AN: Hello every pony, or everyone depending if you're not a brony or pegasister that reads this story, I'm new to Fanfiction and this will be my first story! I've always had a big imagination for most of my stories in mind, and now I'll finally be able to type them out here on this website! This isn't even my main OC this is a story that I always wanted to write, but I never had the time (Until now that is). Anyway, this is New Story that I will be making, and it'll be a big adventure for everyone! Hope you all enjoy it and I'll be sure to update more chapters here, and there!

OC: Blaze Dartz

OC: Fire Heart

OC: Adeen Flame

Owned By: (UT Midnight Sky)

"Normal" = Speech

'Italics' = Thought


A Blazing Heart

Chapter One: The Story Begins

It was a dark beautiful night. Stars were scattered all across the night sky, shining brightly on the ponies below when they slept. One particular cloaked Pegasus filly was awake smiling with glee at the sky. Her name was Adeen Flame, known to others as Adeen. She had a tan coat, her messy mane and tail that held a fiery resemblance. Her eyes a dark orange with a mix of red from her mother. Adeen giggled looking at the stars, running amuck in her room, jumping on her bed, and running back to look at the stars. As she did, a friendly eagle flew around her room squawking quietly for her to go to sleep.

"Alight Adeen, it's time to go to bed." A voice spoke. Adeen turned her head to face her father, Blaze Dartz. A Pegasus stallion that would fight for his family. His fire red coat was hard to miss, including his bright orange eyes. His orange and red tipped mane was styled to the left, not to fancy, but not to messy. He smiled as he picked up his daughter, Adeen giggling as her father ticked her.

"D-Daddy!" Adeen giggled, "S-stop it!" She said laughing.

Blaze chuckled softly, "Do you promise you'll go to bed?" He stopped to ask.

Adeen made puppy eyes, "Yes!" She replied.

"You sure?" Blaze asked, not convinced, "Minerva here says that she's been trying to get you to sleep, but you won't." Blaze said as the eagle, Minerva, landed on his back.

"I will! I promise!" Adeen said cutely

Blaze smiled, picking his daughter he placed her in her bed. He untied her cloak and placed it on her desk, then pulled the sheets over her, "Comfy?" He asked

"Yes." Adeen said snuggling into the blanket.

Blaze chuckled, "Goodnight my little flame." He kissing her forehead.

"Wait daddy!" She stopped him

Blaze stopped his movements, "what is it?" He asked

Adeen frowned sadly, "can you tell me the story before I go to sleep?" She asked, pulling her cutest puppy eyes.

Blaze sighed, "You want to hear it again?" He asked, "Haven't you heard it once before?" He questioned his daughter

"Yes!" Adeen cried out happily, "I still have questions about the Warriors!"She paused for a moment, "Can mommy tell it too?" She asked, "she always makes the story better." She stated

Blaze playfully frowned, "I can't tell stories?" He proceeded to chuckled, "Heart, dear. Can you come in here? Adeen wants to hear the story from both of us." He asked

"Well, she very much enjoys it honey." A soft voice stated. In walked a Pegasus mare with a tan coat, her eyes burning a beautiful red color. Her mane was currently messy from the work she had done earlier. The light brown mane was scattered across her face making her look like a monster. Fire heart, the mother of Adeen Flame and wife of Blaze Dartz.

Adeen giggled, "Mommy's a monster!" She said playfully

"Am I now?" She questioned, "then I guess I have to eat you!" She softly picked up Adeen, blowing into her stomach.

Adeen laughed uncontrollably, "M-Mommy stop it!" She asked.

"Oh alright." She placed Adeen back under her covers as both Heart and Blaze stood next to he. Heart took sight of the cloak and raised a brow, "And where did she get this?" She questioned Blaze, holding the cloak

"Oh, well um, Midnight gave it to her as a gift." He stated embarrassing.

Heart just shook her head at her husband, smiling. Placing the cloak back down, heart moved next to Adeen. Minerva flew next to her, "So you want to hear the story again?" She questioned her daughter.

"Yes!" Adeen said happily

"Well, then. We'll have to start from the beginning." Heart said. She glanced over to Blaze half smirking, "You start first."

Blaze rolled his eyes, "Of course I start…" He mumbled. Minerva squawked at him, "Alright then let's start from the very beginning." He said to Adeen staring into her eyes.


When I was a little colt, my parents would tell me a true story; one that I wouldn't believe until I was older. They would tell me of a time where darkness and evil was everywhere, and that all would fall beneath it… But there was hope. They spoke of a group of six ponies, Three Stallions and Three mares, that would fight this evil. In the end, after the chaos of battle and war, Good always wins against evil. After the evil was dispelled from the world, the ponies in the group fell in love with their respective mares, and they lived on with their colts and fillies. I never believed it of course, but as years passed by I never would have thought it would be real.