Harry Potter and The Heirs to four
A/N: This is a rewrite of the first chapter of Harry Potter and The Heirs to four, hope it's
better than the original! I'm also going to change some facts around but it shouldn't make
much of a difference in the rest of the story.
Cho Chang
It was November 2 at Hogwarts School of witchcraft and wizardry, Harry Potter,
Hermione Granger, and Ron Weasly were just leaving Defense Against the Dark Arts.
Their new teacher Professor Ted Farley had told them to write at least one parchment
about the Blinding spell.
"Can you believe this stupid assignment?" Ron growled, "One full parchment about a
spell that blinds! All you've got to do is write 'The blinding spell (Blindious) causes
blindness.'
"We're supposed to put it into detail Ron" Hermione sighed. "Professor Farley said
we are to write the side effects, how long the spell lasts, and what wand movements we
are to use!"
"So what? I still think that's stupid"
"It is NOT a stupid assignment!"
"Is too"
"Is not"
Harry sighed as Ron and Hermione started to bicker. Suddenly there was silence.
Harry knew full well what was happening, even without turning around. Ever since Ron
and Hermione started going out they argued more than ever but before anyone could stop
them they started making out.
"Harry!" Someone called.
Harry turned around and almost fainted. The one who had called his name was Cho
Chang.
"Uh, hi Cho" Harry said. As soon as Harry said this Cedric Digory's death started
replaying itself in his head.
"Hi Harry, uh can I talk to you in private?"
"Yeah, sure just a second" Harry turned to Hermione and Ron only to find that they
were gone. "Oh they're good" He thought.
Harry turned back to Cho who was looking a little nervous. "Ok, follow me" Harry
said. Cho only nodded.
Side by side Harry and Cho slowly walked down the corridor, into the great hall, into
the entrance hall, and then outside and down to the lake.
"So what do you want to talk to me about?" Harry asked as he turned to Cho.
"Harry, do you remember when you asked me to the ball last year?" Cho asked.
"Yes, you said you were really sorry but you were going with someone else" Harry
smiled as he remember how red his face must of been.
"Well, you see, I wanted to go with you, I really did Harry in fact I was planning on
asking you that morning but I saw you hanging out with Hermione Granger and I thought
you were going with her.
"A little while after that Cedric asked me out and I said yes" Cho sighed.
Harry stood there looking at the lake for a moment. "Will you say yes now?"
Cho's head shot up to look at Harry who was know looking at her. For a second she
just gaped at him but then a small smile formed on her lips.
"Oh no, she's going to laugh at me." Harry thought.
"Yes"
Harry almost leaped for joy but he went with a smile instead.
"You, you will?" He asked hopefully.
"I did say yes didn't I?" Cho said in a mock rude voice.
Harry smiled as his face came closer to her's. Five inches, four inches, three inches,
two inches, one inch, contact. It was almost as if someone threw a lightening bolt the two
teens.
Cho had kissed Cedric before but it never felt like this. A little while later Harry and
Cho broke apart breathing heavily.
"We need to get inside or we'll probably be expelled" Harry said.
"You're right let's go" Cho took Harry's hand and together they walked back up to
the castle.
Is it better? It better be 'cause I'm not going to rewrite this chapter. R/R!
A/N: This is a rewrite of the first chapter of Harry Potter and The Heirs to four, hope it's
better than the original! I'm also going to change some facts around but it shouldn't make
much of a difference in the rest of the story.
Cho Chang
It was November 2 at Hogwarts School of witchcraft and wizardry, Harry Potter,
Hermione Granger, and Ron Weasly were just leaving Defense Against the Dark Arts.
Their new teacher Professor Ted Farley had told them to write at least one parchment
about the Blinding spell.
"Can you believe this stupid assignment?" Ron growled, "One full parchment about a
spell that blinds! All you've got to do is write 'The blinding spell (Blindious) causes
blindness.'
"We're supposed to put it into detail Ron" Hermione sighed. "Professor Farley said
we are to write the side effects, how long the spell lasts, and what wand movements we
are to use!"
"So what? I still think that's stupid"
"It is NOT a stupid assignment!"
"Is too"
"Is not"
Harry sighed as Ron and Hermione started to bicker. Suddenly there was silence.
Harry knew full well what was happening, even without turning around. Ever since Ron
and Hermione started going out they argued more than ever but before anyone could stop
them they started making out.
"Harry!" Someone called.
Harry turned around and almost fainted. The one who had called his name was Cho
Chang.
"Uh, hi Cho" Harry said. As soon as Harry said this Cedric Digory's death started
replaying itself in his head.
"Hi Harry, uh can I talk to you in private?"
"Yeah, sure just a second" Harry turned to Hermione and Ron only to find that they
were gone. "Oh they're good" He thought.
Harry turned back to Cho who was looking a little nervous. "Ok, follow me" Harry
said. Cho only nodded.
Side by side Harry and Cho slowly walked down the corridor, into the great hall, into
the entrance hall, and then outside and down to the lake.
"So what do you want to talk to me about?" Harry asked as he turned to Cho.
"Harry, do you remember when you asked me to the ball last year?" Cho asked.
"Yes, you said you were really sorry but you were going with someone else" Harry
smiled as he remember how red his face must of been.
"Well, you see, I wanted to go with you, I really did Harry in fact I was planning on
asking you that morning but I saw you hanging out with Hermione Granger and I thought
you were going with her.
"A little while after that Cedric asked me out and I said yes" Cho sighed.
Harry stood there looking at the lake for a moment. "Will you say yes now?"
Cho's head shot up to look at Harry who was know looking at her. For a second she
just gaped at him but then a small smile formed on her lips.
"Oh no, she's going to laugh at me." Harry thought.
"Yes"
Harry almost leaped for joy but he went with a smile instead.
"You, you will?" He asked hopefully.
"I did say yes didn't I?" Cho said in a mock rude voice.
Harry smiled as his face came closer to her's. Five inches, four inches, three inches,
two inches, one inch, contact. It was almost as if someone threw a lightening bolt the two
teens.
Cho had kissed Cedric before but it never felt like this. A little while later Harry and
Cho broke apart breathing heavily.
"We need to get inside or we'll probably be expelled" Harry said.
"You're right let's go" Cho took Harry's hand and together they walked back up to
the castle.
Is it better? It better be 'cause I'm not going to rewrite this chapter. R/R!