Corrected Chapter: 1 A hero's return
(This takes place during the time jump before Naruto comes back to Konoha.)
We find Naruto in the middle of a field then suddenly his world turns black looking around he noticed he's inside a dark room. Then he hears an all familiar voice "hey kid I have a proposition for you."
Naruto raises his head to see a pair of glowing red eyes. Naruto eyebrow begins to twitches and says "what do you want damned fox?"
The Kyuubi gives him a death glare. Then sighs as he begins to speak
"Listen kid...I know you don't like me and I definitely don't like you, but I have a way or an idea to spear us the anguish of seeing each other"
"what is it?" what's your idea?"
"Become one with me." Naruto was about to respond but the fox demon cut him off. "I know what you're going to say kit and no you're not going to become a demon. You're going to become something even greater."
"What do you mean? Something greater than a demon, what's that?" In a confused, but innocent voice.
"You are going to become a demigod also known as a Titan." The Kyuubi answers
"A titan...why a titan and if I'm going to fuse with you wouldn't I become as demon...why are you even suggestion this!?"
"The reason why you're not becoming a demon is because your chakra is pure unlike mine. When two different elements fuse together they create something new, something powerful."
"Why are you even suggesting this? Aren't you going to disappear from existence?"
"Well if I don't have to see you anymore that's a bonus. I wouldn't seas to exist; I will become your ego as you humans call it."
"You would not be able to control me or even speak to me anymore."
"Yes. You would be free of me but you will hear a voice but the voice would be yours. Like I said I will become your inner thought that's all."
"So what's the catch?"
"No catch but you will have all my knowledge and wisdom behind you and you will be able to be yourself."
"So your saying that I will have all your power and more right!" the fox nodded " and all your jutsus and be able to create new and more powerful Jutsus with your knowledge right!" again fox nodded. "So where do I sing this deal sounds good to Me." grinning ear to ear.
" first gather all of your chakra in one point of your body then do the following hand seals, and then rip off the seal at the same time you finish the hand seals." Naruto nods "now start gathering your chakra... okay do then do the following hand seals', phoenixes, dragon, snack ram, rabbit, tiger, and last the fox.." Naruto begins the hand seals and begins to walk toward the seal on the Kyuubi cage, "now place one hand on the seal and yell TITAN REBIRTH JUTSU..."
Naruto puts his hand on the seal was about the hand seal then he yells" TITAN REBIRTH JUTSU" he rip off the seal that's was on the cage then a bright light stated to shine. Outside Naruto mind he's surrounded by a golden white light then a flash.
A year and a half later
"So what is the first thing you're going to do when you get home?" Jiraiya asked with a grin on his face. Teenager walking next to him with focuses look. He was about six inches smaller than him with bright blue eyes, long flowing blond hair ( like street fighter 3 alpha ken hair style) wearing black shinobi sandals, earth town pant that reach right behind his foot but not touching the floor. A light coat, it was similar to his old jacket but instead of an orange trim it was dark red, and in the other color of the coat was nave blue. His coat did not have any sleeve but he was wearing a long sleeve shirt, light gray color.
"So what are going to do first... common tell me!"
Naruto grind and said "well first thing first check on Tsunade-chan, then see if anyone of my friends would be able to recognize me."
About one hour later Jiraiya and Naruto walk in to Konoha the guard that were on duty grated Jiraiya and great the young man who was accompanies him. No of the guards notice Naruto if he did not have his whiskers marks they would have sworn that the four was back from the grave. But they did not ask any question he was with Jiraiya one of the Legendary Sannin.
Somewhere in Konoha, a young women wearing pink, and had pink hair was walking along with Konohamaru and his team.
"I hate these stupid D rank missions, that stupid cat scratch my face up." an angry Konohamaru
"Oh yeah I remember that mission that cat still trying to get away from that women?" with a grin on her face
"So when's Naruto-neechan coming home?"
"Well today make 2 half years when he left so today he will return, I hope" bumping into a blond teen we all know very well.
"Sorry sir I did not see you th..." that's when she look up to see blue eyes. She steps back and takes a good look 'wow he is hot my god hope he single. Wait he made me stop thinking about Sasuke-kun. Wow I never thought this would never ever happen.'
A sweat drop appears behind Naruto hade he clears his trout "cha, you never change Sakura-chan still as rude to your friends as ever." she blankly at the teen then in a shack voice "NARUTTTTTOOOOOOO!" he nodes
"Yep how you been, wow you look great Sakura-chan. Wait is that Konohamaru-kun?"
Hey right pass her dumb stuck she does not notes 'no fucking way that can't be Naruto he's tall hot, and very polite. My god if he knew was I thinking he would have thought that I was a Hentia.' her face turning red that can rival Hinata's red glow.
"hey Konohamaru it's me Naruto wow your coming along well my little rival." making Konohamaru to smile the he looks right at the rest of the group that was there" so this is your squad let me guise hummmm...oh The girl is Moegi, and this smart looking little guy is Udon right!" in unison both sad "hai"
Moegi was blushing when Naruto sad her name 'wow he knows my name!'
"Well sorry that I cannot spend more time with you guys and girl but I need to report in with the Hokage then I will tell you my stories ok." Konohamaru and his group jump for joy when they heard that Naruto will spend time with them like old times. So Jiraiya, still blushing Sakura, and a very calm Naruto made their way to the Hokage Tower.
Hokage Tower.
"What happen to my little Naruto your much taller, what's with the hair it looks great, and wow you look like someone else?" Tsunade was saying jumping around Naruto examining the new look. A sweat drop was behind Jiraiya, Sakura, Shizune, and everyone else in the room. Except Naruto he had a real smile on his face.
"Thanks Tsunade-niichan so what new?" she stared blankly what he just said like he was a full ground adult" wow even your manners have changed are you sure your Naruto not a replacement?" with a raised eyebrow" Yes I am Naruto but why so shocked of how am I acting?"
Sakura had a stunned look what she just heard 'wow Naruto has grown up. He left me behind again why can I be as strange as he is why... and why am I staring at him' She starts to blush.
Naruto takes a deep breath "so what's the deal then."
Tsunade take her set " Well Naruto your here for me to judge how strong you are and to see if your Chuunin materiel like you friend Sakura." He nodes "so your sparring partner will be ..."
Naruto interrupts her "may I make a fuel suggestion before you put me up against Kakashi." Everyone even Kakashi was really surprised, no one notes him, and Naruto walks to the window " Please Kakashi-sensei come in" with that Kakashi walks in from the window. "Like I was saying you might want some more people to help him."
Tsunade was stun to her Naruto act so confident "Naruto he is the best you don't think you can win against him by yourself."
Naruto look strait to her eye's "Yes I do, ask Anko, Gai, Jiraiya, and you're self. So you can see for yourself how strong I have become." Naruto said with a determined face.
Tsunade" your not serious are you?" Naruto just nodes "look like I can't convince you from this so very well you will get what you wish for just to let you know I'm not holding back."
Naruto smiles then walk outside "so see you and my opponent this evening so then excuse me... oh Shikamaru and Tamari are coming." he opens the door for his friends and smile and walk out.
Shikamaru look confused "who was that guy he look very strange." Sakura first to speak up" that was Naruto" Shikamaru blink twice then said "WHHHHAAAAATTTTTT!"
Outside the Hokage tower
Naruto is walking down Konoha, and then he turns around when he heard his name. "Oh... Shikamaru, how's it going'. Well I hope."
Shikamaru smirks "Man you grown up, I don't believe it's you. You look great."
Naruto turned his head to look at Tamari "So how's Gaara Temari-chan." she tries to hide the blush on her face.
'Wow the little shrimp got big and my god he's hot and he remembered my name' "He's fine, my brother is now the Kazekage, and I coudn't be happier."
Naruto smiled "that's goods to hear tell him I said "hi" to him for me please." Temari smirks then Sakura comes running up and hit's Naruto square on the jaw
" Baka what are you thinking taking on Anko, Gai, Jiraiya, Kakashi, and not to say the Hokage at the same time!" that's when she noticed that Naruto did not move one inch but her hand hurt like she hit a titanium wall or something stronger.
She looked right at Naruto he still had his smile" Sakura-chan please don't poke so hard okay that bugs."
She could not believe it one of her hardest hits was a pock to him 'he is more powerful than I thought not even a single mark is on him what did Jiraiya do to him?' Naruto bowed to his friends and continued on walking.
Shikamaru looked right at Sakura "You hit him hard right but he didn't even move you did hit him with you full straight right?" She nodes. All of them watch as Naruto walks to the training grounds hand in his pockets. Few minutes later. When he was walking he heard footsteps in the back of his mind he knows he should run but doesn't (man he is going to be sorry) he looks back about 20 or 40 girls flock him. Stunned he freezes he is surrounded by girls "hi who are you" "your cute want to go out?" "Hey he's mine" "no way he's mine" (ha told yaw he will be sorry)
About half hour later
Training ground 7
"Where is Naruto?" Kakashi said (ha, he's was in time for once)
"It's not like him, he hates being late, and he is never late!" Jiraiya said reading his on novel. They all heard a sound in the distance. It was Naruto running from a pack of fan girls 50 or 60 of them (Yeah it sucks to be Naruto) a group sweat drop seeing Naruto run up and said" one more minute please" then zip of in the forest close behind the fan girls.
He reappears "sorry about that hope my clone can do the job." Groups sigh.
Tsunade speaks up "so let's start before those girls come back"
As Naruto nodes then he sees some of his friends." Fuzzy-brows, Tenten, Neji, Shikamaru, Temari, Sakura-chan! What are you guys doing here?"
Neji's first to speak "I wouldn't miss this for the world to see you get your ass kicked."
Lee next "Naruto you must be insane to take on Gai-sensei, he's more than enough but Kakashi, Anko, Jiraiya, And the Hokage-sama that's over kill!" A group node Naruto smiles lightly
"Don't worry I won't win that fast for when you guys still need your sensei and the Hokage I will go easy on her." this time with a smirk. "But the rest sorry to say I will do my very best to win ok!" nice guy pose. No one could believe the way Naruto was acting right now (hell even I believe it, I'M WRITING THIS STORY AND I STILL DON'T BELIEVE IT) so Naruto walks to one end of the training ground and gets ready. All of the others do the same Anko in one side Kakashi in the front. Gai was in the other side of him, Jiraiya was in the back, and Tsunade right next to him.
Shizune raised her hand then yells' "GO" first to move was Gai doing his Dynamic Entry Naruto side steps then Kakashi throws a kunai, Naruto catches it and sends it back. Anko charges right at him with an uppercut Naruto bends backward to avoid it the kick her in the stomach sending her flying. Gai comes back with a Konoha Senpuu (Leaf Spinning Wind) Naruto does a back flip then jumps up and flash some hand seals "Kage bunshin no jutsus (Shadow clones)" 9 Clones where in the air the original point at Gai 2 go for him, then he points at Kakashi 2 go after him, he points at Anko who was barely getting up 2 got where she was, he points at Jiraiya and Tsunade The last of the Kage Bunshin go after. Naruto smiles" This is going to be way too easy."
End of Chapter
Gai vs. clones 1-2
Kakashi vs. clones 3-4
Anko vs. clones 5-6
Jiraiya vs. clones 7-8
Tsunade vs. clone 9-Naruto
End of chapter well hope everyone like this first chapter well pleases comment next chapter Standalone 5 minute win