The beginning
disclaimer: i don't own naruto and i know better then to make a claim saying i do but i do claim some of the characters i created myself (shadow,psymon,etc...)
now..."dramatic pause"...LET THE MADNESS BEGIN!!!!!
a dark man seemed to be running from something but he stopped his running when 2 men in cloaks with red clouds on them appeared one seemed to look like he was a giant of a man but the stranger could tell it was nothing more then a puppet and then spoke
"sasori..." he turned to the other man and stifled a laugh when he saw the man looked like a women he had blonde hair and seemed to be furious at the stifled laughter he heard he spoke "and what the hell is so funny?!?!?"
the dark man then spoke "nothing...nothing at all...except the fact that you look like a women..." deidara shouted at him "do you know who your talking to?!!?!?" the dark man looked at him and spoke again "no..." deidara was thoroughly pissed and threw a clay bomb of his at the man the man froze it in mid air.
"good try but it'll take a lot more then a little clay-maker to beat me and it'll also take more then even the great puppet master himself to beat me as well" the 2 men began attacking with everything they had trying to destroy the dark stranger but every attack they threw at him went through his body as if it wasn't even real! The man continued to just stand there as if waiting for them to get the hint but they didn't till it was too late. Now deidara was dying after a massive hole appeared in his chest (big enough to fit a basketball through not only that but also it seemed to go right through the area where his hart was).
"did you learn your lesson u fool? U cant touch me! Or have you yet to realize that?" sasori spoke again (sasori has lost 2 puppets the big one and the 3rd kazekage and he is now using himself to attack) "impressive...not many people could have lasted as long as you have..." sasori seemed to await for an answer from the man and he then spoke again "you do know I've been toying with you right?" the stranger made sasori shocked "i would like to take my fallen ally and go if you will allow me..." "what for? Your leader wont be happy with your failure so i don't see why i should let you go...oh and by the way...I'm going to be taking your powers when this fight is over which is right...NOW!" sasori chest now had a hole in it the same type of whole that deidara had. At that point the man walked over to the dead body's and touched them with one finger on the forehead then the body's dissapeared completely and the man continued moving through the trees at that point.
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okay i know its short but listen this is before the chunin exams even begin okay? Basically i want your opions and i want everyone to tell me who they want in the harems however theres one person that i wont include in the harem cause i already have plans for her anyways everyone please review and tell me what you thought and i want everyone to know right now that naruto will not be all powerful this guy...well when you finish reading the story then review cause you might be shocked at what this man has to do with naruto