A/N: This is my first attempt to write a story so go easy on my ok?
Kitsune-Yasha's appearance.
Ch. 1
"Hmm, Hmm, Hmm" sang Kagome while she took a bath.
'Good thing Kagome told me she was going to take a bath' Thought Miroku while he watched Kagome take a bath, 'Yes...under the-" Something fast as light just flew by and knocked him down, "InuYasha, is that you?" asked Miroku. He saw a blue InuYasha but it/he didn't talk back. Suddenly he disappeared into thin air.
"Miroku you little-" Kagome shouted at Miroku.
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At noon, the next day, InuYasha, Kagome, Sango, Miroku and Shippo were walking in the forest.
"I sense a Shikon Jewel shard!" said Kagome.
"Where is it? Tell me!" InuYasha asked
"Over there!" Kagome pointed to the right.
They saw a blue light moving around them.
"Show yourself demon!" InuYasha cried.
"..." The demon didn't answer. Suddenly it popped out of the forest and attacked InuYasha.
'Damn, he's fast' Thought InuYasha, "Who the hell do you think you are?"
"Are you okay, InuYasha?" Kagome asked.
"Go away! I don't want you to get hurt" InuYasha said to Kagome.
The demon jumped out again and scrached InuYasha on the chest.
"It's no use, InuYaha" Naraki said suddently appearing.
"Shut the hell up!" InuYasha screamed at him.
"My new servant shall once and for all defeat you. I'm sure you'll enjoy him. For he has been made of you flesh and blood... and hatred. Kukukuku" Naraku said as he disappeared.
'Where is he?' InuYasha thought.
"Right here" The demon said, appearing behind InuYasha.
"InuYasha!" Kagome shouted.
Suddenly the demon stopped and looked at Kagome. He then started running toward Kagome as his nails got longer. He swung his arm at Kagome.
"Kagome!!!" InuYasha screamed.
"Ahh!!!" Kagome shouted as she fell to the ground.
A/N: well that's all I would like very much if you'd review AND just constructive criticism, I don't want ANY flames get it?