Hello! Well, before you read; you need a little background on the poem!
Okay; this one is dedicated to TheForceIsStrongWithThisOne! He has really been inspirational; and he helped me with my pondering; though he probably has no idea what exactly he helped with… Haha!
Okay, here goes the info!
Beast boy has been injured; and Raven doesn't know if he is going to make it or not. She is sitting in the waiting room in a hospital with the rest of the team; but she's kind of in her own world of turmoil.
At first she is telling herself that she wouldn't really miss him much; but at the end of the poem she realizes that without him around; she wouldn't be able to continue on.
Well, here's the poem! Might not be very good…
People come,
People go.
Little highs,
One big low
Gapes so open in my mind
Like a hole;
A rift in time.
Until I see
You again
I will remain
Frozen within…
Well, it's not very good; and it's very short…but I needed a break from 'Dreams and Diversions'; so here it is!
Oh, and to my readers: Don't worry! I'm really working hard on the next update; but I have some major writer's block; and it's really annoying!
But I will reward you with a little sneak-peek of the next chapter since you took the time to read my sad little poem:
There is a fist-fight involved! Six words written; yet it says so much! *grins evilly*
And to those of you who haven't read my stories; I hope you decide to start! :)
Oh, and my suggestions:
"Teen Titans: The Big Leagues" by Epsilon Indi: A JLA crossover! It's great! (and a BBXRae story!) Very gripping read!
"Collateral Damage" by Novus Ordo Seclorum: A must-read for any BBXRae fan! BB-centric; and very well written! If you aren't already reading; you are missing out!
"Stone Life" by Blackangeldust: BBXRae of course! Very powerful words in it; and interesting! Let's just say that Raven was a lot more depressed than Beast boy would have guessed… Terra alert!
And of course: "The Wild Man's Journey" by TheForceIsStrongWithThisOne; the author of "Rebound" and many other wonderful BBXRae stories! Great story; and a gripping read! Definitely one of my very favorites alongside 'Collateral'! Can't wait to see what happens next myself!
Please review and tell me how I can improve; I'm not so great at poetry; so I could use some constructive criticism!
Oh, and of course BB makes it; I'm too much of a softie to kill my favorite character!
~Rosalind2013