his office to get some equipment. The soldier went over and placed her on the bed. He wasn't sure what to do then so he just stood next to the bed and waited for the doctor to come back out.
He didn't have to wait long. The doctor came scurrying back out of his office with a small bag and a stethoscope hanging from his neck. He quickly went over to the girl and put the stethoscope in his ears while putting the metal part against her chest under her jacket. The doctor jumped in surprise when he heard the girl's heartbeat. He quickly moved the stethoscope from one side of her chest to the other then stepped back with an astounded look on his face. He just stood staring at the girl for a couple of minutes before the soldier, who was thoroughly confused by now, asked him what was wrong.
The doctor looked up at the soldier and told him, still slightly disbelievingly, "This girl doesn't have a rapid heartbeat, she has two hearts."
There it is. The first chapter. I know that the doctor wasn't in it and I know that this has been done before. But I can promise that next chapter he will be, and I quite honestly don't care that this has been done before because I happen to like these kind of stories and I think there should be more out there.
So, again any comments you have to help me improve my writing would be greatly appreciated. Thanks for reading this story.
Grace Darkfeather
