Hi people. I deleted my other one because I kept on getting reviews about my horrible job at spelling, grammar and literature but please, did any of u people even tried to enjoy the story. So I thought, " hmm. If they are just keep on giving my reviews about my horrible work that I work my butt off trying to fix it, then the didn't enjoy the story so I deleted it" was my story really that bad? The only reviews that I got was , " wow this is good keep on going !" and , " gimme , gimme more or I will kill u." that's it just 2 comments, 2 people who actually liked it. So please in this one just ignore the spelling and literature errors, so I don't have any presure on me. Thanx.
Firebenderzuka
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me: hi people. Now the avatar characters is going to live with me. Nobody else but me and the avatar characters . No parents and no sisters. This is going to be the best time of my life, ( hears something break in the other room) or not. ( sees aang just standing there with a bowl of cereal now on the ground with bowl broken into pieces.) AANG DID U DO THIS!
Aang: uh no... ok fine I did. But it was an accident, I'm sorry. ( makes puppy dog eyes)
me:OMG! He is so cute. Can't resist. Ok apology accepted. U go on up to ur room while I'll clean this mess up.
Aang: hey thanx. Alyssa ( my name) u r the best!
Alyssa: yea yea. I try. Now MOVE IT!
Aang: ( walks up the stairs) dang first she was all nice now she got mean.
Alyssa: I heard that!
Aang: (now starts running up stairs)
Alyssa: yea, yea that's what I thought.
Katara: Alyssa! Alyssa! Where are u.
Alyssa: I'm down stairs in the kitchen!
Katara: ( runs into kitchen) uhhhh. Can I talk to u.
Alyssa: sure what is it.
Katara: no in private like in the bathroom.
Alyssa: umm sure.
We both walked into the bathroom.
Alyssa: ok what is it.
Katara: ok I got my( sorry guys if this makes u uncomfortable) um my lady thing.
Alyssa: whaaaaa lady thing... OH THAT LADY THING.
Zuko was about to walk into the bathroom until he heard voices in the bathroom. He put his ear up against the door and listened to there conversation.
Alyssa: so do u need anything like a pad or a tampon.
Katara: uh.. A pad would be nice.
Alyssa: ok I'll be right back. ( walked towards the door slammed it open and heard a loud thud hit the floor.) What the ... zuko. ( sees zuko rubbing his forehead) .
Zuko: ow that hurt.
Alyssa: how long have you've been there and did you hear anything!
Zuko: um... I just got here and I had um.. no idea what u guys were talking about.
Alyssa: right! Come on katara. I am sure zuko has to do his business
zuko: grrrrrrrrrrr..
katara and I went to my bedroom while zuko did his business.
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So I hope u liked this one. This time I won't be deleting anymore fanfics. So I hope this one has better grammar and literature because I do not want anymore pressure on any of my fanfics.
Thanx. Hoped u like it. Leave nice reviews.
