Hey peoples! Darkness here! As you can see, I am offcially rewriting The Monster Inside Me! Well i kust wanted to thank everyone who read and reviewed to the older version. :) Thanks especially to jayfeather1234! I am also working on A Poisoned Heart which you are welcome to read and review! Lol CX so yea some quick pointers:
If anyone has any questions or requests you may PM me. Oh and the Maon character who i will not mention in name ;) her appearence is the picture above. So enjoy! And please Review!
Disclaimer: I DONT OWN WARRIORS
Prologue:
The sun was barley rising from behind the mountains as morning came. Dark clouds covered the sky as the orange ball of light floated up into the sky. The mountain range was silent as death, even the birds were silent. The only noise that could be heard was the rustling of the branches of the pine forest from the cold wind.
In the mountains was a clearing that was nearly covered with the tops of the trees, not allowing anything overhead to get a peak of what lay beneath. Under the tree tops and In the clearing lay the bodies of three cats. If you looked closer you would see two of them were covered in blood, bloody gashes could be seen on their throats, the crimson liquid staining the grass red.
One of them, a ginger she-cat with a white underbelly lay there, her white paws were covered in blood and some could be seen splattered on her cheek. She awakened with a gasp, her eyes flashed a crimson red, and she blinked, making them turn back to her normal vivid green. She staggered to her paws breathing heavily. Her green eyes darted back and forth until they rested on the two figures. Her eyes widened and she bolted over to them, she stared down at them in horror. One was a tortoise-shell and ginger she-cat, while the other was a dark ginger tom, his eyes were still open and she saw he die crying. They both had fatal gashes on their throats and were covered in scratches and blood.
"No...I...I couldn't have...I thought...I..." She collapsed next to them in a sobbing heap of ginger fur. She felt tears slide down her face as she looked at her white fore paws, now almost completely covered in thick, crimson blood. She unsheathed her claws and dug them into the earth, shutting her eyes tightly, hoping that this was just a dream. She opened her eyes slowly and stood up weakly, her usual bright, vivid green eyes were now dull. This is all my fault...I...should of kept it under control...I...
She shook her head backing away slowly, she turned around slowly, her tail dragging in the dust. No...I...I have to get away from here...I... She turned back to the two bodies her eyes lit with grief and guilt. Goodbye...Mother...Father... She turned away and without looking back, ran. She felt brambles and sticks rip into her fur, earming her some scratches, but she ignored them. They didnt compare to the pain and guilt she felt in her heart. It was to much, she felt as if black claws were ripping through her heart, slowly and painfully. Letting all the guilt, pain, and despair sink within her like a poison.
She was panting now, the blood that covered her paws was dark with dirt and mud while the sting of her cuts slowed her down.
She stopped panting heavily and turned around, she was at the edge of the mountain range. She hadn't realized that she had run so far. She stared at her home, wanting so bad to run back and curl up with her mother and father like a kit. she shook her head violently, No. They're dead. You-IT, killed them. She turned away. This is it, there was no turning back. Beyond her there was a massive expanse of grass and trees, it looked like a small forest. She looked behind her one more time and whispered brokenly,
"I'm sorry..." She turned back around and dove into the uknown contents of the forest.
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There was nothing but darkness.
Nothing but cold, black darkness.
She could feel it. Creeping closer and closer by the second. She heard something calling her, " Clover..." She whipped around fur bristling and eyes wide. Nothing. Why did this happen to her? Why was she born with this curse?
She heard the voice again, this time she knew who it was. She could feel it behind her.
She slowly turned around preparing for the worst, she took a deep breath and opened her eyes. In front of her was a glowing mass of water, strangley it was floating. Giving her a good view of it like a mirror.
"Clover..." she padded closer and closer to it until it was hovering right in front of her. She looked into it with wary eyes and found nothing but her own reflection. Her eyes widened as she heard a chuckling. It wasn't humorous, or inviting, but cruel, dark, and evil in about every possible way. Suddenly her reflection changed dramatically. Her usual bright ginger fur turned as black as night, and her normally snowy white paws and underbelly turned as red as blood. Scarlet stripes slashed across her back and as she looked into her own reflection. She saw her vivid green eyes turn a deep crimson and gasped. She looked down at herself relieved that she was still herself.
She looked bck at her reflection with pure hatred and anger. "You." She growled. Her other self merley chuckled. "You? Is that all the greeting I get? I thought we were friends dear," she purred in a sickly sweet voice. "Never, you killed my family! You've taken all that I've ever Cared for with your vile claws."she hissed. "Hm," She raised her dark paws and unsheathed her claws which glowed silver in the glowing mass. She examined her claws nimbly, blood could be seen coating them. "Vile? I think they are quite pretty if i do say so myself." Clover snarled at her, "I thought i got rid of you,"she spat. The dark form gave a grin that was all but pleasent. "Oh no, my dear Clover, you will never get rid of me, because of one and only one reason." She lowered her claws slowly and stepped forward. Clover growled fiercely as her reflection leaned forward, she seemed to step out of the portal and faced her. She smiled sickeningly "Because I am you."
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Well all done! Yay! Phew! Wel thre ya go! Please read and review! I need some feedback!
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Darkness