IF TRIS WOKE UP AFTER TOBIAS LEFT.
Okay, so this is my first published fanfic so it might be some grammar problems. Please rate and review if you liked the story or not and tell me what you think.
CHAPTER 1
Tris pov.
I'm cold. I can feel that I lay on a hard table. I can hear voices beside me and I can feel someone grab my hand. I know who it is. Tobias. He's crying, begging me to
come back. He think that I'm dead. I remember what happened. I had taken Caleb's place in the plan to save his life. David came after I woke up from the death
serum and shoot me. I remember seeing my mother. She told me that everything was going to be fine. –Am I dead? Asked I in horror. –No honey. You can wake up
whenever you want to, she told me and everything went black. The voices, who had cried by my side a moment ago, disappeared. I tried to open my eyes and this
time it worked. I'm alone in the room.
They had placed in a room in the hospital. After another minute a nurse comes inn. I look at her and she jumps of surprise, or it is horror? -They told me that you
were dead. I'm supposed to take your body to the campfire so they can burn you, she says after the jump. –Well, I say and feel that I'm about to smile. –You can still
bring me to the campfire, but I prefer to not be burned.
She gave me the clothes she had brought me to the burning. –They told me that it was your boyfriend who had picked them, she said before she left the room. The
outfit was my favourite t-shirt and jeans. He had actually paid attention to witch clothes I liked the most. After I got dressed I walked out to the nurse and said.
–Have you told anyone that I'm still alive? She shook her head. –I'm the only one who knows, she said with a low voice. –Okay, I said. –Lets go and scare my
friends. Then we headed towards the campfire.
On the way had I gotten a cloak to hide in so no one saw who I was when we reached the fire. I saw Uriah sitting between Shauna and four. He must have woken up
after I got shoot. I saw people I didn't even know sit sobbing and they talked about…me? The worst was to look over at Tobias/ four. He looked like a ghost. Christina
tried to make him talk, but he didn't even react when she slapped him. But he jumped up when he recognised my nurse who stood beside me. He walked up to us
and started talking to her. –Whe Where is her body? He said with a shaking voice. –I'm right here I said and took of my cloak.
So I thought about end the chapter there, but I hat cliffies so keep reading!
Tobias turned slowly to face me. His face was in shock. –What's going on? He asked. He sounded confused and maybe angry. –Tobias, it's me, I said and took a step
closer to him. –I didn't die. I passed out when you saw me and had had a dangerous slow heart beat so you couldn't feel it. I'm okay. I love you, I said and pressed
my lips to his. He kissed me back before he pushed me away. I love you too. I always have and always going to. I need you to promise me that you won't leave me,
he said with tears in his eyes. –I promise, I said and kissed him again. Then I heard Christina's voice behind me.
–Four, what are you doing? It's your girlfriend's funeral and you are making out with another girl. I know that Tris probably would want you to move on, but you are
really moving too fast here cowboy, she said with a voice that sounded sad and disappointed. –It's not what it looks like Chris, Tobias said whit a smile. I turned
around to face her. –Hey Chris, how ya doing? I asked with a happy smile. I heard many gasps around me and looked around. Everyone stood steering at me with
scared faces. –Am I that creepy? I asked Tobias. He laughed. –You are to me, he said with a sweet voice. I chuckled. –So, I said. –What are we going to do now,
because I prefer to now get burn alive. Uriah walked over to us. –Well, you can start with telling us what happened to you. I nod. –Okay, so I take over Caleb's task
and takes the death serum. I woke up and headed to release the memory serum when David shows up. I release the serum in the same time than he shoots me
three times in the back. I saw my mom, who told me that it was my choice to die or not, so I chose to live and here we are, I said with a playful smile. –So you did
die, Uriah asks. –Yeah, but I woke up again like you, I replied. He smiles. –Kay then, what are we going to do now? He asks with a bored voice. –I think Tris could
need a little rest. I'm taking her back to her room, I heard Tobias say. I started feeling dizzy and felt some one (Tobias) pick me up and carry me bridal style towards
his room. –Are you okay Beatrice? He asks. –Did you just call me Beatrice? I ask back with a confused look. –You told me that I could use your name on important
days so I gave it a shoot, he said with a smirk. –Today isn't special enough Four, I said before I fell asleep in his arms.