AN- This is my second account (I forgot my email and password for my other one) i wont give the name of that account because it sucked. this is kind of a teaser first chapter for a story i came up with, tell me if you think its good or bad. I know the grammer wont be perfect, i feel like i used the word "She" alot. but yea. read and review.
chapter 1
Somewhere in rapture, a sleepy 17 year old awoke, greeted by the familiar creaking and moaning of the underwater city. Her father was dead…again. Killed by her "mother" Sophia Lamb… again. The weeks after the botched escape plan Eleanor stayed to herself, only leaving her room to undergo Sophia's sick experiments.
She didn't notice however it was on this morning that she did not awake in her usual room, she was to busy thinking about father. They were so close to getting out, the little ones had gotten her the big sister suit but "Mother" had to go and severe fathers connection. She continued to mourn father when all thoughts were cut off. A light was flicked, on illuminating the crappy little room around her.
The room used to be an interrogation site for the enemies of Ryan. She was in what appeared to be a dentist's chair, her hands and legs strapped down, the light was on a arm hanging from the ceiling that could be controlled from outside the room, She knew what was about to happen, it was the utopia. She turned her head as far as she could and saw a large contraption behind the chair, three needles sticking out at her. At the base of each needle were three small test tubes size vials of ADAM, and then a larger vial of EVE.
She didn't want to be here, and she sure as hell didn't want to go through with the procedure, panicking she started to pull and tug at her restraints but they didn't loosen, she lashed out with her plasmids, sending waves of fire and all throughout the room, charring the walls and floor. Her eyes start to droop due to the energy she had just spent,
"Eleanor… be calm Eleanor. Its for your own good." Came the soothing yet venomous voice of her mother. Eleanor refused to follow her mother's orders and lashed out with electricity trying to find the evil witch that put her here. But she couldn't hit anything. No one was in the room with her. All she managed to do was make the light flicker, Eleanor stopped fighting and laid still for a while, she had no more energy to fight and she just wanted to sleep.
It was in this time that she had stopped resisting that she failed to hear the contraption warm up and move on its track towards her. All three needles waiting for her. All nine vials of information and power ready for a host.
Eleanor screamed her big sister screech as the needles pierced her skin