Ok, so after reading amazing fanfictions, I decided to give it a try. Please be honest and if you want you can give suggestions on some ideas for the story. Thanks and enjoy!
Italics are the person's thoughts
Kims P.O.V:
Damn, who texts you at 9:30 in the morning on a Saturday. I like my sleep! I picked up the phone to see a text from Edward Thomas Jones the third, to be exact. Also known as my neighbor, dojo buddy, extremely close family friend, and bad boy of Seaford High. But to me, he is Eddie.
To Kim
From Eddie
My mom said for you to come over. Your mom already is over. They have some news they said.
Great, this should be good. I put on my uggs, sweats, and sweatshirt and walked outside. The cold air brushed against my face, making my nose a light shade of pink in the 30 second walk to his house. Oh by the way, I'm Kim Crawford, but call me Kimmy or Kimberly and your dead. I'm 16. I go to Seaford High in California, where I'm know as goodie two-shoes, being that I'm a teacher's pet and get excellent grades. Plus I'm never late. I arrived at Eddie's house. I opened the door. There was Momma and Karen, Eddie's mom, standing in front of the couch. Eddie sat, elbows on knees, in the center of the couch. Elsie, his 4 year old sister, sat to his left adjusting the white and pink polka dot bow on her pink bunny named Lillie. I sat to the right of Eddie. Karen started speaking:
"So Kim...Eddie...Elsie. Mrs. Crawford and I have decided something. Your fathers have two more months in the US until they are deployed overseas again. So we thought we would visit them in Michigan for a their remaining two months here. Kim you will stay at our house for the next two months. Your mom and I dont want you home alone. Plus I trust you more with Elsie than Eddie", she said glancing over at Eddie.
"Mom I can take care of Elsie", he said trying to prove her wrong. I knew he doesn't have an issue with me staying, being that we are so close. But classic Edward always needs to be right.
Karen continued, "of course you are Eddie. Anyway Kim you may want to pack your stuff, we are leaving later tonight." She looked at Elsie. "Be good for Kim and Eddie". Elsie nodded and went back to fidgeting with the bow on the bunny. She glanced at Eddie. "No skipping school, no parties, take care of your sister." Eddie nodded. She nodded and went into the kitchen but stopped midway to the sound of Eddie's "eh em".
"yes Eddie?"
"Aren't you going to tell Kim anything?" he said with a confused look
She snickered. "I don't need to. Kim knows what she doing." And with that she walked away. Momma followed her. I stood up and smiled at Eddie. He Responded with a laugh and got up to get one out of the 3 guest rooms ready. I went back home and packed. Two months with Edward and Elsa. This is should be interesting.
Ok, I know its bad. I rewrote the opening like 3 times. When the story actually gets started it will get better, trust me. Anyway review please! Also any stories I should read? Maybe ill give some shoutouts? Anyway its 11:52 and I spent like an hour on this story. Night!