Hey guys! First story/ one-shot. I'm a beginner at this, so yeah. You can tell me if I suck, because yeah, I suck at absolutely everything else. I love this song, and I have been daydreaming about how I'll write this story, visually, yeah. I didn't have a draft or anyone to critique this, so yeah, read on!
There You See Her
Sitting There Across The Way
She Don't Got A Lot To Say
But There's Something About Her
And You Don't Know Why
But You're Dying To Try
You Wanna Kiss The Girl
Mitchie Torres. The mysterious, quiet girl who always sat in the corner of the room. From all the campers, Shane was interested in this one girl. Her only friend seemed to be Caitlyn Gellar. The complete contrast of Mitchie. But still, why was Shane so interested in this one girl?
Yes, you want her
Look at her, you know you do
Possible she wants you too
There Is One Way To Ask Her
It Don't Take A Word
Not A Single Word
Go On And Kiss The Girl
Somehow, he wanted her. She wasn't like the other girls who tried to flirt with him. Even though he was the Shane Gray, she acted like he was a normal person. He wanted to get her attention. But how? He thought. He tried talking to her after classes, but somehow, he couldn't gather the courage to even say a single word to her. How could this one girl fill up his mind so much?
Sha La La La La La
My Oh My
Looks Like the Boy Too Shy
Ain't Gonna Kiss The Girl
Sha La La La La La
Ain't That Sad?
Ain't that a Shame
Too Bad, He's Gonna Miss The Girl
Shane walked slowly to Mitchie after classes. "Hi?" Shane said, after thirty seconds of silence with Shane. "Hi, um… you're Mitchie Torres, right?" he said. She simply nodded. "Oh hey, Mitch!" a voice called out. She smiled and waved goodbye to me. Daniel? Shane thought. He watched them wistfully as 'Daniel' flung his arm around Mitchie. Oh, boyfriend he thought. He sighed. What he didn't see was Mitchie pulling Daniel away.
Now's Your Moment
Floating In A Blue Lagoon
Boy You Better Do It Soon
No Time Will Be Better
She don't Say A Word
And She Won't Say A Word
Until You Kiss The Girl
Mitchie had stared at her shoes for thirty quiet, somewhat awkward minutes with Shane in a canoe. "Soo… how are you?" Shane said, breaking the silence. She smiled softly which meant 'Fine'. How can I get her to talk? Shane asked himself.
"Do you play guitar?" he asked. She nodded. "You sing?" he asked, hoping to at least once, to hear her talk. She nodded. He mentally groaned.
Shalalalala
My oh my
Looks like the boy's too shy
Ain't gonna kiss the girl
Shalalalala
Ain't that sad
it's such a shame
Too bad, you're gonna miss the girl
Shalalalala
Don't be scared
You better be prepared
Go on and kiss the girl
Shalalalala
Don't stop now
Don't try to hide it how
You wanna kiss the girl
Go on and kiss the girl
(kiss the girl)
(oh, ohnoo..)
(kiss the girl, kiss the girl)
Lalalala, Lalalala
Go on and kiss the girl
Lalalala, Lalalala
Go on and kiss the girl
Mitchie looked at her watch. He gave Shane an 'I need to go' sign. Shane panicked. Part of him was telling him to stay another was telling him to row back. Suddenly, without thinking, he grabbed and kissed her. A short but passionate kiss. Mitchie pulled away, smiling without Shane noticing. "Sorry" Shane said "I know you have a boyfriend and yeah, sorry" (A/N- Ooh! Shane talks like me, ha-ha). "I never did, and you had me waiting" Mitchie smiled. She leaned in to give him a soft kiss. "Well, at least now you can call me a complete and utter moron!" Shane laughed. Mitchie giggled as they rowed back.
So there you have it. My first Smitchie one-shot. I get scared of criticism, so please give constructive not makes-me-cry-a-river criticism. You an either say 'That was pretty good, for a beginner kinda one-shot" or "WTF? That made me puke! Now my mom got mad at me! Quit Fanfiction you –insert curse here-". Okay maybe not the second one but yeah… :p
Peace out home dawgs! Burnin-Up-For-You-Baby