I'm upset. I wrote a poem called Help Me the night before Halloween(I think) and nobody has bothered to reveiw it. I'm going to post this poem and another but until I get at least one reveiw(which I think is pretty reasonable) I'm not going to post any other poems.
As I lay here dying
I beg you please,
stop your weeping
stop your crying.
Listen to me.
In the few moments I have
I will tell you,
who to listen to.
Secrets told and lies come true.
First listen to my sister,
she will tell
storys unknown.
Listen to my mother,
for she has known deep in her heart
something more.
Listen to my father,
he is strong and true.
Now I'll tell you
who not to listen to.
Don't listen my mentor
for blood is his domain.
Don't listen to his brother
for he always invades.
Don't listen to your deputy
for though seeming kind,
a monster lurks behind those amber eyes.
Don't listen to your leader
for he is weak with age.
He is nothing more
but a piece
in this endless game.
And so you have been told
listen to who I've said
and don't belive
a single word the traiters say.
It's these words that killed me today.
I bet you guys are confused. Dovewing has been attacked by a Dark Forest cat and is about to die. She tells her clanmates to listen to Ivypool because Dovewing finally understands that Lionblaze, Jayfeather and Brambleclaw are evil. I'm sorry if your a fan of one of these cats, let me explain.
In the books it says that cats more powerful than the stars are dangerous. Okay, so yeah. Jayfeather and and Lionblaze probably won't end up evil. In this poem they do.
Brambleclaw was trained by the Dark Forest and he is all angery at Squrrielflight. There is actually a chance he will join the Dark Forest.
Firestar is way too old to run the clan now.
Reveiw or I'll just stop writing poems if nobody likes them.