This was going to be a chapter to WTP? But I pick to remove it cause it just is so dumb I do know there is a few error's but I wrote this on the road will looking outside, so this is me writing without looking at the screen.
"Mike!" A voice yelled, I slowly open my eye and look around
"Cameron?" I asked
"Your okay bud?" he asked as he help me up
"I think" I said softly
"You took a huge fall off that boat your sure your okay? Blood is coming out of your head, that's not what I would called okay"
"it is? OMG will I be okay?"
"you should be, unless you mess up your brain"
"What do you mean?"
"What can you see beside me?"
"Nothing why?"
"See thinks to that the readers don't know what's happening! It also gives the witter the right to be lazy"
"I think I see um Zoey over there on top of that small hill that's in the snape of a cat"
"Will we may need to do plan K"
"are we going to rape her?"
"What NO! Mike WTH!" Cameron snap at me
"It just plan K sound like you know plan R, so um plan R is the rape part right?"
"MIKE! Fouse on me not on ou know making out with Zoey"
"Okay fine! So what is your plan K?"
"It's the plan where we go and ask Zoey to forgive you, then you can kiss her"
"But no r-"
"No, Mike just no"
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"Now we just say sorry about Vito doing the dancing with Anne maria"
"Why had you been acting odd lately?" Cameron asked me,
"I always act odd, now let's do PLAN K! Then plan R!"
"NO PLAN R! Fouse on saying sorry to Zoey"
I slam the door open.
"Okay that works" Cameron said.
"Zoey! I am you know banana men"
"MIKE! Stop messing everything up, say sorry" Cameron said from outside the window
"I meant sorry."
"Are you sure you meant sorry?" Zoey asked.
"YES! I am half sure, Cameron is the other half"
Cameron bang his head on the window. "Idiot"
"So no more Vito right?"
"Yes! If I do Vito you can hit me as many times as you want"
"Okay sure whatever now let's get back to the other side of the island and Mike there is blood on your head"
"Can we do plan R yet?"
"How many times did I say NO PLAN R!"
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