AN: this will be where I answer comments to my story and maybe post news. if you comment on this then...hehe I'll have to make a comment comment chapter...ohh jeez I ate way too much sugar today...can you tell? I'm being silly again....
**NEWS**
chapter four will be up soon folks! i just gotta figure out how too--ohh I almost gave it away! no worries!
Bunnicula03
I totally understand what you are saying, and you are right. If I was writing following the series (with her being Sailor moon, him being Tuxedo Mask...there being actual villains...) I would write it differently, but I'm writing it as if Serenity/Usagi isn't sailor Moon at all (hell there is none...at present...) Mamoru isnt Tuxedo mask and Usagi is struggling with who she is. This is techinically my first fan fiction where I wrote more then 500 words...so bare with me. I appreciate your comments anyway (sincerely I do) and am glad you brought up that point.
Marni
Thanks! I was hoping it soudned different...
samsonite
Thank you!
Ebiris
I'm hoping A/U stands for Alternate Universe...::big hopeful smile:: I hope it becomes clearer later on. I'm trying to stay as clear as possible...I prolly shoulda made an outline...what do you all think?
I am currently fixing the Darien/Mamoru problem. After re-reading the chapters I realized that with so many Japanese names an English one just sounds cheezy as hell. If anybody noticed I already changed his name in Chapter three (that was more automatic...I just finished reading volume 18 and got Mamoru stuck in my head)
**NEWS**
chapter four will be up soon folks! i just gotta figure out how too--ohh I almost gave it away! no worries!
Bunnicula03
I totally understand what you are saying, and you are right. If I was writing following the series (with her being Sailor moon, him being Tuxedo Mask...there being actual villains...) I would write it differently, but I'm writing it as if Serenity/Usagi isn't sailor Moon at all (hell there is none...at present...) Mamoru isnt Tuxedo mask and Usagi is struggling with who she is. This is techinically my first fan fiction where I wrote more then 500 words...so bare with me. I appreciate your comments anyway (sincerely I do) and am glad you brought up that point.
Marni
Thanks! I was hoping it soudned different...
samsonite
Thank you!
Ebiris
I'm hoping A/U stands for Alternate Universe...::big hopeful smile:: I hope it becomes clearer later on. I'm trying to stay as clear as possible...I prolly shoulda made an outline...what do you all think?
I am currently fixing the Darien/Mamoru problem. After re-reading the chapters I realized that with so many Japanese names an English one just sounds cheezy as hell. If anybody noticed I already changed his name in Chapter three (that was more automatic...I just finished reading volume 18 and got Mamoru stuck in my head)