Title: Daxter II

Author: Countrygirl27

Rating: T

Genre: Horror and Adventure

disclaimer:I do not own Jak and Daxter Naughty Dog owns them right now but the story is mine.

Summary: What would happen if when Jak and Daxter first arrived in Haven City and the KG captured Daxter! Jak is still a mute. and what will happen to Daxter! Read on my friends and find out what happens.

Authors Note: 2nd fanfiction Hope you like it and Please don't forget to Review. A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding gift a reader can give . Please use this golden opportunity to offer a well deserved praise and/or tips for improvement.

Enjoy!

Jak and Daxter were at Samos hut reassembling the rift gate from their last adventure of defeating the evil Gol and Maia.

"Today's the big day Jak I hope you are prepared . . . . . . . . . . . for whatever happens." Samos said as he climbed into the machine.

"I think I figured out most of this machine, it interacts somehow with that large Precusor ring, I just hope we didn't break anything moving it here to the lab" Keira said as she eyed the large precursor ring in front of them.

"Yeah easy for you to say we did all the heavy lifting" Daxter retorted.

Daxter eyed the a button on the machine and was about to touch when Samos noticed and yelled.

"Daxter don't touch anything." Daxter backed away and sat down and pouted as Samos rambled on saying.

"Though the Precursors vanished long ago the artifacts they left behind can still do great harm."

"Or great good if you learn how to use them." Keira added.

"I have had some experiance in such things . . . I know you can make it work." Samos said.

Then Jak started to reach for a button on the machine and slowly pressed it.

Then a mini sphere thing popped out.

"Looks like Jak's still got the mojo" Daxter said as they examined the mini sphere.

"Interesting, it seems to be reading out some preset cordinates." Keira said.

All of Sudden the Sphere locked up and the Large Precusor Ring rose and floated in the air

"Wow look at that" Daxter said

Then a voice from the ring said.

"Finally, the last rift gate has been opened"

All of a sudden the sky darkened and bats flew out of the ring.

"Ahhhhh what are those things" Daxter said as he eyed the bats

"So this is how it Happened" Samos remarked.

The group looked up to find a giant black monster with three eyes staring at them.

"You cannot hide from me boy" it boomed.

"Do something Jak" Keira screamed

"What does this do, or or that do, how about that one, Everybody press all the buttons" Daxter paniced pointing at every button then Jak pushed the stick forward as they launched towards the monster and went right past it into the portal.

In the portal Keira asks

"What was that thing"

"Hang on Everyone" Samos yelled over the comotion

They all held on as Daxter screamed.

"YYYAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH! I want off this thing.!"

Just a few seconds later a bolt of lightning hit them and they were all blasted in different directions. As Samos bellowed.

"Find yourself Jak" as Jak rolled and dived to his landing.

Jak arrived at his landing as he looked around him he saw a city but nothing close to Sandover village. He got up and rubbed his neck as he heard Daxter get up and say

"Okay, I swear that's the last time I ever EVER touch any stupid Precusor crap." Daxter retorted as he threw down a metal rod.

Jak was still busy examining the city it was all dart and their were zoomers everywhere and a giant building at the top of the city that was most likely the castle. When he heard a faint cry for help behind him he instantly knew it was his best friend Daxter as he spun around to see him limp in the arms of a man in a Crimson colored uniform surrounded by guards covered in Crimson armor with guns in their hands.

"Let's move out boy's we got our prize" commanded the man in the Crimson uniform as he lifted his hand to signal to the others to follow.

Jak meanwhile was still standing there half dazed he couldn't just let them take Daxter. He wouldn't just stand there and watch his best buddy be carried away. He wouldn't go down without a fight!

He started running and then he took his first punch at the nearest Crimson Guard then he kicked at his head he fell to the ground and Jak finished him off with a stomp in the gut.

Jak looked at the other guards who now had guns out and were shooting at him he just barley avoided their gunfire as Jak jumped and did the splits in midair snapping off the last two Crimson Guards heads.

Now done with his work with the KG he looked around for Daxter but he was nowhere in sight then he ran around looking for him and finally spotted them getting on to a Crimson ship. Jak ran as fast as he could but he could not catch up to the ship before it took off and flew away. Jak stopped as he breathed heavily and watched as the ship flew to a castle high high above the the city.

I will find you and save you Dax I promise. Jak thought to himself as he headed to find some shelter, food, and help to save his best buddy.

Well this is my second story so far and I have to say I am having a lot of trouble writing Jak as a mute with no Daxter. Anyways please review nice reviews please.