Hi people sorry for not posting what I promised but here it is comment I am ok with harsh comments as long as they are constructive. Oh ya narration key. Normal= ME Underlined=Brooke Bold =male narrator italacized= female narrator. If its a combination they are talking at the same time Like this. hope you enjoy.
Once apon a time.
Maddie was walking sown by the ocean the breeze in her hair felt nice.
As she walked she thought about what had happened at the Spring Fairest.
"You guys are making it sound like a tragity. Don't be such gloomy Gus's." Maddie said As she walked there was a impending sense of danger.
OH! Is this the part where she finds. Brooke.
Sorry...
"Oh,my Grimm!" As Maddie had been walking she had seen a girl with fire red hair in a mermaid braid falling lighty at her shoulders, pale skin that reminded Maddie of Apple's skin and deep blue eyes. A sea foam green dress clung around her knee's and was slightly wet, a belt that was a brown and looked woven and a dark brown messanger bag. The girl was bare footed an very pretty but looked out of place.
OH! Is that the siren? The other girl that can hear us?
Brooke no spoilers. Do you want to be grounded again?
No. Please don't ground me. "Hey are you ok?" Maddie said shaking the girls shoulder she was awake but looked like she was a million miles away.
"Ummmm, who are you?" The girl asked her voice sounded like the sea, deeper then a normal girls but beutiful.
"I'm Maddie Hatter, daughter of the Mad Hatter. Whats your name?" Maddie asked smileing at the girl.
"My name is Sera Finn. A few generations ago my father took over for the flounder in the little mermaid." The girl now known as Sera said her eye's glaring at Maddie as if trying to figure out if Maddie was fooling her.
Oh can she hear us. Hey,Hey,Hey!
Brooke be quiet.
"Hi again young narrator. Can you hear anything?" Maddie asked and the girl looked confused.
"I...I... *sighs* two females one about our age the other sounds like she is in her early thirtys. The third one is male also in about his mid thirtys." Sera said and looked up questionly. She's right I'm thirty-four. I'm thirty-five. I'm fifteen. (a/n yup they were young the math about 19-20 and dont accuse me of Sera being a mary sue. I drew the ages out of a hat to see if she was right it was weird though cause there was from 30 to 60 so I have no clue how it worked so well. )
"How could you tell that much?" Maddie asked slightly scared at how much she had guessed just from hearing there voices just once.
"I don't know whene I heard them I could tell. It was just in my head I don't know. Also who are they?" Sera said and started studying her nails.
"Thoes are the narrators silly," Maddie said and smiled and took the girl by the hand "You should go see the headmaster to get enrolled in school."
"Um ok?" Sera said suddenly the water shook "What the hex?" Maddie asked and got close to it to look down to the water suddenly a red tentacal shot out of the water and grabbed Maddie and started dragging her down.
Maddie! THIS WASN'T PART OF THE STORY! Suddenly a second splash was heard ,a much lighter one. Sera had doven in and in a sudden flash of bubbles her legs had been replaced with a jade tale she still had on her dress though and it lashed around her as the last of the bubbles covered it.
What is that thing?
"A giant squid. It's the most feared species in the deep." Sera said swiming fast with her tail lashing around
Cast a spell this isn't how its supposed to go!
"Ummmm. Globes of water solidify find my target and hit the mark." She sung, a mermaids power was in there singing she had cast a spell that would hit the squid but Maddie needed help as she could not breath water.
NO REALLY! Yes really so *sighs*
"I hope I can get there in time she's been under two minutes. Hang on I've got it. *whistles* Ara come here." Sera shouted and a shark came shouting down out of the deep and Sera grabbed the dorsle fin and it began to tow her doen to the squid, Maddie was still awake and thrashing terrified.
"Hurry!" Sera shouted and grabbed in her bag and grabbed a small diving knife out of her messanger bag and grabbed onto one of the thrasking squid tentacal and with her knife and aimed at it's eye. "Propele this forward help it's my wepon find its mark." Sera sung and threw her knife which hit the squid in the eye causing it to drop Maddie.
"Hang on." Sera said grabing Maddie's arm "Ara hurry. She need's...air?" Sera said slightly confused
Yes air. And hurry! Ara had started swiming and light was now shining down and the sun was visable now.
"I can take her the rest of the way Ara thank you dear." Sera said and pet the sharks head Is that your pet? Brooke...
Sorry Sera had begun swiming again uo to the light and her face broke the surface as Giles Grimm walked by.
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Yes Ara is her pet and the second part will be put in a better format in a few minutes so please keep reading sorry for these being so hard to read.