Chapter 2
The Robber
A boy named Tremor is at home, in his huge room on the bed listening to music. He is wearing a shirt with the picture of the sky. His dark blue pants are down to his feet over his dirty white shoes. His room was huge. His computer was against the back wall as soon as you came into his room(on an black desk). His bed was to your right, his desk to your left, his radio(stereo) next to his bed, his laptop was beside him on his bed. His toys were stuff in the closet(they would fall out as soon as you opened it). He has SEVEN SISTERS, a silly mother, and an strong father. He was relaxing until he heard his mother downstairs.
Tremor! Tremor! TREMOR!! says Tremor's Mother.
Yes mom! says Tremor coming out of his room and running downstairs to his mother in the living room. His mother was wearing white kitchen mittens, a black shirt, and a pair of weird designed shorts. She was wearing sandals that were black. She had money in her hand.
I want you to go to the store and buy some groceries. Here's 100 dollars. You should have 50 dollars left. says mom.
Hey mom! Can I buy a new pair of shoes? says Tremor looking down at his dirty white shoes.
What kind are you buying? says mom.
I want to buy Skechers. Is that ok? says Tremor.
Well........... I guess that's ok, but make sure you buy one that's for $48.85 cents or cheaper. says mom.
$48.85 cents or cheaper? says Tremor.
That's right! Now you should have $1.15 cents left(that's if he bought one for $48.85 cents)! You can buy a chocolate bar or just candy at Chobar, but if you don't want to buy any candy then bring back the money! says mom.
$1.15 cents? So if I have that much left I can buy any candy at Chobar? says Tremor.
Yes! Now stop acting like your dumb! says mom.
All right! I was just playing! Now mom. What food do I have to buy at the supermarket? Do you have a list? says Tremor.
Yes I have a list. Here's the list. Now I want you back home as soon as possible before dinner is ready! says mom.
Before dinner is ready? What time will dinner be ready? says Tremor.
Dinner will be ready at 8:00. I better see those Skechers you are going to buy at the shoe store. Cause if I don't! You're in big trouble young man! says mom.
Don't worry I will! Oh, Mom! Before I leave, if there's change left after I buy some candy from Chobar. Can I keep the change as a tip? It's because since I'm going to the store to buy you some groceries. I feel like I should get a tip. says Tremor.
You already got a tip! That tip is you getting a new pair of shoes, and those shoes are Sketchers! says mom.
Oh! Come on mom! Those shoes cost money, but I don't get money. says Tremor.
OK! you can have the change that's left. Besides the change might not be anything but a few nickels! says mom.
THANK YOU MOM! says Tremor in a happy way.
You're welcome Tremor. You may be a brat sometimes, but at least you got some manners. says mom.
Mom! You're making me blush! says Tremor.
Oh no! My pie could be burnt! Better go check on it. says mom. She ran into the kitchen.
Well better get going. What time is it? IT'S 4:30! The shoe store will be closed in an hour! Better get going! says Tremor.
Tremor ran out the door and went into the garage to get his shiny red bicycle and ride to the supermarket as fast as he can.
Well I'm here now. Now, what do I have to get? Where's the list? Here it is. Now let me start shopping. says Tremor.
Tremor got off his bike and put it on a pole. He took out an short chain locker, and tied it around the metal pole. Tremor started shopping for an half an hour. When Tremor was done he walked outside with a cart that was full of bags.
Now let me check this receipt and let me count my change just in case the cashier tried to rob me. says Tremor.
Excuse me little boy. says a person who just came out from the supermarket.
Am I'm in the way? I'm so sorry! I'll just move out your way. says Tremor.
The person walked past him. Now where was I? Oh yea, checking my receipt. says Tremor.
A person wearing black(an black jacket, black pants, and black shirt) comes over to Tremor. Hands up little boy! Give up your bags before I kill you! says ???.
Yea whatever! I can probably beat you myself! You probably don't even have an gun! says Tremor while he's still reading the receipt.
You're wrong Tremor! The gun is right here in front of your face! says ???.
Hey how you.... Awww! says Tremor when he looks up from the receipt he was reading.
You scream for help or fight back I will shoot you! Now Tremor. I want you to put the bags in the car! (he points to an car across the You see that blue car. Put the bags in the trunk! says ???.
Yes miss! says Tremor.
I'm not miss! I'm sir! says ???.
Sorry sir. Well, yes sir! I'll put the bags in your blue car in the trunk sir! Just please don't shoot me! says Tremor.
Well get to it or I will shoot you! says ???.
Yes sir! says Tremor. He put the bags in the guys blue car.
Good Tremor. You are a nice boy who listens. says ???.
Thank you sir. says Tremor in a scared way.
Don't be scared Tremor. I'm not going to shoot you, because you been a good boy. Just because I said that doesn't mean I won't shoot for being a good boy! Are you done yet!? says ???.
Yes! I just finished sir! says Tremor in a scared way.
I have a question for you Tremor. How did you buy all these groceries? You better not lie to me! Cause if you do, you know what happens! says ???.
I don't lie unless I have to. I got this money from my mother. says Tremor.
Let me see your receipt! says ???.
Tremor hands over the receipt slowly his hands were shaking. I see you bought a lot of things. You should have change left. The change is....... 50 DOLLARS!! exclaimed ???.
Uh Oh! exclaimed Tremor. Now he knows..... I can't run........ what should I do!? I can't do anything! Tremor thought.
Hand over the 50 dollars! says ???.
What 50 dollars? says Tremor, pretending he didn't know what he was talking about.
Don't play with me TREMOR! says ???.
Putting the gun in Tremor's mouth. Tremor puts up his hands and started crying. Tremor puts one finger up trying to say wait. He puts his hand in his pocket and takes out an 50 dollar bill. Then ??? takes the gun out of Tremors mouth.
That's more like it. says ??? in an happy way.
Then he snatched the 50 dollar bill out of Tremor's hand.
Now you try to play with me again I will blow your head OFF! TO BITS! says ??? in a mad way.
Yes sir... says Tremor in a crying way.
Now I am leaving. You tell anybody what just happened... I WILL COME BACK AND KILL YOU!!! YOU HEAR ME TREMOR!! YOU BETTER KEEP THIS AS A SECRET!! says ??? in a yelling way.
I won't tell sir! I promise to not tell this secret! says Tremor in a crying way.
Good. says ??? in a calm way.
??? jumps in the car.
Wait! says Tremor. Tremor stops crying. How did you know my name? says Tremor in a scared way.
Hmph! I just know. Bye, Tremor. says ???.
??? drove away out of Tremor's sight. Tremor sat down on the edge of the sidewalk and started crying. He stopped crying about ten minutes later. A woman came by him. The woman had on a brown silk skirt, and a brown short sleeve shirt that was silky like her skirt. Her shoes were light brown, matching her outfit. Tremor got up.
Excuse me miss. Do you know what time it is? says Tremor in a sad way.
It's 5:35. says the woman.
5:35. Thank you miss. says Tremor in a sad way trying to sound happy.
Your welcome young man. You seem like a brave little boy. says the woman.
Really? says Tremor in a sad way.
Yes you sound brave! I really mean it! says the woman in a happy way.
Thank you miss... says Tremor in a sad way. I think she is trying to cheer me up. Tremor thought.
Well, I got to go! Nice meeting you! says the woman.
The woman ran off.
Well, I better get home to. I think I'll take my time. says Tremor in a sad way.
He unchained his bicycle and rode home.
An hour later.... Oh no! I took the wrong way home! Well I have no choice, but to go over these bumps! says Tremor.
Should I tell my seven silly sisters about this scary secret? My mother? My father? I don't know what to do. Tremor thought.
When he arrived home he put his bicycle in the garage. He walked on the wooden porch steps. Took out his keys, opened the metal door as quick as he can, ran upstairs to his room, shut his door and locked it.
Tremor are you home!? mom yells from downstairs.
Tremor unlocks the door and cracks it a little bit.
Yes! I'm home! Tremor yelled.
Good! I was just about to call the police to look for you, but I'm glad your safe! yelled mom.
I'm just fine mom! yelled Tremor.
Your sisters are watching a movie down here! Are you going to watch it!? yelled mom.
No thanks mom! yelled Tremor.
All right it's up to you! Don't forget, dinner will be ready soon! yelled mom.
Yes! I know mom! yelled Tremor.
All right! I'll call you when dinner is ready! yelled mom.
OK! yelled Tremor.
Tremor closed the door and locked it. Tremor sits on his bed, sitting there thinking what to say to his parents and sisters.
Was the story good? As you can see it is separated pretty good. It was all stuck together, but I separated it to make it easier to read. Chapter 3 is coming soon! You'll love it! There is going to be more action and adventure.
A boy named Tremor is at home, in his huge room on the bed listening to music. He is wearing a shirt with the picture of the sky. His dark blue pants are down to his feet over his dirty white shoes. His room was huge. His computer was against the back wall as soon as you came into his room(on an black desk). His bed was to your right, his desk to your left, his radio(stereo) next to his bed, his laptop was beside him on his bed. His toys were stuff in the closet(they would fall out as soon as you opened it). He has SEVEN SISTERS, a silly mother, and an strong father. He was relaxing until he heard his mother downstairs.
Tremor! Tremor! TREMOR!! says Tremor's Mother.
Yes mom! says Tremor coming out of his room and running downstairs to his mother in the living room. His mother was wearing white kitchen mittens, a black shirt, and a pair of weird designed shorts. She was wearing sandals that were black. She had money in her hand.
I want you to go to the store and buy some groceries. Here's 100 dollars. You should have 50 dollars left. says mom.
Hey mom! Can I buy a new pair of shoes? says Tremor looking down at his dirty white shoes.
What kind are you buying? says mom.
I want to buy Skechers. Is that ok? says Tremor.
Well........... I guess that's ok, but make sure you buy one that's for $48.85 cents or cheaper. says mom.
$48.85 cents or cheaper? says Tremor.
That's right! Now you should have $1.15 cents left(that's if he bought one for $48.85 cents)! You can buy a chocolate bar or just candy at Chobar, but if you don't want to buy any candy then bring back the money! says mom.
$1.15 cents? So if I have that much left I can buy any candy at Chobar? says Tremor.
Yes! Now stop acting like your dumb! says mom.
All right! I was just playing! Now mom. What food do I have to buy at the supermarket? Do you have a list? says Tremor.
Yes I have a list. Here's the list. Now I want you back home as soon as possible before dinner is ready! says mom.
Before dinner is ready? What time will dinner be ready? says Tremor.
Dinner will be ready at 8:00. I better see those Skechers you are going to buy at the shoe store. Cause if I don't! You're in big trouble young man! says mom.
Don't worry I will! Oh, Mom! Before I leave, if there's change left after I buy some candy from Chobar. Can I keep the change as a tip? It's because since I'm going to the store to buy you some groceries. I feel like I should get a tip. says Tremor.
You already got a tip! That tip is you getting a new pair of shoes, and those shoes are Sketchers! says mom.
Oh! Come on mom! Those shoes cost money, but I don't get money. says Tremor.
OK! you can have the change that's left. Besides the change might not be anything but a few nickels! says mom.
THANK YOU MOM! says Tremor in a happy way.
You're welcome Tremor. You may be a brat sometimes, but at least you got some manners. says mom.
Mom! You're making me blush! says Tremor.
Oh no! My pie could be burnt! Better go check on it. says mom. She ran into the kitchen.
Well better get going. What time is it? IT'S 4:30! The shoe store will be closed in an hour! Better get going! says Tremor.
Tremor ran out the door and went into the garage to get his shiny red bicycle and ride to the supermarket as fast as he can.
Well I'm here now. Now, what do I have to get? Where's the list? Here it is. Now let me start shopping. says Tremor.
Tremor got off his bike and put it on a pole. He took out an short chain locker, and tied it around the metal pole. Tremor started shopping for an half an hour. When Tremor was done he walked outside with a cart that was full of bags.
Now let me check this receipt and let me count my change just in case the cashier tried to rob me. says Tremor.
Excuse me little boy. says a person who just came out from the supermarket.
Am I'm in the way? I'm so sorry! I'll just move out your way. says Tremor.
The person walked past him. Now where was I? Oh yea, checking my receipt. says Tremor.
A person wearing black(an black jacket, black pants, and black shirt) comes over to Tremor. Hands up little boy! Give up your bags before I kill you! says ???.
Yea whatever! I can probably beat you myself! You probably don't even have an gun! says Tremor while he's still reading the receipt.
You're wrong Tremor! The gun is right here in front of your face! says ???.
Hey how you.... Awww! says Tremor when he looks up from the receipt he was reading.
You scream for help or fight back I will shoot you! Now Tremor. I want you to put the bags in the car! (he points to an car across the You see that blue car. Put the bags in the trunk! says ???.
Yes miss! says Tremor.
I'm not miss! I'm sir! says ???.
Sorry sir. Well, yes sir! I'll put the bags in your blue car in the trunk sir! Just please don't shoot me! says Tremor.
Well get to it or I will shoot you! says ???.
Yes sir! says Tremor. He put the bags in the guys blue car.
Good Tremor. You are a nice boy who listens. says ???.
Thank you sir. says Tremor in a scared way.
Don't be scared Tremor. I'm not going to shoot you, because you been a good boy. Just because I said that doesn't mean I won't shoot for being a good boy! Are you done yet!? says ???.
Yes! I just finished sir! says Tremor in a scared way.
I have a question for you Tremor. How did you buy all these groceries? You better not lie to me! Cause if you do, you know what happens! says ???.
I don't lie unless I have to. I got this money from my mother. says Tremor.
Let me see your receipt! says ???.
Tremor hands over the receipt slowly his hands were shaking. I see you bought a lot of things. You should have change left. The change is....... 50 DOLLARS!! exclaimed ???.
Uh Oh! exclaimed Tremor. Now he knows..... I can't run........ what should I do!? I can't do anything! Tremor thought.
Hand over the 50 dollars! says ???.
What 50 dollars? says Tremor, pretending he didn't know what he was talking about.
Don't play with me TREMOR! says ???.
Putting the gun in Tremor's mouth. Tremor puts up his hands and started crying. Tremor puts one finger up trying to say wait. He puts his hand in his pocket and takes out an 50 dollar bill. Then ??? takes the gun out of Tremors mouth.
That's more like it. says ??? in an happy way.
Then he snatched the 50 dollar bill out of Tremor's hand.
Now you try to play with me again I will blow your head OFF! TO BITS! says ??? in a mad way.
Yes sir... says Tremor in a crying way.
Now I am leaving. You tell anybody what just happened... I WILL COME BACK AND KILL YOU!!! YOU HEAR ME TREMOR!! YOU BETTER KEEP THIS AS A SECRET!! says ??? in a yelling way.
I won't tell sir! I promise to not tell this secret! says Tremor in a crying way.
Good. says ??? in a calm way.
??? jumps in the car.
Wait! says Tremor. Tremor stops crying. How did you know my name? says Tremor in a scared way.
Hmph! I just know. Bye, Tremor. says ???.
??? drove away out of Tremor's sight. Tremor sat down on the edge of the sidewalk and started crying. He stopped crying about ten minutes later. A woman came by him. The woman had on a brown silk skirt, and a brown short sleeve shirt that was silky like her skirt. Her shoes were light brown, matching her outfit. Tremor got up.
Excuse me miss. Do you know what time it is? says Tremor in a sad way.
It's 5:35. says the woman.
5:35. Thank you miss. says Tremor in a sad way trying to sound happy.
Your welcome young man. You seem like a brave little boy. says the woman.
Really? says Tremor in a sad way.
Yes you sound brave! I really mean it! says the woman in a happy way.
Thank you miss... says Tremor in a sad way. I think she is trying to cheer me up. Tremor thought.
Well, I got to go! Nice meeting you! says the woman.
The woman ran off.
Well, I better get home to. I think I'll take my time. says Tremor in a sad way.
He unchained his bicycle and rode home.
An hour later.... Oh no! I took the wrong way home! Well I have no choice, but to go over these bumps! says Tremor.
Should I tell my seven silly sisters about this scary secret? My mother? My father? I don't know what to do. Tremor thought.
When he arrived home he put his bicycle in the garage. He walked on the wooden porch steps. Took out his keys, opened the metal door as quick as he can, ran upstairs to his room, shut his door and locked it.
Tremor are you home!? mom yells from downstairs.
Tremor unlocks the door and cracks it a little bit.
Yes! I'm home! Tremor yelled.
Good! I was just about to call the police to look for you, but I'm glad your safe! yelled mom.
I'm just fine mom! yelled Tremor.
Your sisters are watching a movie down here! Are you going to watch it!? yelled mom.
No thanks mom! yelled Tremor.
All right it's up to you! Don't forget, dinner will be ready soon! yelled mom.
Yes! I know mom! yelled Tremor.
All right! I'll call you when dinner is ready! yelled mom.
OK! yelled Tremor.
Tremor closed the door and locked it. Tremor sits on his bed, sitting there thinking what to say to his parents and sisters.
Was the story good? As you can see it is separated pretty good. It was all stuck together, but I separated it to make it easier to read. Chapter 3 is coming soon! You'll love it! There is going to be more action and adventure.