Ay.... This is my first fanfic ever, so I don't know how to really write them....all suggestions are WELCOMED! Ideas, too...also, I'm from California, so I don't know about the deal with people's names.....if I copied you in ANY way, tell me & I will change it! K, here we go.......
Complications of Love
By Snow Rabbit/Bunny
Chapter 1
Syaoran held Sakura tight in his arms, knowing that he would never, ever let go of her. They both felt complete knowing that he loved her and she loved him. As the rays of the rising sun danced upon them, they looked deeply into each other's eyes.
"So it turned out all right for you two. I'm glad", said a deep, mysterious, yet familiar voice.
They looked around until their eyes met some familiar faces.
"Ooh, Sakura, how kawaii!!!" gushed Tomoyo, holding her camcorder.
Meiling looked proud, like she had won and she had been responsible for this happy scene.
Sakura blushed and Syaoran followed suit..."It wasn't them,"said Syaoran, in a soft whisper.
Sakura had forgotten that they were still on the roof. She reached for a card. FLY. *Fly, please grant both Syaoran and I the ability to fly...* She threw the card into the air. "FLY!"
Syaoran's eyes got HUGE as little green wings sprung up on his back. Sakura had also gained her wings. They were about to descend together, but a noise stopped Syaoran, "HHAAAAAAA HAAAAHAAAAAAAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAAAAAAAA! How funny, Syaoran!" Meiling.
Syaoran became his famous beet red and followed Sakura to the floor. Sakura felt a familiar presence. "Clow Reed!" Three familiar figures appeared out of the shadows.
*gasp* "Eriol! What are you doing here?"asks Sakura. She pulled away from Syaoran and held his hands, which in response, he blushed.
There was a long pause, as if he was thinking about what he should say.
"I have come here to see how you would get out of this one, but, I guess I am too slow. You both have truly proven yourselves."
Syaoran looked suspicious, but says, "Mmmuph, fine then." He was still bitter at Eriol for his trickery before, but respected him, a LITTLE.
Meiling almost fell backward." You two haven't changed! Can't you see that he is hiding something! Don't excuse him like that!"
For just a moment, Eriol looked like he had been caught, but he very quickly, he plastered on a convincing innocent look. Out of the corner of his eye he saw Tomoyo smiling sweetly at him, and almost broke his concentration.
"I'll tell you! Hecameheretotaketheconsequenceforyouandsyaoranbecauseheknewthathewouldbe thestro--"Nankuru said ina hurry right before Eriol literally made her speechless. He looked really annoyed and guilty (if it's possible!).
"He alsowantedtowarnyouofth--"Suppi tried to say, when he was unable to speak as well.
Sakura, Tomoyo, and Meiling looked blank. Syaoran, however looked shocked.
"Y-y-you were gonna do tha--warn us of wha?" Syaoran managed to say.
"YOU UNDERSTOOD THAT!!!???" asked Sakura, Meiling, and Tomoyo.
"I need to warn you, Sakura, t-t-to not use your magic for 10 years beginning at the end of this very day..." Eriol paused.
Tears came to Sakura's eyes, "WHY?"
"Bec---" Eriol disappeared with a snap. Because they heavily relied on him, Suppi and Nankuru fizzled out, leaving the group stunned.
*Somewhere Else*
Eriol opened his eyes. He was in a dark place, tied up. He tried to use his magic to light it up and free himself, but it didn't work.
"Eriol, your magic or anyone else's powers, for that matter, will not work here."
"Why NOT?" Eriol demanded, "Who are YOU supposed to be? Where am I? How do you know me, hm?"
"Ah, my apologies, I'm Devanii, I control Destiny and I take it upon myself to make sure it happens. To answer your other questions, no magic works in the Between, where we are. And, who doesn't know you, or at least, who doesn't know the former you, Clow Reed."
" So what? Release me at once! If I'm so famous, then you should treat me with proper respect!"
"YOU ARE BEING PUNISHED HERE! YOU MAY NOT INTERFERE WITH DESTINY! YOU WILL BE HERE FOREVER!!!"
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Sorry this is so short, I just want to know what everyone thinks before I do anymore...
Complications of Love
By Snow Rabbit/Bunny
Chapter 1
Syaoran held Sakura tight in his arms, knowing that he would never, ever let go of her. They both felt complete knowing that he loved her and she loved him. As the rays of the rising sun danced upon them, they looked deeply into each other's eyes.
"So it turned out all right for you two. I'm glad", said a deep, mysterious, yet familiar voice.
They looked around until their eyes met some familiar faces.
"Ooh, Sakura, how kawaii!!!" gushed Tomoyo, holding her camcorder.
Meiling looked proud, like she had won and she had been responsible for this happy scene.
Sakura blushed and Syaoran followed suit..."It wasn't them,"said Syaoran, in a soft whisper.
Sakura had forgotten that they were still on the roof. She reached for a card. FLY. *Fly, please grant both Syaoran and I the ability to fly...* She threw the card into the air. "FLY!"
Syaoran's eyes got HUGE as little green wings sprung up on his back. Sakura had also gained her wings. They were about to descend together, but a noise stopped Syaoran, "HHAAAAAAA HAAAAHAAAAAAAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAAAAAAAA! How funny, Syaoran!" Meiling.
Syaoran became his famous beet red and followed Sakura to the floor. Sakura felt a familiar presence. "Clow Reed!" Three familiar figures appeared out of the shadows.
*gasp* "Eriol! What are you doing here?"asks Sakura. She pulled away from Syaoran and held his hands, which in response, he blushed.
There was a long pause, as if he was thinking about what he should say.
"I have come here to see how you would get out of this one, but, I guess I am too slow. You both have truly proven yourselves."
Syaoran looked suspicious, but says, "Mmmuph, fine then." He was still bitter at Eriol for his trickery before, but respected him, a LITTLE.
Meiling almost fell backward." You two haven't changed! Can't you see that he is hiding something! Don't excuse him like that!"
For just a moment, Eriol looked like he had been caught, but he very quickly, he plastered on a convincing innocent look. Out of the corner of his eye he saw Tomoyo smiling sweetly at him, and almost broke his concentration.
"I'll tell you! Hecameheretotaketheconsequenceforyouandsyaoranbecauseheknewthathewouldbe thestro--"Nankuru said ina hurry right before Eriol literally made her speechless. He looked really annoyed and guilty (if it's possible!).
"He alsowantedtowarnyouofth--"Suppi tried to say, when he was unable to speak as well.
Sakura, Tomoyo, and Meiling looked blank. Syaoran, however looked shocked.
"Y-y-you were gonna do tha--warn us of wha?" Syaoran managed to say.
"YOU UNDERSTOOD THAT!!!???" asked Sakura, Meiling, and Tomoyo.
"I need to warn you, Sakura, t-t-to not use your magic for 10 years beginning at the end of this very day..." Eriol paused.
Tears came to Sakura's eyes, "WHY?"
"Bec---" Eriol disappeared with a snap. Because they heavily relied on him, Suppi and Nankuru fizzled out, leaving the group stunned.
*Somewhere Else*
Eriol opened his eyes. He was in a dark place, tied up. He tried to use his magic to light it up and free himself, but it didn't work.
"Eriol, your magic or anyone else's powers, for that matter, will not work here."
"Why NOT?" Eriol demanded, "Who are YOU supposed to be? Where am I? How do you know me, hm?"
"Ah, my apologies, I'm Devanii, I control Destiny and I take it upon myself to make sure it happens. To answer your other questions, no magic works in the Between, where we are. And, who doesn't know you, or at least, who doesn't know the former you, Clow Reed."
" So what? Release me at once! If I'm so famous, then you should treat me with proper respect!"
"YOU ARE BEING PUNISHED HERE! YOU MAY NOT INTERFERE WITH DESTINY! YOU WILL BE HERE FOREVER!!!"
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Sorry this is so short, I just want to know what everyone thinks before I do anymore...