Chapter 1: Prologue
By: Nate Wayne
Introduction
The day of October 10, which was also the day 2 very important things happen. First, the Nine-Tails got released from Kushina and then attacked Konoha and killed many people. Also, the second was the birth of Naruto Uzumaki who saved the village without even lifting a finger. But, after Kushina and Minato had died Naruto wasn't taken by Hiruzen, but he was left on the sealing altar where his dad had sealed the beast in him resulting in his and his wife's death. As Naruto cried out, a mysterious figure came walking up to the altar. the figure was wearing his forehead protector sideways on his head, donned Kirigakure's standard uniform and flak jacket. As he walked up to the infant, he began to look around for people, but when he saw the bodies of the 4th Hokage and ex-Jinchuriki of the Nine-Tails he began to think" What the hell happen here? and why is there a baby all the way out here, and what did they seal in this child?" As he got to the baby, he picked it up and told himself " I have to be crazy to take a another jinchuriki to Kirigakure, but I can't just leave him here by himself." So afterthat, he began to walked away from the sealing altar back to Kirigakure with the baby in his arms. Afterthat, Hiruzen and a group of ninja came to the altar only to see the altar was empty which put an concerned look on Hiruzen's face as he ordered the other ninjas to go out and look for the baby and when they do, executed the kidnapper and the baby under orders of the Konoha's council. So as the ninjas went out to look for the baby , Zabuza was already 3 miles outside the city heading toward his home village with Naruto in his arms. Zabuza was met up by his Seven Ninja Swordmen of the Mist teammate Mangetsu who was waiting for him because he didn't want to have to get him out of trouble again. "So what do you got there, Zabuza?" as Mangestu look at Naruto in his teammates arms. "Well I found this baby on an sealing altar when I was passing through the Hidden Leaf and I guess his parents died trying to protect him." Afterthat, the 2 swordsmen continued on their way back to Kiri with the baby in Zabuza's care.
Meanwhile, In Konoha
"We have to find that baby and kill it so that the beast inside it dies." as Homura demanded Hiruzen who had told them that the baby was gone. Afterthat, the ninjas that he had sent to find Naruto came into the meeting room and told the council and Hiruzen that the baby was nowhere in the village. So Koharu ordered them to go gather more ninja and form an search team to go out of the city and look for the demon baby. So the ninjas left as Hiruzen was told by the council that he had to resume the position of Hokage until they can find a suitable replace. Afterthat, they dismissed the meeting as Hiruzen begin walking to the Hokage's Office to resume his position. Meanwhile in the city, the medical-nins were checking on the shinobis and villagers who were caught in the Nine-Tails attack on the village. Then, a medical-nin named Mogusa started healing the injured as the rest of the medical-nins rushed the others to the hospital for better treatment of the injured shinobi and villagers. As they treated the injured, the search team that had been sent out to find Naruto had finally came back without anything which made Hiruzen and the council very angery, but they were now more concerned about there citizens of their villager as well as their village which was destoryed by The 9-Tails. So they will begin to plan on start repairing the village when they get everything back in order.
In Kirigakure, the Next Day
Zabuza was trying to go to sleep, but everytime he was about asleep, Naruto would cry out and then, Zabuza would have to get up and check on the baby. Zabuza doesn't regret picking up the baby, he just wishes he would go to sleep. After an hour of resting without being woke up by crying or anything, Zabuza got up and fixed himself some breakfast, and while fixing his breakfast he grab an book that was about babies and how to raise them. So as he read the book, he began to think "Damn, there's alot of duty when taking care of an infant, oh well I'm the strongest ninja in Kiri I should be able take care for a baby without an problems." So then, Zabuza finishes cooking his breakfast and then he started eating it. After, he'd finished it he begin make some food for the baby that he had learn from the book he was reading. Afterthat, he picked the baby up who was smiling from ear to ear and began feeding Naruto the food he had made. After he had finishes, Zabuza put both of the plates in the sink and began getting into his shinobi gear which he then began to think "How am I going to go to work with no one to take care of this baby, I guess I'm gonna have to take him with me and get an medical-nin to take care of him while I'm gone on missions." As Zabuza made up his mind about what to do with the baby while he was gone on missions. Afterthat, he grab the baby and wrapped him up in a cover because he hadn't got any baby clothes yet. After he had finishes wrapping the baby up, he begin toward the Mizukage's Tower to get his mission with the rest of the Seven Ninja Swordsmen of the Mist.
In Konoha,The same day
As the villagers began to rebuild their village which was now destoryed by the Demon Fox last night, Hiruzen was still thinking about the baby that got away. "Why can we find him, he is a infant he couldn't have just left. Maybe someone found him lying in the altar and took him away. But it wasn't anybody from the village so it must've been from some other village. Still they needed to find the infant and kill it to end the Nine-Tails' life for good." which the an male with white eyes and wears very traditional, loose fitting robes with a long-sleeved, brown haori who introduced himself as Hiashi Hyuga who was there to speak to the Hokage about the tragedy that happen last night which Hiruzen then told the Hyuga clan head that he wasn't in the mood to be bother with any of the Hyuga's problems right now, he had more important things going on. So as Hiruzen said that, Hiashi stormed out of the room in disgust of what the Hokage said to him. Afterthat, Hiruzen went back to his desk and began working on the tons of paperwork left from the 4th Hokage term. As soon as he finished one stack of paperwork, he was interrupted by a knock on his door which then a male with bandages over his right eye came in who which happened to be Hiruzen's rival Danzo Shimura. He told the Hokage that the council wanted to know the progress on getting the 4th Hokage's child which then Hiruzen told him to tell the council that he is handling it and will inform them after the child is captures and executed by his hand. As he said that, Danzo smiled and walked out leaving Hiruzen to his work. Meanwhile, with Danzo as he was walking from the Hokage's office, he was stopped by 2 Anbu ninja who the Hokage had assigned to find Naruto. Danzo asked them if they had found any trace of the kid which the 2 shook their head and continued on their way to the Hokage's office. As the 2 ninjas left, Danzo continued on his way out of the Hokage's Tower and assign a couple of ROOT members to find the infant before Hiruzen does. As the villagers continued to rebuild their village, Danzo went his ROOT's base and assigned a boy named Fu and a female named NonÅ Yakushi to go find the infant and bring him back. Afterthat, the2 nodded and then, they left. Then, Danzo was confronted by a male who had pasty white skin and had long black hair who introduced himself as Orochimaru and was there to see if there was progess on a young boy named Kabuto who Danzo had recruited into the ROOT program and been put under the guidance of Nono. Afterthat, Danzo told the sannin that he had progress greatly under his leadership. Afterthat, Orochimaru left as Danzo began on his work.
Meanwhile in Kiri
As Zabuza and the rest of his team left on an mission, Naruto was left with the Mizukage who had suggested Naruto stayed with him. So as Yagura look after the boy, he began to sense a great amount of chakra in the boy. Just then, he saw a seal on the boy's stomach which made him realize that this boy was a jinchuriki just like him. Then, he heard an voice coming from his head "This boy is the jinchuriki of the Nine-Tails, he will become strong and skill with the right teacher. We have to keep him a secret from the other villages." as Yagura nodded as he began to get up from his seat to feed the baby from the food Zabuza left for him to feed him. As he was doing that, Yagura began to think " You're right Isobu, we should protect and keep this child a secret from the other shinobi countries. He will do great as an apprentice to the Seven Ninja Swordsmen of the Mist, and he will serve Kirigakure greatly." Which then brought an smile to his face. Afterthat, he finishes feeding Naruto which then, he laid Naruto down on the couch in his office so Naruto could take an nap. Afterthat, Yagura went back to his desk and began on the paperwork was on his desk. As he finished the paper, he went to check on Naruto who had awaken from his nap. After he had picked him up and carried him to a window in his , he told Naruto that this will all be his one day and then told him that he is going be a great shinobi even greater than the Sage of 6 path who founded the ninja world. So as he stared out of the window, Yagura began to think "where did this child come from, and if that when will they come for him?" Then, he left his office with Naruto in his care, as he went home to go to bed because it was getting late. So as he got ready for bed, he found Naruto some baby clothes to wear to bed. After he had dressed Naruto in the clothes he had found, he laid Naruto in his old baby crib. Afterthat, he went to bed.
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