What Seems to be the End of an Enemy

I hope you Enjoy this story of mine. I do love Peter Pan ever so much! And I hope you like my story of him and my OC! This is my first Fanfic so don't go, as they say in America, "hatin' on raw writing!" Though, I would enjoy a few comments and a little criticism. Never the less, enjoy

"Ha ha! You'll never catch me alive hook!" That scoundrel! That Cod fish! That, that… "Hook!" I yell at the top of my voice as I stick my tongue out in mockery of his dumb attempts to slay me with his hook of a hand.

"Why you insolent-" The Captain hisses as he swings his silver hook at me. " Prepare to die!" My reflection gleamed at the sight. Which did nothing more than give me the excitement and energy to do what I did next! I whistled into the night. And sure enough she heard it. A fairy, with the aura of gold and the voice of a Christmas bell came down upon me and at the pirate. She, stuck her tongue with delight and blinded the scoundrel with pixie dust! " AH! Why you!" As Hook tried to swing around, hoping to hit his target. Peter kicked the nasty beast off deck into the open sea. "Take that you cod fish!"

Peter laughed joyfully as he and the golden fairy flew into the air with delight. "This isn't over! I'll get you for this! Mark my words!" The pirate spits out as he tries to swim. Suddenly there is a ticking… "No…Noooooaaahh!" is the last of what was heard of Hook. "Good work tink! We'll never hear from that old codfish again!" As he flies off into the sight of the bright moon he screams in delight "Kacadoodaldoo!" And so that is the last of what we've seen of the battle between Peter Pan and Captain Hook!

…Or so we thought.