Now, where was I... Oh yeah. I don't own the rights to any one of the diablo characters (except the ones I made up) and all that other junk I gotta say... Now on to the story and i hope you enjoy!!!!!!!!!!
But before you read the story I better tell you this...
text inclosed in these [ ] means an action performed by a character for example:
Akara: "Hi everybody!" [waves]
and text inclosed in asterixes * * means me, the narrator is speaking.
Now hurry up and read my story and review it!!!!
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It was a lovely day in the Sacturary and Akara was busily cleaning out her tent (if you could call that hunk of junk a tent) when suddenly. CRASH as a section of the wall in the rougue encampment was blown off by something that looked like a naked barbarian and an assassin in an highly embarrasing position flew threw the air and landed with a crash into Akaras tent knocking it flying.
Akara: "What the hell do you two think you are doing!" she screamed at them.
Assassin: "Uhhhh... I was a... was aaahh.. teaching the barbarian some new errrr... tricks! Yeah thats it, tricks!" she said as she hurriedly put on her skimpy black armour.
Kashaya: "Hey Akara whats happening? I heard a crash and... Whoa! What a fine hunk of man we have here!"
*Everyone in the Rouge encampment starts looking at Kashaya as if she is a loony except for the barbarian who is starting at a patch of dirt on the ground (he still hasn't realised he has no clothes on).*
Kashaya: "Errrrr. Did I just say that out loud?"
Everyone (except barb): "Yes."
Kashaya: "Oookay..... soooo... ummm how bout we go get some food?"
Barb who has just found an interesting puddle of water to stare at: "Food!?!?! Did you say Food?!?! Mmmmmmmm IM STARVING!!!!!!"
*Several chickens and startled women later the barbarian is fed and dressed*
Assassin: "So OogaBooga?" (this was the barbarians name. DUH. What? you think his name was barbarian?)
OogaBooga looks up from the most interesting stick he had ever found: [lound grunt]
Assassin: "Why are we here?"
OogaBooga: "We here to save the world with these guys over here" [indicates three people stading to his right]
Assasin: "Hey! how did you guys get here?"
Person 1: "Beats me."
Person 2: "Not a clue"
Person 3: "I like ham!" [grins idioticly]
Oog Booga: "You do!?" he roared
Person 3: "Do you?" he asked
OogaBooga: "I LOVE IT!"
*And Person 3 and Oog Booga walked off hand in hand and were never seen again*
Assassin: "This is too weird for me I QUIT!"
Assassin has left this world. Diablo's minons become weaker
Akara: "How she do that?"
Person 1: "Beats me."
Person 2: "Not a clue"
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And so ends the very first chapter of New Heroes! This is my very very very first fanfic and I must ask you to judge it on that factor. Nice comments would be appreciated but hey flames are also ok. I just wanna get an idea on how my story is goin. If you can plz give me name suggestions for the the *Persons*. Thanks!
But before you read the story I better tell you this...
text inclosed in these [ ] means an action performed by a character for example:
Akara: "Hi everybody!" [waves]
and text inclosed in asterixes * * means me, the narrator is speaking.
Now hurry up and read my story and review it!!!!
***********************************************************************************
It was a lovely day in the Sacturary and Akara was busily cleaning out her tent (if you could call that hunk of junk a tent) when suddenly. CRASH as a section of the wall in the rougue encampment was blown off by something that looked like a naked barbarian and an assassin in an highly embarrasing position flew threw the air and landed with a crash into Akaras tent knocking it flying.
Akara: "What the hell do you two think you are doing!" she screamed at them.
Assassin: "Uhhhh... I was a... was aaahh.. teaching the barbarian some new errrr... tricks! Yeah thats it, tricks!" she said as she hurriedly put on her skimpy black armour.
Kashaya: "Hey Akara whats happening? I heard a crash and... Whoa! What a fine hunk of man we have here!"
*Everyone in the Rouge encampment starts looking at Kashaya as if she is a loony except for the barbarian who is starting at a patch of dirt on the ground (he still hasn't realised he has no clothes on).*
Kashaya: "Errrrr. Did I just say that out loud?"
Everyone (except barb): "Yes."
Kashaya: "Oookay..... soooo... ummm how bout we go get some food?"
Barb who has just found an interesting puddle of water to stare at: "Food!?!?! Did you say Food?!?! Mmmmmmmm IM STARVING!!!!!!"
*Several chickens and startled women later the barbarian is fed and dressed*
Assassin: "So OogaBooga?" (this was the barbarians name. DUH. What? you think his name was barbarian?)
OogaBooga looks up from the most interesting stick he had ever found: [lound grunt]
Assassin: "Why are we here?"
OogaBooga: "We here to save the world with these guys over here" [indicates three people stading to his right]
Assasin: "Hey! how did you guys get here?"
Person 1: "Beats me."
Person 2: "Not a clue"
Person 3: "I like ham!" [grins idioticly]
Oog Booga: "You do!?" he roared
Person 3: "Do you?" he asked
OogaBooga: "I LOVE IT!"
*And Person 3 and Oog Booga walked off hand in hand and were never seen again*
Assassin: "This is too weird for me I QUIT!"
Assassin has left this world. Diablo's minons become weaker
Akara: "How she do that?"
Person 1: "Beats me."
Person 2: "Not a clue"
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And so ends the very first chapter of New Heroes! This is my very very very first fanfic and I must ask you to judge it on that factor. Nice comments would be appreciated but hey flames are also ok. I just wanna get an idea on how my story is goin. If you can plz give me name suggestions for the the *Persons*. Thanks!