Okay so here's another little story I came up with because I was bored in Chemistry and I'd just gotten some new notebooks. Warning, characters my be a little OOC. Sorry, otherwise it wouldn't seem right. Don't know why, flames accepted but nice comments are preferred. If I get good comments I will be more inclined to write more...

Disclaimer; I do not own Yu Yu Hakusho. (Is this actually necessary?"

Colors of Hell

Hot, cold, it didn't matter anymore. I was in Hell, my home and, to be perfectly honest, the place I would have longed to be if I knew my mate wouldn't be joining me. So, even though I was burned and frozen simultaneously, I was, for the first time, truly happy with where I was. This was the fate I had both chosen and was born with.

I looked around, it was brighter than I had thought it would be. The colors blurred together but refused to mix with one another, red and blue didn't make purple, black and white wouldn't blend and make grey. Now that I looked closer there was no secondary colors, only primary. Ho grey, brown or pink-I was kind of glad about that- were present.

It was confusing. I had grown up in a world with every color possible and all the ones in-between and combined with black or white. But, it was oddly nice in a way. Thinking back to my life I wondered why I'd always been told that experiencing Hell was the worst fate bestowable yet I was sort of enjoying myself except the thin streaks of pain in my spine.

How was this, a world of torture, so bright and cheerful? I wondered to myself.

Out of nowhere, my mate appeared.

I gaped at him, open mouthed. Why would my perfect, infallable mate he here, in a place where evil souls went? My mate was sweet, kind and had a fiery spirit.

Not someone who belonged in Hell, to be tortured for the rest of eternity.

"Come back to us. Yusuke, Kuwabara, me." he said, offering his hand to me, " I still need you and you don't deserve to suffer like this."

"Why are you here? You're the one who shouldn't be here, in Hell." I argued.

"You aren't in Hell, this is your coma state of mind." my mate smiled comforting and grabbed my hand with his own. "Let's go Love, let's wake you up."

He pulled me gently to my feet, I couldn't remember how I had ended up on my knees, and tugged me toward the lightened gateway just a few feet away.

"I thought you said I wasn't dead?" I asked kiddingly. My mate smiled sweetly at my joke then took me through.

My eyes opened up on the other side, my mare's hand resting lightly on my cheek. I looked at him then all my friends gathered around then at mine and my mate's kits; black haired, red eted, silver eared and black-silver tailed. The perfect mix of each of our qualities.

Once more I looked at my mare, "Wait a second. Do you mean that weird world was inside my own mind?" I gasped.

"Well. . ." he trailed of and I heard the silent answer, as well as his love, all I needed, in his glittering emerald eyes.

So what do you think? Did I build up the suspense of who was who? I sure hope you like it but, as I said, this was just something I wrote to pass the time during Chemistry. Still, authough I'm baised, I think it was pretty good. Anyway, please comment. Flames accepted but nice comments preferred.