This is my first fanfic... so please please please review...
Disclaimer: I own nothing, except the characters that don't sound familiar to you.
Marshmallows and Coffee
Prologue/Introduction
In every single important event in my life I've had marshmallows and coffee around. I know it's strange, but it's true, even when I was born (my mother told me) she had asked my father to get her some coffee, and he bought marshmallows for himself. So there is were my story with marshmallows and coffee starts.
It´s kind of hard being me, I have to live up to the expectations of my family name, and my father. Don't get me wrong I like my life, it's really cool, but sometimes I have to do things I don't really enjoy, like stupid press conferences and social parties with the Minister, stuff like that.
Oh right, you must be wondering who I am and who's my family, well I'm none other than the eldest daughter of Harry Potter, Isabelle Potter. You know his story, what he did, save the wizarding world from Voldie, then became the best auror ever, since James Potter. My mother, Marianne Craneson, top in her class (in Beuxbatons), daughter of the best Minister of Magic from France and from one of the most ancient pureblood families. She is beautiful, with a thin face and nice cinnamon eyes and long wavy golden brown hair.
Besides my parents, there's my older brother Jason, he's the best brother a girl could ask for, he's two years older than me (17), athletic, dark brown hair and hazel eyes, he seems to me like my grandfathers exact replica. He's also a genuine prankster, quidditch player (keeper) and also top of his class. Thanks to him, my dad expects no lesser from me. Besides us, we also have 3 younger siblings. The prankster twins Sirius and Andrew, they're restless, but they come up with the greatest pranks, they're a year younger than me, but they act as if they were a year older when it comes to me dating a guy (they get very jealous and overprotective) after them is Julianne, better known as Julie, the oh-so-sweet-lovable-baby Julie, she's 2 years old and the most beautiful baby you can imagine, she has golden locks and bright honey eyes.
Well now I guess I could tell you a bit about me, before starting my story...
As I told you, I'm Isabelle Potter, eldest daughter of Harry Potter. I'm 15 years old, obviously a Gryffindor, I'm not a perfect (thank God) and I'm top in most of my classes. I have short spiky black hair and green eyes, which sometimes look aqua. I love quidditch, and play as seeker; I also love ballet, but I haven't danced very much recently.
My best friends are Melissa Wood, a tall slender brunnette with hazel eyes, Amy Weasley short red headed girl with brown eyes (both gryffindors) and Lucy Lupin a ravenclaw with sandy brown hair (I say its blonde, but she won't admit it) and light blue eyes.When I met them I was eating marshmallows and drinking coffee haha. Suprinsingly I have no boyfriend, Amy does, Ted Longbottom, and Melissa (I think) has a crush on my brother.
So that's my family and friends, and now that you know a bit about them I can start with my story...
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So, this is what I've done so far, it's just the prologue or introduction. Any comments?? Horrible, Good... don't continue, next chapter please?
Please please pleaaase review!!
