Hi this is my first story please read and review!Well hear goes.
SQIURLFLIGHT POV
It had been moons sense Brambleclaw had talked, looked and gone on patrol with me. Firestar was extremely sick and on his last life the clan was worried. It's just pat sunrise and brambleclaw had just finished sending out the patrols for the day he gave every body else a hunting or border patrol "What about me?" I asked," can we go hunting? He thought for a heartbeat then replied,"fine we can go hunting". He actually said 'yes' well kind of at least it's better than nothing. At least he talked to me.
Brambleclaw's pov
I had sent out all the patrols for the day when sqiurlflight asked" What about me?" Umm what do say to that liar? I don't want anything to do with her, well yes I still love her but she lied to me her old mate about leafpools kits calling them our kits."Can we go hunting?" she asked. It took me a few seconds to answer," Fine we can go hunting". Once out into the forest I headed towards the windclan border almost instantly I smelt vole, doping into a hunters crouch and crept forward. Scuffling in the grass was the plump vole. That would be big enough to feed daisy.
Wagging my hunches I pounced landing strait on the vole bitting its neck killing it instantly. Giving thanks to starclan I turned around to see sqiurlflight behind me sitting down. Then she said "We need to talk."
Thanks for reading the first chapter. If I can get at least 1 review I will continue writing this story.