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Well this is the new story hope you like it ; )

Darkness had finally consumed the city of Tokyo, after all the bustle of the city. If you were you human you would have never noticed the demon run by, followed by a wickedly dark aura. By the time the demon stopped for a "break" he was on the outskirts of town which was a forest.

"I pant think pant I lost pant her" said the tired demon.

"I think not lowly demon" coldly spoke a female voice.

The demon slowly turned to face his death. There before him stood a black clothed woman, yet he only knew that by her voice. Her face shadowed her face but didn't hide those cold, blood filled eyes.

"You know better than to run from me" coldly said the female.

"I-I-I'mm s-s-sorry L-Lad-d-dy..." stuttered the weak demon.

The demon was interrupted by cold laughter.

"Calling me lady will not stop your painful death demon. I was only going to drain you a bit...but that run made me very hungry. So know instead I'm going to tear your organs out of your body and devour them!" maliciously said the female.

Before the demon could respond, the woman threw the demon onto the ground, straddled his waist, and held onto his wrist.

"Hm...you seem to enjoying this" she whispered.

The woman licked the demons neck and dug her fangs into his neck where she hungrily sucked the blood. It seems the demon was still living but...not till she thrust her hand into his chest where she took his heart out and devoured the organ. She then repeated the action, but with different organs.

"Mmm...tasty" said the female while she laughed evilly.

"Yusuke, Koenma has requested that you look into a death scene just out of Tokyo" said a pink haired girl, known as Botan.

"Yeah, Yeah, just open the stupid portal, sheesh" angrily yelled the badass, Yusuke.

Yusuke then entered a portal in which took him to the scene of the crime.

"Shit, what happened here!" yelled Yusuke.

"It seems like the demon was drained and his intestines were taken" answered the red head, Kurama.

"Hn" shortly said the dark clothed male, Hiei.

The place was filled with the smell of blood. Everything, from trees, to flowers, and the grass was covered in the demons blood. Suddenly Yusuke's communicator went off. It seems like their boss was going to inform them more on the case. They stepped into the blue portal created by Botan, and into Spirit World.

"Hello, it seems that little info is known. It seems like the legend is true..." started Koenma, but was interrupted by Yusuke.

"What legend?"

"Well, there is a legend which talks about a child being born with extreme power. The girl..." Koenma was interrupted once more.

"A girl?" screamed Yusuke.

"Yes, Now stop interrupting! The girl was taken away from the parents to be taken to heaven so it will be brought up with a pure heart. But things went wrong, the child ended up burning a big portion of Heaven. So it was taken to Hell, where the gate was locked. Well, it was said that the Devil had taken her in and would train her to be the greatest evil in the whole universe! She would be known as the Devil's Pride."

So was it good, should I go with it and continue...or what. Well, I know were I'm heading so don't tell me what to do. Well, REVIEW if you liked it, or to comment, whatever...PLEASE REVIEW!