OK this is my very first fanfict so bear with me. This story is where Jordan wants to tell Molly (AKA Eva) that he loves her. This is also way before the last episode Moment of Truth. Jordan still doesn't know Molly's real name. Oh yeah I don't own Oban Star Racer. OK on with the story.
Sitting outside on the ledge of the Earth Team's Module, Molly was watching the sunset. A sudden sound behind her made her turn around to see who was behind her. Jordan who was watching her from a distance had just scuffed his shoe loudly. Jordan was caught. He was as red as a tomato.
"Sorry", Jordan said.
"Are you watching the sunset too? If you are you can sit with me. Come on girls don't bite, unless you want us to", Molly said.
Jordan was really blushing by now. He glanced over at Molly.
'Her face is so beautiful in the sun's golden-orange color', thought Jordan.
Molly turned her head towards Jordan and saw him staring at her.
"Do I have something on my face, or do I look funny?" Molly asked while thinking 'Guys are such pigs to be looking at girls all the time.'
Jordan thought, "No, your just really beautiful."
Out of nowhere, a hand hit Jordan so hard, he fell backwards. He didn't realize that he had just said what he thought out loud in front of Molly! Molly turned around and stormed back to their room. Jordan was left there horrified. 'I can't believe I said that out loud.' Jordan thought.
In the pilot and gunner's bedroom.
Molly sitting in her hammock, was deep in thought of what had just happened an hour ago.
'Jordan really likes me? That is really nice, but do I even like? Yeah, as a friend, or do I like him as more than a friend? My brain is really starting to hurtt, but I need to think this situtation out.' Molly thought.
With Jordan
It's midnight and Jordan still hasn't gone back to the room. "Why did I say that out loud? Was that thought really so strong that I actually said it out loud? I know I'm more of an out-loud sort of guy, but I know when to think my thoughts, and that was one of those times."
Don Wei was sitting in his office thinking about the race and about Molly (because he was trying to figure out where she used to work as a mechanic before finding Wei companies). He heard someone talking outside. He stood up and walked outside. He saw that Jordan was talking to himself, asking himself why over and over again. He walked up behimd Jordan and laid a hand on his shoulder to get his attention. Oh he got Jordan's attention alright. Jordan swung an arm at Don's leg, knocking him to the ground.
Relieved that it was only Don, but now more afraid than ever. Jordan was afraid he was going to get murdered, until Don started laughing. Jordan thought he had knocked Don Wei sensless.
"You must be in deep enough thought to be talking out loud",Don said through gasping breaths (trying to control himself, because it had been a good long while since he had ever laughed), "What were you thinking about? Was it about a family member, a friend, the army?"
Scared to even answer Jordan chose,"A friend."
"Girl or boy?", Don asked. ( This may start sounding like a twenty questions game. sorry about that it kind of just come to me.)
"Girl"
"What about this girl? Does she have a name?"
Thinking this was man to man talk, Jordan was going to lie a little. " Her name is Molly, not the one that's here with us on Oban. She's been my friend for a long time. I think I like as more than friend, but I'm not sure of how she'll act if I tell her how I feel. What do you think I should do?"
"Just go for it, tell that girl how you feel, you need a girlfriend sometime in your teenage life."
"Thanks, sir."
"Call me Don for this conversation."
"Well, sorry to say this, Don, but I think I'm going to go to bed now. It's after midnight and you know there's another race tomorrow that we need to win. Goodnight"
And with that Jordan walked back to the room hoping Molly was asleep.
In the dark Jordan had stripped down to his undeshirt and boxers and was getting into bed. He had just rolled over to the middle of the bed when his hand touched something. It was Molly's hand. She was just lying there staring at him with patient eyes. He knew he had to say or do something. Molly beat him to it.
"Come on, we need to talk. Let's go for a walk on the ground.",Molly said in a kind of caring and understanding voice,"I promise I won't hit you again."
Taking the portal, they ended up on the ground. Molly had on a t-shirt and shorts. Jordan was still in an undershirt and boxers. It ws a little coole than all the other nights. They walked until they were in front of the pond of scores. They sat on a log by the water. Looking at all the lightning bugs, Molly just sat and waited for Jordan to speak first. It was the most awkward moment for Jordan.
Clearing his throat, Molly turned to look at him. He had her full attention now. He wasn't going to back down now. (mostly because Molly wouldn't let him go until they talked through this whole problem.)
"Form the very first day I met you I thought that you were kind of closed up to yourself. I just wanted to help you open up your life and share your feelings with me, and I would be able to do the same. Something has always gotten in the way of that. I promised myself the next time I would open up my feelings to you. Now that were all alone and there is no one to interrupt I can finally tell you something that has been bugging me since the first day we met. I...I l-love you, Molly.", Jordan had a whole lot of trouble with saying all of it and making sure what he said made sense, but it all came out.
"I've been doing a lot of thinking since I hit you, and I finally came to a conclusion. I hit you, because I was scared of my own feelings. I know have never opened up to anyone, becase ever since my mother died, I promised myself I would never get that close to anyone ever again, but you always pushed on and on. I sometimes just wanted to smack you, because I just wanted to be alone, but now I see you were just trying to help me. I wasn't sure of how I felt about you, until now. I didn't know how my heart felt. I just think it best to say that I actually love you with all my heart."Molly finished and Jordan lifted her into his lap. Tilting her face so it was a direct eye contact, he leaned towards her slowly. They were inches away before Molly said," Wait, I think I should tell you something very important. What do you think my name is?"
Jordan thought this was a joke,"Molly", he stated.
"Your wrong.", a tear ran down her cheek. Jordan wiped it away for her.
"What do you mean your name's not Molly?"
"Before I answer your question, do you think we should always be honest with each other?" she asked.
"Of course, why wouldn't we be?" Jordan asked.
"Well my name's not Molly. It's Eva Wei. This lie I've been living started out with me breaking out of school, then Don Wei, my father, didn't recognize me at all, so I had to lie to him to hide my true identity from him. I'm so sorry, but I couldn't tell you at least not yet. I decided I would tell you everything tonght. Please forgive me." at this she started crying silently into his chest. Jordan wrapped his arms around her and whispered to her "I don't care what your name is, but I still love you no matter what."
She ceased her tears and looked at him, knowing he was telling the truth. He leaned in and kissed her. Her hands on his chest. She started feeling his chest. Somehow her fingers ended up in his hair, twirling the locks of black and blonde. Jordan put his arms around her waist and deepend the kiss. They broke apart after a few minutes, but the kiss seemed to last forever. Eva smiled at Jordan. Jordan was so happy, but a couple of questions still bothered him. Which name should he say in front of the others, and what will Don think about him going out with his daughter? They walked hand and hand back to the portal. Then they went to bed. The next day was a new day.
OK that was my first fanfict. I hope to get more chapters on this. story. Please review. I'm telling you now that I do take harsh critizism. If you didn't like this story I'm sorry. In my next chapter the questions will be answered. If you have any ideas on how you want this to end up please tell me.
