This is my first Sue Thomas FB Eye fanfiction, but I really love this show. It's just been a few mouths since I first saw my first episode and I really love this. It too bad that it was cancel! This fanfiction is after the episodes The Newlyweds game and Breaking up is hard to do.This is a Sue and Jack fanfiction. Excuse me for my English because it's not my first language, but if you can read French (this is my first language!), you can read this fanfiction in the French section...so let's started.
Chapter 1: Quiet day
'' Come on Jack admit it! You fell a little something for our Sue!'' said Bobby who are with Jack, Miles and Dimitrius at the restaurant for the supper after a long day of paperwork at the bullpen.
'' Yes, it's true Jack because since your wedding, your are a very cute couple'' add Dimitrius
'' I have to agree with these two men'' said Miles '' You were a very well-matched couple, even with your clothes! ''
'' Guys, you don't have it, we are just friend. '' Answer Jack.
'' Typical answer from someone who didn't want to admit his feeling for someone he knows. '' D answers him '' Like in the show that Donna will never miss an episode... What is the name?...With the mother and the daughter who are best friend...''
'' Gilmore Girls '' answer Miles when everybody else didn't know what D was talking about and they all look at him.
'' Who believed Miles was watching some show for girls! '' Said Bobby, laughing.
'' I don't watch this every week; I only see it one time. '' Miles defend himself, but he knows that the guys won't believe him. '' What did you want to say D? ''
'' ...In this show, the mother and some guy, I think it's Lorelai and Duke...''
'' No it's Lorelai and Luke. '' Correct Miles
'' Yes, Lorelai et Luke, they are very good for each other, but hey always say that they are just friend and if I believe what Donne say, everybody knows that one day, they will end up together. ''
'' Yes, but they aren't together yet. '' Said Jack
'' It's true, but Donna say it not for long, they will be together, like you and Sue. '' End Dimitrius
'' This is true Jack, it's not for long...so Miles, you really watch Gilmore Girls, I never believed that inside of you, there is a sensitive side. '' Said Bobby and everybody except Miles start to laugh.
'' We didn't talk about me; we were trying to make Jack admit his true feeling. '' Defend Miles
'' Trying to change the subject is a typical attitude from someone who didn't want to admit the true.'' said Bobby '' But he's right, today we are in the case: Sue and Jack: Will they be a couple one day? Me, I am completely sure that one day, they will end up together. I can even bet on that...Miles, Dimitrius?
'' I' m in! '' Said Miles
'' Me too, I bet 20$...''
Dimitrius didn't finish his sentence because Lucy interrupts him.
'' On what will you bet, D? '' Ask Lucy who was with Sue and Tara.
Jack look at D with a look he didn't want him to say the true.
'' Sport, like always. '' Lie D '' So what are you doing here, girls, on a Friday night? ''
'' We wanted to join you for the dessert, but it seems that you are already finishing... '' Said Sue
'' Too bad girls, you're too late, maybe for another time? '' Said Bobby '' But you can stay with us, even if we planned a night between boys and you're girls. '' At this moment, Levi, who was standing next to Sue, barks at this remark and Bobby look at him. '' Sorry Levi, I didn't want to offend you; you're always around girls, lucky you! '' He looks at the girls '' So girls, will you stay with us? ''
'' Why not, I always wanted to know what you say in your boy night. '' Said Tara
'' Me too, Sue? '' Said Lucy.
'' I would love, but Levi need a walk, an entire day in an office is very long for him, he need some fresh air. So I'll see you Monday morning and later Luce. ''
She start to leave but Jack stand up and she see him.
'' I'll go with you, if you want? '' Jack said to Sue.
'' Sure, if Levi want? '' Levi makes a happy bark. '' I think he loves your company. ''
Jack put his coat on and one minute later, they were already gone and Lucy said right after them past the door:
'' We have to do something to put this two of them together! ''
'' We were talking about that before you came in. '' said Miles
'' With Jack? '' Ask Tara
'' Yes, but I didn't want to admit his feeling. '' Said D
'' Like Sue...Everybody here is agree they are the good one for each other? ''
'' Oh yes, since they met. '' Said Bobby
'' And especially since their wedding. '' Add Tara
'' But what we can do, it's themselves they have to admit and if they end up as a couple, there are this stupid rule at the office. '' Said Miles
'' Yes, it's true, but nobody have to know the true, but first, we have to put them together, because now the two of them are single. '' Said Lucy
'' Sue wasn't with this dog man? '' Ask D
'' I don't know the details, but since two weeks, he didn't call and her either, and yesterday when I ask Sue what's going on, she told me she break up with David for our undercover marriage, but if she wanted to, she can return with him and I think it's because she want to be with Jack, but she didn't want to admit. '' Said Lucy
'' OK, but what we can do for that? '' Ask Bobby
'' I don't know, any suggestions? '' Ask Lucy
'' A blind dinner'' suggest Miles
'' Sue wouldn't want to do that. '' Said Lucy
After a long moment of silence, Tara spoke:
'' Maybe we have to wait a little bit, I mean, they just get out of their undercover thing and like we see before they live, they love to be with each other and I think soon they will finally admit their true feeling, but with a little bit of help? ''
'' Like what? '' Ask D
'' Lucy and I can talk to Sue between girls and you, like you're already make before we came. ''
'' I agree, but if in one mouth they aren't together yet, we absolutely have to do sometimes. '' Said Lucy
'' I agree. '' Said D
'' Fine with me.'' Said Bobby '' And you, Gilmore Girls fan? ''
'' Gilmore Girls? '' Said Lucy and Tara
'' It's a long story, but I'm totally agree with you guys, so we wait one mouth? Said Miles
'' Yes only one, but they'll better be together at this time, because I didn't know what to do if they aren't. '' Said Lucy
During this time, Sue and Jack were around the square. We can see there is a little of shy between the two of them. It was about 5 minutes that they walk, side by side, together and they didn't say a word. Sue decided to break the silence:
'' So...What's going on in your life, Sparky? ''
'' Nothing much and you? '' Answer Jack
'' Same thing...so no Allie or girls met in a bar for you? ''
'' No, not yet, but you know, I'm just getting out of a divorce so I'll wait a little bit before using my charm on another girl...And you with David? ''
'' No more David in my life. ''
'' Since when and why? ''
'' Since last week and because it's just didn't go very well with work and all other things. ''
After that, there was silence. Jack thinks that maybe it's a good time to spend more time with her, as friend or not, since they are single. Sue hope that Jack didn't believe it was because of their marriage she breaks up with David, it was because she wanted to.
'' So, a long week end of 2 days without work, I can't remember when is the last time we have that long of free day.'' said Jack
'' It was a very long time ago. ''
'' What is your plan for the week-end? ''
'' I don't know...relax, I think, you? ''
'' Nothing special, but I remember that yesterday, I wanted to invite for dinner for remembering our old time and the invitation is still on for tomorrow night if you want? ''
'' I accept the invitation. ''
At this time, they were already arriving at our car and before they got separated Jack said:
'' I'll pick you tomorrow around 6. ''
'' Sound perfect. ''
'' See you tomorrow. '' Sign Jack
I know there isn't any FBI story in this chapter, but they will come, I promise. Also, maybe some of you (if you watch the show Gilmore Girls) ask why I said Lorelai and Luke aren't together yet. It's because my fanfiction follow episode who was in 2003 and they aren't together yet at this time...One more time, I'm sorry for my mistakes and if someone wants to help me, its help will be very appreciate...Don't forget to review!
