First FanFic, please don't be too harsh.
Alright, so I pretty much re-wrote this chapter and here's the re-write, hope you like it!
DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN MAXIMUM RIDE OR ANY OF IT'S CHARACTERS, JP DOES!
MAX POV
I heard the door-bell ring and I walked over to answer it. I opened it to find my boyfriend Iggy. I was crazy over him.
"Hey Max, we need to talk."
"Hey… what's up?"
"Can we go to your room?"
"…Sure…"
We walked up to my room and he sat on my couch while I flopped on my spinney chair.
"So, what's up?"
"I think we should tell our parents we're dating."
"Hmm..okay..when should this happen?"
"How 'bout tonight."
"Come over to our house for dinner, then we can tell them."
"Alright!" I smiled at him warmly.
***THIS IS A LINE BREAK….THIS LINE BREAK'S NAME IS GEORGE…GEORGE IS DANCING***
I stood at the hidden door in my bedroom that leads to my music room. I opened the door and slipped in quietly. I walked to my guitar and played three songs I had heard on the radio;
(I Heart ? by: Taylor Swift)
(The Best Damn Thing by: Avril Lavinge)
(Magic by: B.O.B.)
By the time I was finally done singing those three, it was almost time for me to go down for dinner. I decided to sing one last song.
(Smile by: Avril Lavinge)
"MAXXXXX!"
"YES NUDGE?"
"GET YOUR BUT DOWN HERE!"
"COMING!"
I ran downstairs to see what she wanted.
"What's up?"
"Iggy. Where is Iggy?" I pointed out the front window to his house across the street.
"WHAT? WHYYYY?"
"He went home, by the way, he invited us to dinner, go get ready."
"Kay." I walked out yelling, "MUM! IGGY INVITED US TO DINNER!"
"ALRIGHT!"
"OKAY. CARSON! NUDGE! ANGEL! CASSIE! COME HERE!" My siblings came running in.
"We are going to the Griffiths for dinner, go get ready, Angel and Carson please get out of your pajamas, Nudge, don't wear anything too fashionable, Cassie, I'll help you pick out your outfit, okay?"
"O-ke-y"
"Awwwww! She's so cute! I can't believe shes four already! ZOMG! When she turns 11 I'm taking her shop-mmfghtrg" Carson covered her mouth with his hand.
"Go get ready!"
Cassie and I made our way to her bedroom to pick out yet another pink outfit. I got her favorite yellow sundress down with pink flowers all over it. She also wore her adorable pink little sandals, she was a bit small for her age, she looks more like a 2½ year old. I carried her to Nudge's room so she would take care of her then ran up to my room. I threw on a somewhat-dressed-up outfit. I wore a black mini tutu and neon green leggings along with a dark purple shirt that 'hugged my curves', Nudge's words, not mine. I put on my red high-tops and ran downstairs to find my family in the living room. Nudge, of course, was wearing a pink mini with a white tank-top and wedge heels – I think that's what she calls them… - Angel looked like, well, an angel in her new blue jeans and pink shirt that had 'LIVE. LAUGH. LOVE.' printed on the front in blue. Carson wore his usual blue jeans and Green Day shirt.
"Well, let's go then." I said to them. Nudge turned around and gasped.
"You.. you're.. YOU'RE WEARING A SKIRT!"
"Your point?"
"You NEVER wear skirts! Is tonight special for some reason..?"
"Nope, let's go, we were supposed to be there five minutes ago.."
"Max..?"
"Yes Angel?"
"Where's my other converse?"
"Under the couch, sweetie, Carson put it under there earlier."
"Maxx…! You spoiled my fun!"
"Sorry buddy.."
We finally walked out of the house and went across the street where we knew mum already was. As we walked in – we never knocked – we called, "We're here!"
"Hey guys! Come on in! Iggy has a friend over Max, they're upstairs in his room."
"Okay! Thanks, Mrs. Griffiths!"
"Call me Kaci, Max, I've told you that a million times!"
"Sorry Kaci.."
I ran up the stairs to Iggy's room. As I came closer I heard talking coming from there..a girl's voice! He has a girl in his bedroom and it's not me! I walked closer then opened the door – again, not knocking, he IS my boyfriend, you know – and I walked in on a scene I wish I hadn't.